A Not Quite Pleasant Surprise

by Doodle Dragon

Rating: teen
Tags: Alternate Universe, Romance, Adventure
Length: 1970

I another universe, Fluttershy accidently shows her friends her true self.

Rated teen because there is some scenes that some might find disturbing later in the story. In this fic Fluttershy is a changling and the mane six finds out, and also later in the chapter Fluttershy has a secret admirer that she tries to find out.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2014-11-02 02:43:52 UTC

Mum?

It took her a few days, but when Fluttershy reached the badlands she looked all over the badlands, until she saw a changeling. "Um excuse me? Have you seen my mother?" the changeling replied in a broken voice, and what Fluttershy could see, part of his jaw was gone. So that could be the reason, for the way he talked. "Sur' who is sh'?" "The Queen Chrysalis" "*cough* *cough* Sur' I've seen her! Quic' com' wit' me!" They ran until they both saw the throne empty. "Where is she?" "Sh's in her persano' cav' "Can I see her?" "Sur' but you gott'a as' the guards" He pointed to a few guards guarding a entrance to a cavern."May I ask, what is your name?" "M' nam'? It's Jacko" "Well Jacko I shall have a good word put in for you, since you returned me to my mum... kind of..." Th-thank you princes'! I wish you great luc'!" "Thank you Jacko, I hope we meet again!"

He walked off waving back to her, she waved to him then turned to the guards, and headed in their direction. "HALT! Who goes there?" "May I see my mum please?" "*chuckle* Who is she?" "Chrysalis" "*laugh* Nice try kid" "Can I at least see her?" "No. So get lost!" The first guard poked Fluttershy with his weapon. "Please?" "We already said no! so GET LOST!" The second guard swiped at Fluttershy with his weapon, striking her in her shoulder. ?"YYYYYAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!" A high pitched scream before she backed off holding her shoulder in pain. Chrysalis came running out and shoved through the guards, zooming to her daughter and hugging her tight.

"I though I would never see you again Angel Wing. Also, what happened to you? Why are you here? How are you here? WHO HURT YOU?!?!?!?" Fluttershy pointed to the guards saying "They hurt me. But also I came here because everypony found out. Also I came here to live with you, but I would have been lost and possibly got eaten by something or someone, if it weren't for Jacko. He was the only one that believed me when I first got here" Chrysalis strangled the guards in her magic grasp before using her magic to heal her daughter, and calling two guards. One to clean up the bodies. The other to get Jacko here.

"Wha, ever I di' you' highnes' I am sorr'!" He said bowing. But instead of being in trouble, Chrysalis hugged him and thanked him for bringing her daughter back to her.

What do YOU ponys want?

TWILIGHT'S POV

Twilight decided to check Fluttershy's cabin. She found the note, read it, and though 'Chrysalis is there! OH NO Fluttershy? Oh no no no no no no! FLUTTERSHY! What do I do what do I do?!?!?!?! Um............. OK I'll tell the others and then we'll go after her! Yeah, yeah that'll work...' Twilight raced off to tell the others...

FLUTTERSHY'S/ANGEL WING'S POV

She walked into the cavern and looked around. There was a few table and chairs, a crystal providing light, a lever 'Probably for the light...' she though. There was also a bed, it had a small crystal light with a tiny lever. She sighed and crawled under the covers. 'A new start... A new life...' She thought, before drifting off to sleep.

THE OTHER'S POV

"Who knew that her mother was banished?" "I know right?!?" "Ah' wonder what her mother did?" "It would have to be something most DREADFUL if she were to be banished to the BADLANDS for Celestia's sake!" "I wonder too girls... I wonder too..." They galloped off to the badlands chattering away...

JACKO'S POV

A few days later. Hm hmmmmm hmm hm hmmmmm hmmm... Huh??" Jacko saw ponys galloping in on the edge of the badlands. He ran to them and said "Wha' do YO' pon's' wan'?" Twilight said nervously "Have you seen our friend? She has a light pale yellow coat with a light pink mane? Her name is Fluttershy?" Jacko coughed before saying "I shal' as' som'on' I kno' wai' here" Jacko raced off and he ran up to the caverns. "HALT! Who goes there?" "I hav' urgent news fo' th' princess's ears only!" They let him past. He flew as fast as he could into the cavern of Angel Wing/Fluttershy. "Fluttershy? Ther' ar' ponys askin' fo' yo' outsid' the badlands" "Oh my! OK thank you I need to go! Oh wait! Can you lead me to them? "Of cours' you' highnes'" They ran out and to her friends...

"Hey your not Fluttersh-"

FLUTTERSHY'S/ANGEL WING'S POV

"Her' they ar' you' highnes'!" Fluttershy walked up to them with a disappointed, angry, sad, and betrayed look on her face. "You are excused Jacko. Kindly would you leave? This is going to be a private talk." "Yes yo' highnes'" He left. Fluttershy hissed violently at her friends before saying "What do you all want with me-" "ALL THE OTHER CHANGELINGSS ARE BLACK! I AM FLUTTERSHY!....... Why don't you get that?" A tear slid down her face. Fluttershy looked to the ground before looking up sadly and saying "For those who believe I am Fluttershy say 'I' for those who don't say 'neigh'" Another tear "I" "I I I I I I IIIII!" Pinkie waved her hoof in the air rapidly. "I!" "NEIG-" Twilight cut her off. "i" "*sigh* I" "Good. Now that you know it's me, I just want to let you know that I am living here now" "WHAT?" "You can't-" "This place is icky-" "Why can't we just continue our normal lives-" While everypony chattered away, Twilight thought. "QUIET!" Everypony shut up. "Ok. So. Who is your mother Fluttershy?" "Swear not to tell a single soul?"

