The CMC go to Jail for Murder

by Luna T Nox

Rating: teen
Tags: Cutie Mark Crusaders, Twist, Diamond Tiara, Slice of Life, Babs Seed, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Alternate Universe, Anthro, Romance, Silver Spoon
Length: 1264

Another schoolyard rumble between Diamond Tiara & Silver Spoon and the Cutie Mark Crusaders leads to a night in a jail cell.

The CMC and their bullies are at each other's throats again. What was originally a schoolyard cat-fight has become a night of horror. When Snips & Snails become sandwiched between the the fists of the fight's combattants. Now all four of the CMC are all in one juvenile jail cell with Diamond Tiara & Silver Spoon. Can this day get any worse?

Cover Art and it's description was the inspiration for this fic
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Teen for Explicit Language

I felt the gore tag was unneeded as the first chapter is just the only occurrence of violence in the fic. Also I didn't tag this as comedy. Because while I'm mean it to be "look back and it's funny" I wasn't meaning for it to funny on reading.

Published 2017-03-31 21:40:01 UTC
Last updated 2017-03-31 21:40:01 UTC

A "little" School House Brawl (with fixed cliffhanger)

Scootaloo was racing down the path to Ponyville High. She was in a rush to the school, not because she was late, but because she wanted to have as much time with her fillyfriend; Sweetiebelle, before the first bell rang. Scoots was almost to the school and as usual she had the urge enter the schoolyard with style. She watched for the 2-foot wide path, she made freshman year, that lead to a hidden ramp. Using both her foot and wings to pick-up speed when she caught sight of the path. She crouched a little before hitting the ramp; and shot-up as she launched off the ramp and over the tall hedge, hiding the ramp. At the peak of her jump she scanned the jump’s normal landing zone, only to notice Diamond Tiara standing at the tip of her normal stopping point. Well better be good on the landing, lest deal with Diamond’s wrath With that thought in her head she landed straight, then whipped the scooter sideways; hitting the brake in the motion, and slid pushing a dust cloud in front of her and hoping with all her luck to not hit Diamond Tiara. She stopped and rose to a standing position with the extra momentum. The dust cloud was now dissipating in all directions. And the results are…

“What the hell?! You flightless pegasus!” Diamond Yelled as the dust cloud revealed who caused it.

“I was doing my best not to hit you. You pig!” Wailed Scoots back at Tiara for the ‘flightless’ remark. “And, unless I’m mistaken, I succeeded in doing just that.”

“Well congratulations on your goal” came back Diamond Tiara sarcastically “But moron, you also succeeded in covering both me and Silver Spoon in filth”

“Well sorry if your not used to being covered in the same dirt you covered me and my friends in as foals!” Shot back Scoots even colder

“Hey! I thought we agreed to forget past transgressions during freshman year?” Diamond retorted at the accusation

“Yeah!” Silver shouted for emphasis

“You may have gotten AB and Sweetie to agree, but I never did” Scoots replied harshly

At this point the conversation started to degrade. It would have probably increased in its speed of degradation had Sweetie Belle not shown up. She saw Scootaloo’s entrance into the schoolyard and started over when Scootaloo didn’t immediately start over to her when the dust cleared.

Having heard Scootaloo’s last words Sweetie grabbed Scootaloo’s shoulder. “Scoot’s that agreement included you. You have no right to re-neg now. So can we please…”

“No!” Scootaloo shouted interrupting Sweetie and shaking her hand from her shoulder “I’m tired of having to deal with Diamond and Silver’s high&mighty attitudes”

“They may be still annoying, but we agreed to put the past behind us” Sweetie reminded.

“Yeah dodo! The past is in the past” Diamond added to Sweetie’s statement in a very arrogant voice.

“Hey what’s going on here?” Babs Seed piped in, having just made to the school, with her cousin Applebloom beside her. Both Apple family members looked at the situation with a bit of concern.

“Nothing you need to worry about guys. We were just leaving” Sweetie Belle answered attempting to drag Scootaloo away with her.

“I already said I wasn’t going to let this go!” Scootaloo shouted holding her position in front of Diamond Tiara. Sweetie stumbled a bit having once again losing her grip on her fillyfriend.

“What you actually want to go shrimp?!” Diamond shot at the tense face of the short winged pegasus standing in front of her. It would be fair say that Scootaloo was a few inches shorter than her tiara wearing antagonist.

With a little wind up of her arm and a shout of “Let’s Go!” Scootaloo threw a punch. Diamond began to throw a punch of her own. Both were soon grabbed and held back by their respective friends, Silver on Diamond and Sweetie & Applebloom on Scootaloo. Babs Seed having seen all this had started to chant.

With Babs loudly chanting “Fight! Fight! Fight!” other students in the yard started to crowd around the group. Some decided to chant along with Babs. Others just watched as the fillies were having difficulties restraining their friends.

Snips and Snails noticed the large commotion and pushed their way to the front. Having seen what was happening in the center, both decided to intervene and mediate the fight. They put themselves between the two groups of fillies, and held each combatant back from another. “Now hold on ladies. School is no place to be fighting.” Snips stated still helping to hold the groups apart.

Scootaloo backed down first, Diamond a moment later. “Fucking Bit” they both said just loud enough for all to hear. And with this very big insult all the girls swung a fist at the opposing offender. Snips and Snails put them selves even tighter between the groups. With a loud sound of fists hitting skull and skull hitting skull, Snips and Snails collapsed to the ground. What everyone around just witnessed was the six fillies fists slamming the colts heads together.

Twistaloo, who was in the crowd, ran to the boys. She checked both boys for a pulse and found none on either boy. “They both don’t have a pulse!” She yelled at the six fillies.

@->——(T_T)——<-@

Twenty minutes had passed since the fight had resolved and a teacher had now come out to break up the crowd. A pair of police officers had apparently been called to the scene. The six fillies were now sitting on a pair of benches in front of the school.

“Well girls, I just checked both of the colts pulses and they indeed don’t have any” The first officer told them with a stern face.

“Sorry fillies, but we must take you down to the department” The second added with slight empathy on their face.

Both officers lead the six very distressed fillies to their car. The six fillies some how managed to fit themselves in the back of the cruiser, Sweetie Belle was on top of Scootaloo and Diamond was on top Silver Spoon. The Apple cousins had some how managed to sit on either side of Scootaloo and Silver Spoon.

None of the fillies made a noise the whole way to the nearest precinct. They were all still in shock at what had happened. The officers lead all them to a cell in the basement of the precinct. The fillies shuffled into the cell. Diamond immediately headed to the bed, Silver sat on the floor in front of the bed. Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle sat on a burlap cloth, that seem to have been put down as a carpet in the cell, and just hugged each other. The Apple cousins laid against the wall facing the bed on the other side of the cell. The fillies just sat in the cell completely quiet.

@->----(T_T)----<-@

It was now late afternoon and the Ponyville Coroner was just now getting to the bodies of Snips and Snails. Just as he was about to uncover the first body, both bodies suddenly sat up on their tables. Looking around both Snips and Snails asked “Where are we?” The Coroner on his part just fainted to the floor.

Author's Note

Well here's the first chapter of a fic I hope to finish within five chapters.

Well I hope I can keep up this writing binge I've got myself on.

Anyways thanks for reading. As always any criticism is welcomed.