Mako's quest through equestsia

by MrMako

Rating: teen
Tags: Comedy, Adventure, Crossover
Length: 6538

Mako goes to equeststia by Atatosh's request

Mako has defeated Aludin and Akatosh asks Mako if wants more with helping him,Mako says yes and Akatosh sends him away.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2014-11-13 21:52:47 UTC

Chapter 3 Working for Applejack and Getting a house

      Time 5:00 AM *Mako wakes from a vivid dream and he wonders what it means* "What does this mean soon it will come..."  "Why Akatosh,why send me to a place where there is no wrong?" *Mako heads outside to the backside of the barn and practices flying* "Well lets see,I can move the wings well lets flap them like a bird" *Mako begins lift and then he falls on his face* "Ow!" "My face!"  "Well lets try that again" *Mako keeps practicing till morning* 8:00 AM *Applejack sees Mako flying* "Mako what are you doing?"

"Flying" "Well you better havn't tired yourself out" "I have not Applejack" "Well lets get to work" *Mako and Applejack walk too the apple orchard* "Well  what do we have too do Applejack?" "Well first we need to buck some apples into the buckles" "Ok" *Mako bucks the tree and 1 apple falls* Applejack bursts into laughter* "HAHAHHEHEHAH"

"Thanks" *So loving*  "Now that me show how to buck" *Applejack bucks the tree with all her might* *Almost all the apples on the tree fall into the bucket* See that is how you buck" *Mako tries again and almost finishs the tree* "Now see that is how you do it" "Thank you Applejack"  *They continue till about 3:00 PM and start working on the barn repair wise* "Well it times to work on repairs" "Why?"  "Well last month we had a hail storm,and it almost destroyed the barn and the house" "Yeah...I hate hail where I am from it hails all the time." "Speaking of which where all you from?" "I am from....well I am from the mountains,but I woke up in the Everfree Forest" *Huh....I hate lying*  *Help me Akatosh *Applejack seems suspicious  but she shrugs it off*  "And how did you meet Rarity,since I assume you met her then Sweetie Belle? "Well after I woke up,I walked out of the Everfree and I met Fluttershy doing her shyness bit,but I leaned her to tell me how to  get to a town which was here,then I saw Rarity and well ran up to her, then she ask me if I was thirsty which I was and the rest is history" *Well Applejack believes

  me now,thank Akatosh Cyrus taught me the facial expressions of lying and truthfulness...that was close*

*They finish up with

"Well Mako you have earned your 60 bits"

"Thanks Applejack"

*Mako now has in total 130 bits

Current Time 6:00

*After Mako leaves the farm ,he heads to Rarity's shop to ask for a room for the night*

*Knock knock knock* "Yes,oh it's you Mako" "HI Rarity I've come on...well  not so great times" "Why my dear?" "Well....I have no bed,mind if I spend the night?" "Of course you can Mako ,any thing for a friend" "Thank you Rarity,so very much" "Of course let me lead you into your sleeping area" *Mako and Rarity go into the shop and into the living quarters* "Mako!!!"  "Hello Sweetie Belle" "Why are you here so late Mako?" "Well Sweetie Belle I am having a "sleep over" " "Yay!"  *Mako feels bad for stressing Rarity* "Well Rarity where am I to sleep?" "Over there dear" *Mako crawls into the couch and relaxes * "Goodnight Rarity and Sweetie Belle" *Mako falls quickly to sleep*

5:00 AM

*Mako gets up and fixes the couch*

*Mako finds some paper and a writing implement  and writes*

"Dear Rarity I am sorry to bother for the night I won't bother I am going out now it is a few minutes till dawn but thank you,so very much."

