The Fall of The Ruler

by Brawny_Stomp_2

Rating: teen
Tags: Adventure, Human, Sad, Romance
Length: 3367

It's a story that isn't really good and this is my first time to make this kind of story

the Fall of the ruler:
Characters:
Brawny (OC): a pony that transformed by Chrysalis to help her to rule Equestria, and because of Alvin the plan was un successes, the plan got fail, and Equestria was ruled by Brawny himself, and he made the changeling to eat like ponies not loves
Alvin: a human that's travel in time and space, and the one that made Brawny
become a king of changeling by making him remember all about his friends, and Brawny is Alvin in human world, and Brawny is Alvin in pony world

Story description:
When the King Of the Crystal Empire ended with the light of love, the peace was created, but it was all wrong, Sombra ended but that's all wrong, the king never died, a part of his body, his horn was still left, the darkness still flows, and when the Queen of the Changeling came to him for a help , lke the mixed oil and water, they can't be one, but they'll make a great taste

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2014-10-07 13:48:24 UTC

Chapter one: The Mixed oil and water

The oil and the water, they can't be mixed , but if they tried they'll make a taste good of something but those words aren't true

11 years after left Karlia

"Hey Alvin it's time for checking my kingdom, " Brawny said, then  Alvin replied with sad face

"On my way"

"Alvin, what happened"

"1500 years I can't see her, and then I saw her with Kirlia form after that long, she's  evolved, and I left her again, I can't believe I made that decision, I made her happy, but...." Alvin stopped the words, and Brawny said

"Please it is already 11 years after that day, let's go I already got permission to go and you got one to from William" he said trying to cheer him up, and  Alvin replied

"Fine then, I'll change  my clothes"

"Seriously, you don't need to disguise"

"I disguised because of I hate when people knows me, who am I"

"I don't get it though"

"You'll get it, if you got bullied"

"You remind me of her"

"Who?"

"She's some pony that saved me, when some bullies attack me, I got a lot of hits and she recovers me, but I forgot her face and her mane because she covers my eyes that time, I still remember her voice though" he said, then Alvin looked at a photo and said

"These are pokemons that I have, but someone's missing" he said, then Brawny said

"Change your clothes ,now"

"Okay fine" he said, then he went inside his bottle and wore an armor, and said

"It's umm, like usually"

"And I know you since that incident"

"Well, let's not talk about it, now let's go" hesaid, then he opened the Portal Brawny and ALvin went inside it, with the rift of the transporter to aother world, and when they got into the world of theirs, he said

"So what would you like to do Dragon Hawk"

"I'm going to Canterlot, for telling you're back, King of changeling"

"Good, now I'm going to teleport" he said, then he's gone, And then he said

"Ugh after 5 years of non training I need to train again" he said, then Alvin though

"Or should I change this dialog to I instead of Alvin" he said, then he took a paper and wrote something, and Put it back

"Done"

Changed

"Okay now time to go to canterlot" I said, then I walked for a few minutes, when I saw 2 guards they looking at me and then I looked at them, I replied

"Soldier What's the status"

"Sir, 3 Days ago, we capture a brown pony, with a blue box, but we can't open it, he tried to get in so we under arrested him" I was surprised, but I tried to cover my surprise, so I asked again

"Did you ask that pony  his  name"

"Yes sir, and they said that he's the doctor, but he didn't tell us about his name, he said he's just the doctor" they said, then I just like surprised and said to myself

"Oh mah god, oh mah god" but I didn't express it or said it, so I asked

"Show me this pony, " I said, then he said

"Sir yes sir" he said, then we both went to the dungeon, but when we got to the prison we he's escaped, the guards started to panic and I said

"Is he hostile, or not"

"He isn't he didn't bring a weapon, or any kind of it

"and what  did he said"

"He said that Equestria needs him" he said, then I thought

"I don't think we need to capture him, our priority is to catch every pony that is dangerous for our civilians  , and I don't think we need to search for him, so I think you need to take your position back" I said, then the guard went back to his position, and I went back to my first plan to meet my girlfriend Celestia, aww yes, So anyway, I met her and then she said she want to talk, she sealed the room from voices, and of course we talking to each other and of course she asked this one big crappy question

