Fluttershy's revenge

by Skiddlez

Rating: teen
Tags: Dark, Romance, Crossover
Length: 895

Fluttershy get revenge on Big Macintosh for falling for Cheerilee

Fluttershy always had a crush on Big Macintosh, but ever since he fell in love with Cheerilee her feelings toward hi became… different. She calls on some help to get back at Big Macintosh.

*This is my first fanfic I've ever written so criticism helps :)

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2012-04-23 08:21:16 UTC

Fluttershy's Revenge

Big Macintosh and Cheerilee both lay down next to each other and observed the beautiful night sky.

"This is beautiful, isn't it?" Cheerilee said, turning towards Big Mac.

"Eeyup." He replied in his typical fashion.

Ever sice the cutie mark crusaders tricked them into loving each other on hearts and hooves day, they decided to start an actual relationship and started to legitimately love each other. They've already gone to the movies, enjoyed a quiet afternoon in the park and spent a day at an amusement park.

Little did they know that their relationship was going to take an unexpected twist.

Not too far away, spying on them both on a nearby hill was Fluttershy, she secretly had a crush on Big Macintosh ever since the day she met him at one of Pinkie's parties. The same could be said for Big Mac, but that all changed when he fell in love with Cheerilee.

When Fluttershy heard about Big Mac and Cheerilee all she wanted was to get revenge on both of them, Cheerilee for stealing her love, and Big Mac for ditching her.

Fluttershy lowered her binoculars she was using and picked up a walkie-talkie and started speaking into it.

"Hello? ……Yes ……….. That's right ……….Bring him tonight, at the Apple's house …….Good, over."

She put down the walkie-talkie, turned it off, packed up her other things and flew into the distance.

Later that night, Big Macintosh and Cheerilee arrived at the Apple's house.

"Thank you Big Mac, tonight was fantastic." She said.

"Is there any reason it has to end?" Said Big Mac.

Cheerilee picked up on what he was saying and followed him inside, both being careful not to wake up anypony and headed to Big Mac's room.

Big Mac's room was nothing too special; all he had was a wardrobe, a double bed and a small recliner in the corner of the room.

He opened the door and were both surprised as to what they saw.

They both stared at Big Mac's recliner, to which they found someone sitting in. Despite his room being pitch black, beside from the moonlight from the windows, they could tell because of the small glow of the lit cigarette between its fingers.

That's right, fingers, that meant that this person was not a pony, and that surprised them even more.

The person threw the cigarette away and stood up to face them both, still unable to see him clearly.

"Who are you?" Big Macintosh asked angrily.

"You two wouldn't happen to be Big Macintosh and Cheerilee, would you?" The person asked, ignoring Big Mac's question.

"H-How do you know who we are? And how did you get in here?" Big Mac asked, feeling a little intimidated.

The person took a step forward revealing himself in the moonlight. He had light green skin, or more correctly, fur, he wore a deep green army jacket and beret with the same colour, but the freakiest part about him was his face, he had an evil grin reaching from ear to ear and his teeth were very sharp. His eyes were a luminous yellow and looked at Big Macintosh and Cheerilee with them as if he was going to kill them.

Big Mac and Cheerilee both stared at him completely shocked as they watched him as he grabbed a large bowie knife from his back pocket and pointed it at them.

"You said you wanted to know who I was," He started, "Some call me the infamous green bear, others call me a simple murderer, or a war hero, but you can call me… Flippy."

Without warning, Flippy lunged at Big Mac, stabbing him in the chest; he then ran the knife up through his neck and his head, killing Big Macintosh instantly. Flippy laughed menacingly as he watched Big Mac's corpse fall to the ground with a thud, blood gushing everywhere.

Cheerilee screamed and ran out into the hallway, Flippy chased after her and quickly caught up to her. He jumped on top of her, stabbing her in the back, he then held her head back and slit her throat. He laughed evilly again; he then slid his bowie knife back into his back pocket and climbed out the nearest window.

Flippy walked into the apple orchard and soon found Fluttershy, who was standing under a nearby tree.

"I kept my end of the deal, so where's yours?" Flippy said.

Fluttershy reached behind her and grabbed a black briefcase and gave it to Flippy. He opened the briefcase and chuckled joyfully to find the $1,000,000 he had been waiting for. He then closed the briefcase and looked back to Fluttershy.

"Naturally, you are to tell no one what happened here." Flippy said.

"I understand." Fluttershy replied.

"Good" He said. Flippy then walked of into the distance with the briefcase, leaving Fluttershy by the tree.

Fluttershy walked into the Apple's house to survey the damage that Flippy had caused. She walked up to Big Macintosh's still bleeding corpse.

"I'm sorry Big Macintosh," Fluttershy said. "But you broke my heart, and I couldn't let you get away with that."

*Thanks for reading! As I said before this is my first fanfic I wrote so please give me criticism, positive or negative because both helps!

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