*Mako leaves for the jarl's hall * "Well this is it,time to go in" A pony desk clerk says "Would you like to see the mayor for a house?" "Yes" "Well go into the office"

*Mako went into the mayor's office* "Hello what is you name?" "Mako" "Well we only have one house for sale" "Where is it?" "Right next to Rarity's" Well how much is it?" "30 bits" "I will take it" "Ok now sigh here" *After sighing 2 hours of paper work Mako now owns a house*

Time 7:00 am

*Mako heads to Rarity's shop to tell her the good news*

*Mako opens the and the door rings **ding ding*

"Mako why did you leave so earlier?" "Well I wanted to go buy a house and,now I have one,oh say next door" "Wow Mako we can see each other every day" "Yes Sweetie Belle we can" "'Well Rarity do you a mattress for sale?" Yes Mako I have my last one for 40 bits including a blanket,blanket and a pillow" "I will buy it Rarity and thank you"

"You are welcome dear"

*Mako carriers it all into his new house*

Too be continued.....

Chapter 4 meeting Pinkie Pie and Rainbow Dash,and preparing for a party

     *Mako sees a pink pony and walks out of his house and says to her Hi*  "Hi" "Hi hi never seen you around Ponyville" "Yeah I've been here for two days" "Only two why haven't I seen you?" "Well I've been at Applejack's" "Really did you meet Applejack?" "Yes" "Really what is your name?" "Mako,and yours?" "Pinkamena Diane Pie,but my friends call me Pinkie Pie" "Well what is your job Pinkie? "A baker and routine partier" "Nice" "Aren't you hungry?" "Yes Pinkie" "Well do you want some sweets for breakfast" "Sure" *Oh boy my stomach is going to hate me* *Mako and Pinkie walks into a restaurant* "Mr. and Mrs. Cake I am back" a frumpy blue pony says "Oh Pinkie you brought somepony with you?"

"Yes Mrs.Cake but,where is Mr.Cake?" " He is going for some ingredients for baking" *So Mr. and Mr.s Cake now* *Then a blue mare walks in and Mako remembers her from Scotaloo's picture* *It's her....* "Hi Rainbow Dash" "HI Pinkie" *So her name is Rainbow Dash* "Pinkie who is this somepony?" "Mako,he lives near Rarity's" "Oh hello Mako"

*Mako reads her body movements* *She seems to not trust me,for some reason* "Well how are you Rainbow Dash" "Good" *Mako,Pinkie and Rainbow Dash sit down at a table and Pinkie orders for them and when that is happening,Mako and Rainbow Dash talk* "So where are you from?" "The Mountains" "Really?" "Yes but I woke up in the Everfree Forest" "Such a great place to wake up in" "Yes indeed" "I got our orders" "Thank you Pinkie" "Same here" "Well Mako what are your interests?" "Making things,sewing,baking and making food"  "Well what food do you make?" "Soup,cakes,etc" "Your a baker too" "Yes Pinkie" "Well since you are new Mako you get your own first time in ponyville party" *A party....?* "Well where should we have it?" "Your house" Pinkie said *Mako and the girls finish there food and Mako heads out to get stuff for the party*

*Well what is the first thing to buy maybe a pot and some vegetables for the soup* "Mako sees a sellpony and asks do you have a large metal pot for sale?" "Yes I do for 5 bits"

*Mako buys it and now just needs vegetables and fruits* *Mako heads to Applejack's and asks if he can buy a barrel of cider and some apples* "Hello Mako what do you need to day?" "A barrel of cider and some apples" "20 bits for the barrel,wait no what for helping me couple days ago 10 bits for the barrel and the apples for 50 about 5 bits" "Well ten bits for one barrel and for ten bits 100 hundred apples" "Deal" *Mako and Applejack exchange items and Mako walks to his house to start to cook* "Well what to make first?" "The juice" "Darn it I forgot to buy other fruit" *Mako has to buy other fruit first* *Mako heads into the marketplace again*  *And sees a pony selling bunches of fruit* "Hello what kind of fruit do you have for sale?" a red pony says "Cherries,peaches,grapes and blueberries for 10 bits for 20 of each" *Mako and the red pony exchange items* *Now to home...again* *Mako walks his house,now to make it for real*  *Mako grabs a bowel he bought with the pot and a spoon,Mako crushed the grapes into the bowel,then cut the cherries and crush them to into the bowel Mako continues this until he is ready for the soup * "Time to mix the juices" *Mako mixes it and tastes it* "Imm.....good" "Time for the soup" *Mako noticed no fire wood* "Dang it again" *Mako walks to sees a pony selling wood and he asks "How much is the wood?" "5 Bits" "Deal" *Mako now exchanges items again* *And walks back to his house again* "I feel like I am in Skyrim again" "Sky-what" *Mako's face went limp* "Nevermind Pinkie Pie" "Okie dokie,just wanted to see how far you came with the food and all" "Well I've got the drink done but ,I am now working on the soup" "May I help?" "Sure I was going to bake too"