Cross my heart and hope to fly stick in my eye!

"Now why did we have to do that? *snicker" "Is she that bad?" Fluttershy glared and hissed loudly at Rainbow, quieting her. "2 things! 1.She's not bad! And 2. It's Queen Chrysalis." "That big meanie?" Fluttershy hissed loudly in Pinkie's face. "sorry..." Silence. "How did you survive in Ponyville? I mean, your a changeling, don't they eat love? "Yes but we can choose other choices, but it's healthier for us to eat love. That was also why i was a slow and weak flyer, i haven't had a decent meal in weeks! But now i can relax with me family. So scoot, go back home. Tell everyone, i don't care" They all said their goodbyes and walked off.

Fluttershy sighed and looked down, shaking her head before chuckling. She walked back, but as she walked back she turned her head, and looked at her friends galloping home. She smirked. "Curiosity always killed the cat..." She laughed...

A Decent Meal (WARNING: somepony dies, may be disturbing, but not much :WARNING)

Fluttershy was in the forest, stalking something that was emitting lots of love. She came close, before stopping and peering over the bush she was hiding behind. It was a pony, a male white pegasus with a white mane. His mane had light blue tips, and he had even lighter blue eyes. His cutie mark was a pair of headphones, they were green. The pony looked scared and was franticly looking around and wandering, she assumed he was lost. "Are you lost?" She said grabbing the pegasus in her magical grasp. "Ye-yes! Can you help me?" The white pegasus said, struggling in her magic grasp. She chuckled, and asked "My little pony what is your name?" "My name is Alosk... Um... May I ask.. Who are you?" She smirked. "Me? I'm Fluttershy!" *change pov* Alosk was a little relived hearing this familiar name. But she looked very different. He asked "What happened to you Fluttershy?" he gulped, being a little bit scared by her new look. *change pov* Fluttershy looked at him, and said "Oh, nothing happened to me. I may look different, but that's because I was never really a pony..." She used her magic to push him to the ground, so she could pounce on him. "*gulp* W-what e-e-exactly are you?" He said shaking. "A changling... And you my little pony are the first meal of love, I have had in more than 17 years!" She said licking her muzzle. "C-can't you e-eat something else that h-has love?" She closed in on him, forehead to forehead. She hissed quietly in a amusing way. "Nnope" She backed away quickly like a cobra or snake ready to strike, and opened her mouth revealing 4 large fangs, on her top and bottom jaws, two each. *change pov* Alosk winced and waited for pain, but instead felt like he was losing a part of him, he felt his heart empty and saw a green mist coming off of him and into her mouth. He passed out. *change pov* "MmmMMMmmmmmmmmmmMMMMMmmm! *licks her muzzle* *smacks her lips*" She savored the flavor of love before picking up a black bottle with holes in it, with a glowing green cork. She opened it and the rest of the love went from him, to the bottle in a green mist, killing him. She closed the bottle and trotted off until she reached the desert, then she flew back home.

I AM HER!

It was the moment Chrysalis was being defeated by Princess Cadence, and Shining Amour. Fluttershy was watching the energy shield get bigger and bigger, she was afraid... more afraid then she had ever been before. Chrysalis too saw this coming, and very quickly put a high level magic shield around Fluttershy, cloaking her in a green bubble. Everpony started at where Fluttershy was standing before a big flash of bright light, Chrysalis and her army being thrown into the badlands, and a very weak and unconscious Fluttershy laying on the ground, with little green electric sparks coming off from her body. " FLUTTERSHY! " everypony yelled in unison, as they rushed towards her.

  Fluttershy woke up in a cage. "Wha-What happened?" Fluttershy looked around quickly before, she saw her friends behind her. "Can I please have some hel-" Rainbow interrupted her "No. You won't get any help you changeling! Now tell us where Fluttershy is! Rainbow banged on the cage. Fluttershy knew it now. They had found out. It was over. All over... Fluttershy changed to her normal self... her normal changeling self... then backed away from her friends as much as possible before turning around, sitting down, and sobbing. "Nice try! But we see right through that show your puttin' on!" Applejack said before biting her bottom lip and scuffing her hoof on the ground.

Fluttershy slowly began to stop crying, she stood up and faced her friends. She glared with a betrayed look on her face. "How nice friends I USED to have... Was there any other changeling that looked like me?!? LOOK AT ME!! I LOOK LIKE MYSELF!!! A-AND I AM FLUTTERSHY! BUT YOU Don't have to believe me.. NOPONY DOES!!! NOPONY!! NOPONY HAS TO SEE ME AGAIN!!! Fluttershy used her pale yellow horn and began to perform a explosive spell, though it didn't work. "Anti-Magic Spell!" Twilight said proudly. Fluttershy became over raged and began to buck the cage door, and kept bucking it until it let loose and landed on Twilight. Fluttershy rushed out, galloping over Twilight in the process.

She flew faster and faster back to her cottage and said goodbye to all her critter friends... then she had an idea. She took a piece of paper and wrote

'Dear Friends,

I couldn't go to the Canterlot wedding because I had to visit my mother, therefore I am going to the badlands. Thanks for understanding!

                                     Love,

                                               Your Dear Friend,

                                                                               Fluttershy'

She left it on the table before leaving and flying as fast as she could to her mother... Chrysalis...