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The Chronicles of Equis: The Moons Vengeance

by Canicus Palentine
Fantasy rewrite of the first episode of MLP FIM. Join Twilight, Apprentice of the Sun King Solaris, as she is thrust into a journey of self discovery, as she is called on to defeat the monstrous King of Shadows.

An attempt to put a fantasy spin on the first episode of MLP, to fix most of the shortcomings, and give each character more of a chance to shine then just a few minutes (also some characters are rule 63'd to balance out male and female characters and some places and characters have their names changed to fit the new setting) (And Note: This is not a word for word rewrite. Some important plot threads will be changed, including but not limited to the ending, so if you have fears of unoriginality, let me put those fears to rest. This story will follow the Pilot very loosely, and will work towards a more subtle and original conclusion.). Join Twilight Luisant (Sparkle), a Magus of considerable talent, and personal student of the Sun King Solaris of the Kingdom of Caer Vael, as she attempts to unravel the frightening mystery of the return of the King of Shadows, a monster said to have been so powerful, that even the powers of the light could not completely destroy him, instead, imprisoning him in the celestial body of the moon. Now, over a thousand years since his imprisonment, the King of Shadows threatens to return and spread an eternal darkness and winter over not just Caer Vael, but all lands beyond. Will this young Magus succeed where so many others have failed?

Teen
Incomplete
Adventure
Alternate Universe
Anthro
Dark
 

4551 words: Estimated 23 minutes to read

2 Chapters:

  1. Prologue 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1281
  2. Tales of a Lost Empire 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    3270