*PInkie lounges on a chair* "Nice chair Mako" "Thanks" *Mako starts the fire and then he puts the kettle or pot on it" "What kind of soup are you making?" "Vegetable soup" "Ohhh" *Mako sees the water start to boil and wow it is boiling he sits down on his bed* "Well how are you Pinkie?" "Good,happy to see a new pony"  *Yeah Pony more like Khajiit* *Mako sees that is done and gets up to add the stock* "How old are you Mako?" "17" "Oh you are 1 year older then me"  *Mako adds the vegetables and spices* "Well the soup is pretty much done" "Why?" "Well you have to let it sit" "Cake?" "No,sorry we can make it tomorrow but, if we go to sleep now we will wake earlier enough" "Can I sleep over" "Sure" *Oh dear Akatosh,what next shes want to lay with me* "Can I lay with you?" "Yes" *WHY!!!!!* *Mako and Pinkie lay down and a large bed as Mako lays as far away as he can from her in respect* *Oh why Akatosh * *Then Pinkie comes closer and puts her front leg over him* *Akatosh help me* "Yawns-goodnight Mako" "Goodnight Mako" "Goodnight Pinkie" *Shes nice and all but if she is trying to hit on me she is laying on way too hard* *Mako drifts into sleep and Pinkie squeezes harder*

"Mako you will see what lies ahead" "Stop it Akatosh stop leading me into Oblivion" "Mako you fool just listen" "You will see in the future and Pinkie might have a reason for being close" "She will open up if you will about everything" "Why,want them to become suspicion" "They won't become can't say anymore" "TELL ME AKATOSH!" *Mako wakes  from a vivid dream,and he still in Pinkie arms* *Mako turns around on the bed and sees Pinkie smile*

Too be continued.....

Chapter 5 See more into Pinkie's mind,making a cake and meeting more people

   *Mako sees it is about 6:30 and tries to get but Pinkie is trying to keep him there* *Jeez tight grip I see,well let try to get out* *Mako silently gets out of Pinkie's arms and gets up to start the cake* *Mako gets up and walks to the fireplace and starts and puts a pan on it* *Well time to start it up* *Mako starts to mix the batter and sees Pinkie waking* "Mako....Mako,where are you?"  "Over here" "Mako,I am sorry for acting stupid" "Acting,you were fine Pinkie" "Really,I am sorry I was depressed because I had a dream of m-m-my childhood" *Now Pinkie bursts into to tears* "What is wrong Pinkie?" "Well I can't really say" *Pinkie cries more as Mako walks up to her and sits next to her* "What is wrong Pinkie?" "Want me to tell you?" "If I can make you happy again" "Well,my life began as a young pony,life was nothing but just work work but,nothing happy just nothing" *Mako sees Pinkie's mane un-poofed and her tail was normal* *Why is her hair going crazy* "And then I saw a rainbow and it was something....happy and beautiful and it gave me an idea" "I spent all night setting up a party for my family and then in the morning I showed them" "Then we did that almost all day and that is how I got my cutie mark" "Then it was no happiness,none at all just m-m-m-more..."  *Mako sees Pinkie begins too tear up* "Sadness...."  *Mako hugs her to calm her down* "Thank you Mako" *She starts to fully cry and Mako squeezes harder* "It's ok Pinkie but I have to tell you something as well" "What?" "Well where I am really from" "But you must promise me never to tell anyone" "I promise Mako" "Well I am not from the mountains,I am from a place called Skyrim" "And I am a cat" "You're related to Rarity's cat?!" "No not that type of cat, a two legged cat that can walk with out a need for forelegs and my god Akatosh sent me here for some reason" "I am an archer I also specialized in sword and shield and I can use magic but it is useless right now" "I have no parents anymore,they died from a-a-a-severe disease,t-t-they taught me everything I know today" *Mako starts to cry* "And there names was Cyrus and Midnight both cats Midnight taught me my magic,archery and alchemy" "Cyrus taught me my swordsmanship,smiting and my bartering" "My Daddy and Mommy my family I loved" "Do you have any siblings Mako?" "Yes yes" "Owen my second brother,Cody my third brother that h-h-had a speech impediment and he was such a loving person,Aeryn she was annoyance but I still loved her,then Nikki she was a sweetheart and Mason m-m-my sweet sweet youngest" "After they died,we all went to different families" "That why I am the way I am Pinkie" *Pinkie looks at Mako with both tears in their eyes and hugs him and says* "I am sorry Mako,I am sorry for your life,so happy it was to have ended so quickly" A-a-a-at least you still have your family" I am sorry too Pinkie,you can still see your family at least" "But I only want to see one family member" "My sister Maud Pie" "Well Mako do you want to find and see your siblings again?" "Yes Pinkie,I loved all of them" "I loved all of them" "They were the last of my family m-m-m-my f-f-family" *Mako and Pinkie continue crying together*