"So Alvin do you remember that time when you rule me on the bed" she said, then I blushed and started to get sweaty, and then said

"Uu right you're umm cute that time"

"Oh so you want or not to do it again tomorrow"

"What can I say, I mean umm, I"

"Well if you have free time I'll give you some mission"

"Um-ugh-a, I mean yes of course it will be so great" I said, but inside my heart I'm said

"Why?" I thought, I always thought why did I take her to the country side and then she accidently saw a horse freaking doing it infront of her

"So anyway, it will be a good time, but for now you'll guard my room with Captain Don satch today night" she said, then I said to her

"Wait you want me to guard with him"

"Yes after a pony screamed that Equestria need him, I think somepony special needs to guard it, so I choose you" she said to me, well still it's a good reason though, if there's the doctor, there's a trouble, but what is it, so I left the room for getting ready because it was getting dark, so I took my magic quiver , it full of arrow, and I took my sword, although I'm the captain of archery, it doesn't mean I'm not using it,  and so that night I guard the door, and of course I'm loyal to my own GF, and so on, I stood  next the door, not moving, and then Don said

"Hey Dragon Hawk, tell me a joke I'm bored man"

"..."

"Dude, Celestia isn't looking at us"

"..."

"Oh C'mon"

"*Sign*I'll patrol around here, Please take my position for a moment" I said, then I went to the bench looking around and then I saw the throne, I saw it's very dark, it covers black, so I thought

"There's something wrong" I said, then I went back to my position, and then  I said

"Captain there's something wrong in the throne, I need to quick check that place "

"Wait, what"

"Just do it, why did the princess make you become a captain of swordsponies, look, I found something weird and that's that, I want you to take my lead" I said, then he went to bad mood, I don't really care about that, he isn't that correct when the princess isn't there he isn't guard her really good, so I went outside and then I found 2 guards patrolling and then I said

"Guards follow me I want to check on something"

"Umm okay sir" they said, I went to the throne, and I saw the bat ponies on the ground, I saw the bat ponies ( Luna's guard) lay on the ground,  they fainted, I'm surprised and the guards also surprised, I quickly command them

"You, quickly find a medic, you ,report this situation to Princess Celestia, wake her up, Go" I said, then they ran, I held my bow, and I took one arrow, and I ran, I slow down when I saw a big black thing, I ran, I heard Nightmare moon's voice, I believed it's Luna's voice, so I quickly tried to shot the black thing, and my bow quickly and it was burned, I was surprised, I thinking what's that black thing, it's like a big dome, and I heard a wind sound, but it wasn't a wind, I looked back and I saw black mist, I quickly took my bottle, and threw it to the farest way, I'm a genie, and I will be pulled by my bottle if I and my bottle is having a far distance, so was pulled but my armor isn't okay, and I said

"Name yourself"

"King Sombra" he said, I'm surprised, and I saw Sombra's eyes with his horn, I quickly said

"I, I thought you are..."

"Yes the ponies say that I'm dead, but NO" he said, then Alvin took an arrow, and said

"You'll surrender now, Or you'll be harmed" I said, then  I aimed him , and he replied

"Pity, that thing won't hurt me" he said, I shot him once, it went through him, I was surprised, and then he started to attack me, I went back, and then I said

"You made your decision, and I made mine" I said that, with me that's a hater of wasting time, I took a bow, and then aim him once again,

"Fool, I told you, you can't..." he stopped talking and then he saw the spot that I shot is bleeding, and I replied

"You are the one that's a fool, I've a lot of arrow type, and this is the great one for attacking evilness is the arrow of Love I called it, it was made in Crystal Empire, and it's very effective for you" he said, then Sombra said

"Well then, let's have a battle" he said, then he made his own bow with dark Crystal, and then he took the arrow, and became a normal form of pony

"The arrow you give me is part of darkness, which is mean going to kill you if it gets hit you, foolish genie" he said, I can't believe I never did think that, and he took my other normal arrow, I quickly took an arrow, the Love one, I aimed at him and he aimed at me I aimed his head,I think I need to end him very fast if I want to help Luna, then Sombra said

