Trouble at the Finish Line
Rarity gets more than she bargains for when she allows Applejack and Rainbow Dash to compete over writing an enchanted comic book for Twilight's birthday gift.
Why is it that everypony struggles to finish a story properly? Rarity finds out the hard way when she asks Applejack and Rainbow Dash to write their own separate narratives for an enchanted comic book to give to Twilight on her birthday. But Instead of focusing on what Twilight would want, Applejack and Rainbow Dash are determined to out-write each other with literary pizazz. There're common problems in both mares' stories, and Rarity must find a way to fix them both... through Rainbow Dash and Applejack, if need be. After all, this is totally about Twilight... ... ... isn't it?
12620 words: Estimated about 1 hour to read
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9 Chapters:
- Space Prism and Lavender Light Take On the Galactic Goblins! 2014-10-08 08:09:21 UTC2576
- Rainbow's Turn 2014-10-08 09:58:17 UTC2335
- Cinnamon Dust and Sandy Sparkles Lay Their Lives Down in Whinny Gulch 2014-10-08 10:00:14 UTC1976
- Applejack's Turn 2014-10-08 09:59:59 UTC1271
- Appledash's Turn 2014-10-08 10:00:53 UTC1063
- The Frilly Fluffy Follies of Rainbow Darling and Applefuzz 2014-10-08 10:01:36 UTC1244
- Rarity's Turn 2014-10-08 10:02:11 UTC987
- Sparkle Lavender Light Saves the Universe and Everypony In It! 2014-10-08 10:02:43 UTC459
- Happy Birthday, Twilight! 2014-10-08 10:03:06 UTC709