        *Mako notices the cake is done and says* "Pinkie,I think the cake is ready to be decorated" "Wait what cake....oh that cake" she said that as if she was drunk even know she did not have any drink "Pinkie you ok?" "Yeah...I am fine" *Is she ok?* *Pinkie gets up and walks too the cake* "Well what do you want to do,the general cake or a structure" "A structure" *Mako colors the cake a light grass green which took about a half hour* "Well Pinkie have fun,I will be back soon" *Mako walks out the door wondering* *Why was she acting like she was tipsy* *Wait a minute that drink tasted hard...oh wait don't tell me she had some* *And I have to make more for fillys don't drink illegally or ponys that don't want to get drunk* *Mako walk back into his house to tell Pinkie something* "Pinkie I think you shouldn't drink any more cider" "Why" "Because it is hard" "What does that mean ?" "It is hard as in a drink " "Oh...oh..." "Yeah I made it by accident" "OK" "Yeah I have to re make it for fillys and other ponys" "Ahh...ok" "Pinkie go drink some water for me please" "Ok I will" *Mako walks out again and hopes to see pinkie ok when he gets back* "There is some tables and chairs" *Mako walks over to the sales pony* "Hello,can I buy those tables and chairs" "Yes would you like me too carry some of it ofr you?" "No thank you my house is right there" "Oh" "Well what is the price?" "20 Bits for it all" "Deal" *Mako and the sales pony exchange items and Mako carries it to the best of his ability* *Jeez this is heavy* *Mako ask Pinkie for some help with carrying* "Hey Pinkie can you help me with these tables and chairs" "Yeah sure" *Pinkie and Mako carry the stuff into the house* "Well I will set it up,go ahead a work on the cake" "Ok" *Mako sets up the table and chairs for the party tonight* "Oh Mako could you invite some ponys?" "Sure" *Mako walks out to invite some ponys* *Who to invite since Pinkie gave me a list of ponys* *Ahh..lets invite Rarity and her sister* *Mako knocks on Rarity's door* "Come in" *Mako walks in the shop and sees Rarity8 "Oh Mako,how are you my dear" "Good,just wanted to invite you to a party held by Pinkie Pie" "I guess it's another one of Pinkie's partys" "This happens often for every new pony?" "Yes" "Well also I have a invite for Sweetie Belle" "Speaking of which where is she?" "At school" "Oh" "Well the party will be tonight" "That is good well when she gets home she can head offer" "Ok have to invite everyone else" "See ya Rarity and tell Sweetie Belle that I said hi" *Mako walks out to see a pony on the list* *A white pony with blue mane and tail* *Thank you Pinkie for the description* "Hello" *Looking at the list for the name* "Vinyl Scratch" " Sup and what do you need?" "I have an party invite for you" "From who?" "Pinkie Pie" "Oh one of her party's I see" "But who is it for?" "Well...um...me" "Oh,I see" *Vinyl's face lights up with delight* this is coming from Vinyl's mind *Oh I like a male pony that is not a all full of him self pony* *As Mako walks away,he sees Vinyl's half obscure face light up in delight* *I think somepony wants me, Oh boy* *Well who to next, well Applejack then* *Mako walks to Applejack's farm* "Hello Applejack" "Hello Mako" "I have something for you" "What?" "A invite" "Too what" "A party" "From whom" "Pinkie" "Oh" "Also one for Applebloom" "Oh,shes been wanting to see you again,but thank you for the invite" "Also I need non-hard cider" ""Wait you bought the hard stuff" "Yeah I am sorry" "No it's my fault I should of given you non-hard stuff and for that I will give you a barrel of non hard stuff" "For free" "Ok and thank you" *Mako carries it to his house for later*