"In count of 3" he said, then I became worried, and then I shot him, and he shot me, and the arrow to him got his neck but he didn't stop, he shot one more and it made my bottle scratched, I was surprised he hit my bottle, I felt dizzy after that, he laughed, and he pulled my arrow from his neck and then he got recovered, and he said

"I told you, fool genie, I am unbeatable, and you arrows probably suck my magic, but it won't kill me" he said, then He went to the dome, I was almost fainted, I took my another arrow

"I hope this castle won't collapse" I said, I actually took an arrow that has a TNT, I lit the fuse and then shot the ground 5 cm from the dorm, and it exploded, and the dome was opened, my vision was getting blurry, until she were fighting as nightmare moon, but she has fallen, he got stabbed by Sombra's horn, and then silver blood came out from her body, and she looked at me, and she said

"Say sorry to my sister" she said in front of me, and then Sombra was gone, I tried to reach her hooves and said

"Your highness, please don't go" I said, but my voice's volume getting fader, "Your highness, ...Luna please.." then I fainted, the next day, I woke up in the Celestia's room inside my pot, I woke up as my Dragon hawk captain disguise, I was thinking what just happened, then I remembered

"PRINCESS LUNA" I said, then I saw my quiver and my bow, I went out from my  bottle, and ran and when I was outside the room a guard surprised, and I said

"Guards where's Princess Celestia"

"She's on the throne" he said, then I ran quickly, saw a door I quickly opened it, and I saw Luna inside a coffin and we saw a purple pony, I was surprised, until my tears went out, I walked slowly, and I can't believe what just happened, I was thinking what should I tell Celestia I quickly said

"Pri-princess Celestia, Princess Luna request me to tell you something" I said,, then she looked at me and said

"What is it" she asked then I replied

"I'm apologies for what did I do, I can't protect her highness, I-I, I mean she said that she wants me to say this words to you, I'm sorry" he said, then Celestia looked down and Celestia asked

"I think you know who's attacking her" he said, but I didn't hear it because I cried when I saw Luna's dead body, and she asked am I alright, and then I said

"Yes, Princess, I am, it's Sombra,

Part 2 will be about the Changeling king, The fall of ruler of changeling

Chapter 2: The Fall of the Changeling King

"What a beautiful day Isn't dirakai"

Yes it is, your Majesty, the sky isn't cloudy and it's blue clean"

"Wow, just wow" Brawny replied

"Sir, I need to ask sir, we got a lot of changelings we are the most populated country in the world, how did you make this country this big"

"Somethimes I don't know the answer" Brawny said, then he said, then A changeling came and said

"Your majesty you got a letter" he said, then he read it

"Dear King of Changeling, We have a terrible event this morning, Luna was under attack, and she has fallen,  and we would like you to see her" Brawny surprised, and then he said

"What?, but how" he said, then he went to his chair, and wrote

"Dear Princess Of Equestria, I'm sorry to hear that, I'll be there as soon as possible" then he looked around, his guard is gone, Brawny surprised, then he said

"What's going on here" he said, then his room is covered with black wall, he surprised and then he heard someone's laughing

"Who's there, show yourself"

"Well, well well, King of changeling, nice to meet you" he said, then Brawny replied

"Who are you"

"I'm King Sombra"

"King Sombra !,

"I know you, but what do you want"

"Well I'm doing my job, and that's killing you"

"How dare you" Brawny said said, then Sombra disappear, and he punched from back, and Brawny knocked down, and he punch him again, Brawny looked at what he did, and he said

"ENOUGH" he said, then he became his final form, and Sombra said

"Well it is your final form, this will be very interesting" he said, then he teleported on Sombra's back, and kicked him, he knocked but before he hit the ground Brawny teleported to Sombra's back and kick him again, and he teleported himself again and stomped his head and Sombra turned to shadow, and then said

"Well your power sure is very big, now let's have the true battle" he said, then he became pony again, then he became smoke, then he hit Brawny so hard, and then he used flash, Sombra couldn't see that time because it's too bright , he teleported again and then he looked at the door sealed with dark Crystal, he tried to destroy it, but it made Sombra noticed him, he looked at him again, and then he said ran to the center of the room, by casting some attack to him, but it didn't nothing to him, so he asked

"Enough, why are you doing this, the crystal empire has nothing to do with my kingdom" he said, then a figure in the darkness is saying

"But I Think it has something" a voice said, then A changeling, Chrysalis came up

"No that's impossible, when did you?"