Time 1:00 PM

*Who to next? Ahh Fluttershy* *Mako walks over to Fluttershy's* *Mako whistles to the way but notices something in the forest and runs after it* "WHO IS THERE?!" But no response "TELL ME" and again response "Fine then" *What was that just what* *It looked like a pegasaus but with bat wings* *I must be tired* *Mako knocks on Fluttershy's door and says as the door opens* "Hello Fluttershy" "Hello M-m-m-mako" *Fluttershy says it in a small voice* "I have invite Fluttershy for you" "What, one of Pinkie's party?" "Yes" "Ok thank you for the invite" *Mako walks off senseing that Fluttershy wants to be left alone for some reason* *Lets give Rainbow Dash's invite* *Mako flies to look for her and sees her sleeping on a cloud* *Then he flies up to her and pokes her to wake her up* "YAHHHH!!!" *Rainbow Dash falls and Mako flies to save her from breaking anything*  "Ahh thank you Mako" *Rainbow Dash kisses Mako and his face is creeped out* "Thanks" *Said in a nervous voice*  *Mako puts her down back on her cloud and gives her invite* "Here is your invite" "For what?" "Pinkie's party" "Your party?" "Yes" *Mako flies to the ground and falls over in embarrassment* "Have fun Mako" "OH I WILL....I will" *Rainbow Dash watches Mako as he walks off* *Help me Akatosh* *Well time for this last one.....Twilight Sparkle* *Pinkie told me that she lived in a tree?* * I remember seeing,well lets knock when I get there* *Mako walks to the tree house*

Time 2:00 PM

*Knock knock knock* "Uh...Hello?" "Hello,I have something for you" "What?" "A invite" "For what a party" "Oh,but for when" "Tonight" "Thank and what is your name" "Mako" "Twilight Sparkle"

*Mako walks back to the house* "Hello Pinkie,you feeling any better?" "Yes and Look at the cake" "Wow Pinkie,very nice job" "Enough for everyone" "Well time to set up the bowl for the children" "Yes lets" *Mako fixes up the house for the party as pinkie rests* "Ahh there is Vinyl" Pinkie said *Yay time to be hit on by another pony* "Hello Vinyl" "Hello Pinkie and Mako" "Hi" *Hi indeed* "Well time to set up music" "Oh you play?" "Yes I do" *Vinyl sets up shop in Mako's house*

Too be continued.....

Chapter 6 Party time

        Time 2:30 PM 1 Hour till the party

"Well everything is done Pinkie" "Ok Vinyl" "Oh what is wrong Mako afraid to see me?" "No Vinyl" *Vinyl stares at Mako when he is not looking* "What is wrong Vinyl,I sense you looking at me" *Vinyl stops immediately after he said that* "Nothing" *Vinyl's face now blushes* *Oh help me,why does she have a attraction towards me* "Vinyl come here please" "Ok" "Well here is the food and the drink" "This hard drink if you know what I mean" "And here is the cake and soup" "And here is the non-hard drink" "Ok" *Vinyl's face lights up in evil delight* "You can go back to your music station" *Vinyl walks back to here station* *About a half hour goes by till Rarity and her sister arrives* "Hello Rarity and Sweetie Belle how are you?" "Good Ma---" "MAKO!" "Hello Sweetie Belle" "Nice to see you" "Well Mako I brought something for you" "I did too" *Rarity made Mako a black suit and Sweetie Belle made him a painting*  "Thank you Rarity and Sweetie Belle" "Your welcome" "Your welcome Mako" *Mako hangs up the painting on the wall* *And Mako tries on the suit* "It fits wonderfully Rarity,very comfortable" "Thank you Mako" *Vinyl smirk in delight as she saw Mako in the suit* "Ah how nice,I will get you soon,Mako" *Said in a low voice* *Mako takes it off and puts it on his bed which was moved up stares* "Oh Rarity I need to tell you something" "Ok" "This is hard-stuff,and I made it by accidentally made" "This is the soup,cake and this is the non-hard stuff which you and your younger sister can drink it" "Thank you for telling me Mkao" "Well do you want anything?" "No thank you"  "Ok Rarity" "Mako mako mako where have you been?" "Sweetie Belle,well I have been doing things" "Oh...ok" *Rarity sits down and mako follows* "Well how have you been Rarity?" "Good,just been working" "Ahh..." *They continue small talk until Twilight arrives* "Oh Twilight how are you my dear?" "Ok Rarity" "Well how are you Twilight?" "Good,Mako" "Oh I have to show you something Twilight" "What?" "The drink and food" "Oh" "This is the soup and cake and this stuff is hard and non-hard" "Oh,thank you Mako" "So what is your interests  Twilight?" "Books,art and music" *Interesting Twilight* "Well Rarity can you teach me how to sew tomorrow" "Sure"

"Rainbow Dash is here" *Yay,hopefully I won't be embarrassed in front of everyone" "Hi Rainbow Dash" "Hi Pinkie,Rarity,Vinyl,,Sweetie Belle,Twilight and Mako" "And Sweetie Belle I brought someone for you" "Go play Scotaloo" "Thank you Rainbow Dash" "Hello Rainbow Dash" *Mako face crushes in agony as Rainbow Dash smirks the same way as she did earlier* "Well now just to wait for Applejack and Fluttershy" "Yes the waiting game" "Well how are you Rainbow Dash?" *Help me* "Good,just like earlier" *Rainbow Dash walks to the chair and sits down Mako starring at her the whole time* "Rainbow Dash I have to show you something" "What?" "Well this is the hard drink and non-hard drink" "And this is the soup made by me and the cake Pinkie decorated " "Ohh...this is all nice just like you Mako" "Be quiet" "I almost fell out of the sky" "You looked nice falling over from embarrassment" "What do you like me on something?" "Yes I do,you are a very nice looking pony" "Well thank you but, you are laying it on a bit to hard' "I know,I am suppose too" "Never mind" *Mako just walks to his seat and sits back down* *They continue waiting for Fluttershy and Applejack with small talk between all of them*

"Oh Applejack is here" *Time for someone to tell Rainbow Dash to shut up* "Hello Pinkie,Rainbow Dash,Rarity,Vinyl,Twilight,Scotaloo,Sweetie Belle and Mako" "Speaking which where is Fluttershy?" "Shes the last to come" "Wonder whats keeping her?" "I have no idea,maybe one of her animals got out of hand maybe?" "Yeah that is true" "Go play Applebloom" "Ok big sis" *Applebloom walks to the rest of the CMC* "Hi girls" "Hi Sweetie Belle" *They continue to talk as the adults do* "So how have you been Applejack?" "Good Mako" "Now just the waiting game for Fluttershy" "Oh Applejack I need to show you something" "What?"  "Well the drink and food" "Oh" "Well this is hard-hard drink and this is the non-hard drink" "This is the soup and this is the cake" "Thank you Mako" "No problem,just need to tell you so nothing happens,if you get my drift" "Yeah I know what you mean" "Oh Fluttershy is here" *Time for Mrs. shy* "Oh Hello Fluttershy" "Hello everypony" said in a low voice *Mako notices that around Fluttershy's lip area it had a red tint to it* *She must have cut her lip* *Nevermind* "Well Fluttershy come here" "Ok" *Fluttershy walks to Mako* "This is the adult drink and this is the kids drink" "And this is the food soup and cake" *Mako walks back to his seat and says* "The party has officially started,enjoy!" "Vinyl you can start and enjoy the food and drink" *Mako grabs a bowl and some soup* *Everypony goes over to the tables to grab food and drink* *Vinyl starts blaring music* "Mako this soup is great" "Thank you Rarity" "This hard drink is sweet for being hard" "Thank you,I used fruit to add to it" "Fluttershy are you going to eat anythings?" "No,I ate before I got here" "Ok"