"escaped the prison?, a few days ago" she said, then without noticing it, he got a hit and his horn was broken, and his leg was held by some dark Crystal he can't move, he changed form because his horn got broke, and then he said

"Wait, is that mean you are the one that kill Luna"

"Well it's not, it's Sombra" he said, then Brawny replied

"but...But,..."

"Well I'm your queen as well as your mother, I'm thinking that you made me disappointed you are one of the most disgusting creation that I've ever done"

"You're the one that was chosen me from a normal pony, and why did you pick me"

"I've a better question why won't you say a few words before we end you" he said, Brawny looked down, and said

"Then let me send my last letter..... your highness" then she replied

"Well then I'll give you only one hoof to write a single letter" then She asked Sombra to make one of his hoof released and then she gave him a quill, ink, paper, and he started to write down something

"Dear Celestia, Alvin, Twilight and the others, I'll say a few words, first of all Princess Celestia I'm apologies for not coming to your kingdom, you've made me a great pony and also a great leader, I'm apologies  for making you feel bad in the past, you'll know why I'm not going to your kingdom, Twilight you taught me something that Important, you taught me about friendship, and I don't know about it very well at the first time, And thank you for hit my face that time with the door, Spike take a good care of Twilight, Pinkie Thank you for aid me when I'm sad, and makes crazy parties like I never see before, and Rarity, you taught me about stuff that I don't know, about beauty and another thing, generosity, and of course Applejack, you remind me of my father a hard worker, I hope you'll be in luck with the others, as for Rainbow dash, your sonic Rainboom made me happy, and you made me see the colour of it, as for Fluttershy, I'm sorry, and these words just for you, search for a book about dark spell, from Brawny Stomp your friend" he wrote it and gave it to him Chrysalis and she sent it with the green match, and he said

"So what are you waiting for Sombra" he said, he was afraid of death, he was sweaty, and then Sombra said

"It will be an honor" he said, the Sombra was stopped by Chrysalis and she said

"No I want to do this" she said, then Brawny looked down and then took a deep breath, and Brawny said

"Fine then  do it" he said with his heart that's afraid of death, he said

"I'm sorry my child, I can't continue my duty" he said, then Chrysalis's horn was darker than before, then she ran towards him, Brawny tried to open his eyes for his last day, but he was scared and he closed his eyes, after a sound of someone stabbed, he opened his eyes with Chrysalis's horn was inside his chest, he felt a pain and then he opened his mouth, his mouth spits some blood, and he said

"Why?" he said, then he lay down on the ground the black Crystals was gone after he killed, and the guards went in, they surprised with their king was lay down on the floor with blood, with Sombra and Chrysalis was looking at him and then Chrysalis saw the guard and said

"Guards"

"Wait-wait what just happened" they asked, they confused

"Announce that our king is dead" she said, they surprised and then they cried, and Chrysalis screamed

"NOW" she said, then they ran and then closed the door, she giggle then she laughed for what she did, and then she went to Brawny's throne and she said

"Ah finally, the place where should I belong" he said, then Sombra replied

"Enough of it, I already done what did you asked, now I want you to help me" he said then Chrysalis sat on the throne and he said

"I know, 3 more days we'll attack them"

"Why did you want to attack them 3 more day"

"Because I think I want to make surprise them" she said, then he replied

"What do you mean"

"The Human will die if Brawny die"

"Who is this creature that I've never heard" he asked, then she giggled

"You don't need to do that, when that human has fallen, we can take over Equestria with ease, and with tons of my changeling  attacking their kingdom, she giggled,