*They continue to enjoy their selves till 8:00 PM*

"Good bye everypony and thanks for coming" *Mako walks out to walk a little bit to relax* "Oh Mako that was a fun party" "Yes I know Vinyl" *Vinyl continues to hit on Mako* "Go home Vinyl" "Ok" *Vinyl walks away with her head down* "Finally peace"

Too be continued....

Chapter 7 What is happening to me

     *Mako walks into a forest for bout 25 minutes* "Such peace.....wait what was that?!" *Then suddenly Mako feels two pains in his neck* "What was that...ahhh" *Blood drips on the ground and scares Mako* "Ahh....WHO DID THIS" "Ahh your blood tastes so good" "Why do this" "Have you been following me?!" "Yes,I was that shadow near that one house" *Mako continues to scream as teeth grow out of his mouth* "AHHHHHHH!!!!" "STOP IT!" "Can't,have fun" *The purple pony flies off as Mako screams* *Mako wakes up and notices that it is still dark* "Can I still fly" "Yes I can,good" *Mako sees a golden blonde pony going after another* "Wait I am a vampire,oh dear Akatosh" *Mako flies towards the blonde pony and tackles it and says* "RUN!" *The pony runs away* "Fluttershy?" *Wait...oh dear she must've fed before the party* "Fluttershy you're" "Yes and I see you are too" "I have too feed or I will go into a frenzy" "Who infected you?" "A purple pony" "She infected me too" "How long have you been one" "A week" *Mako hugs Fluttershy and flies up into the air and to his house* "Fluttershy I want you to stay in my house ok?" "Yes I will" *Mako flies up again to locate a blood source* *Where would blood be where I would not harm someone* *Mako sees a place that has blood packs* "A blood bank,good" *Mako heads back to his house and grabs a bag* *He flies back to grab blood* "Time to get some blood" *Mako sneaks in through the back* "Ahh...augh I must stop can be overcame by my hunger" *Mako grabs all the bags of blood he can and it is about 59 bags of blood* "This is heavy,wait it's blood no wonder" *Mako walks back out and carries it back to his house* "Fluttershy I have the stuff" "Ok" *Mako locks the door and drops the bag on the table* "Enjoy,just clean up after your self" *Mako notices how Fluttershy feeds very..animal like8 "You eat like that" "EAHCHHHH!" "Sorry" *Mako grabs a bag and sits down with it*

"This is surprisingly ok" "It's what we have to live om" "I think that is enough for now" "I think you should go sleep Fluttershy" "I have too" "Sunrise already" "Well better go outside " "Wait Fluttershy" "What?" "How does one cure a pony of vampireism " "You must destroy the your infector...which is the same as me" "Go to sleep Fluttershy" *Mako walks out and the sunshine hurts his fur* "Uhh.." *Mako runs to Rarity's* "Rarity...huh...huh...huh do you ahve a black hat for sale?" "What wrongs my dear" "Nothing just would like to buy a hat" "Ok" *They exchange items* *Well atleast I won't feel the sun now* *Mako puts on the hat and walks out to investigate where this mysterious purple pony would be* *Better look where I was infected* *Mako walks to the place* "Where would it be wait what's that?" "A note" "It reads"

"Oh you were delicious your blood was really good but I will give you a riddle to find me"

The riddle

You will find me in a white place,deep in a rock formation.

There you will find me but ponys might not like you

"What a white..." *Mako walks back to town* *Maybe it's out of town* *Mako walks out of town and sees this place* "Dear Akatosh that is huge" *Mako begins lift off and flies to this place* *Wow this view is beautiful" *Mako lands to the entrance and tries to go in but is stopped by a guard that says* "Stop civilian this is palace of the Princess" "Ok I am sorry" *Mako flies up into the air and looks for a alternate entrance * *Where oh where would it be* *Wait,theirs one there* *Mako flies to the this entrance* *What is this...oh a bedroom boy I feel awful being in here* *Mako walks out of the room and he notices that a large white Princess coming in here* *Where to hind,there under the bed* "Well I will write to Twilight and give her two ticket to the Great Galloping Gala"  *Oh help me Akatosh,why does it seem I get into the most unique situations* *The Princess hears something under the bed* *Wait what NOOOO!* *Wait she can't see me* *Mako looks at his hooves and notices that they invisible* *The Princess walks out of her room and into the white place* *That was close Mako* *Mako gets out of the under of the bed and walks out* *I need to get to her but how* *Then Mako notices that a lot of guards are heading his way* *Oh no....* *Mako flies up to the ceiling to try to stay as quiet as possible * *Just walk by just walk by* *Mako is successful* *Once again phew*

*Mako continues to fly on the ceiling to stay stealthy* "Lets head this away" *Mako sees large doors and opens it* *The Princess sees Mako and assumes a defensive stance* "Princess i need your help looking for something" "What?" *Said in a gruff voice* *Mako takes off his hat and gestures at his mouth* "So you're a vam....." "Yes Princess I need find my infector,she or it said it was here in something" "Wait I remember something going it to the crypt" "That has to be her,can I go there?" "Yes" "Let me open it" *The Princess opens a trap door behind her chair and gestures to go down* *Mako went down and hears the trap door close* "Great i can't see...wait now I can" *Mako notices that he can see in the dark because of his vampric powers* "This is weird"  *Mako sees that there is a large hole in the wall* *Well time to go through it* *Mako walks through it and sees a throne room with skeletons in room* "What the...." "Oh you've found me" "Yes I ahve" *Mako sees an old sword and takes it and lunges at the purple vampony*  *Mako missed* "Oh little one,shall I tell you my name" "Contrena Montiony " "You shall parish by my hand" "No I won't,you shall continue finding me" *Contrena flies off into another place and leaves another note* "Why?!" *Mako picks up the note*

Oh if you found me this time,you are a smart one aren't you

You other worldly creature

The Riddle

You will find me this time at a dragon of all ages,come find me again you creature

Too be continued......

Chapter 1 Mako realized he is deep under.

  Mako wakes up feeling different and almost weightless.As Mako trys to get up he notice his legs all broken "MY MY LEGS THEY ARE BROKEN!!!!".And Mako notices that they are not broken,so Mako gets up and notices that he is in a forest.So Mako walks out and sees a cottage, and sees a a golden horse and walks up to it and says "Hello where am I ?" And the horse hides from Mako and he asks "What is wrong ?" and the golden mare notices his friendliness and says "You are at my house,near the Everfree Forest" Mako asks "What is your name ?" she says "Fluttershy" Mako says "Mako". Mako says "Nice to meet you" Fluttershy says "You're a pegasaus too" Mako wonders *Pega-what* "Your wings Mako" Mako looks behind him and sees wings. Mako asks "Is any place I can get some food and see other ponys" Fluttershy says "Yes north that way". Mako wanders that way.

Mako arrives at the town and sees other ponys. And he sees a white pony. He runs up too it. And before he can say anything she interrupts and says "My dear what is wrong why are you running?" Mako says "Well i was trying see if I could ask you questions?"  the white pony say "Well my dear let us go to my shop over there."  Mako asks "What is your name?" "Rarity my dear,yours? "Mako" "What a dashing name."  "Well thank you."  They both head off to the shop. Both of them enter the shop "Now honey what do you ne---" "RARITY YOU'RE HOME!" and young pony says Mako screams "YEECH!!" and falls to the ground "Sorry Mr." "It's ok you just scared me" "Now what is you name little pony?" "Sweetie Belle mr." "And my name is Mako" "Thank you m--Mako" "And you have your Cutie mark Mako" *Cutie what* and Mako looks behind him and sees a anvil and hammer

'Yes I do I'm good at making things." "Now Rarity do you have some tea?" "Yes,of course I do dear" "What kind do you have?" "Peach,apple,blueberry and cherry" "May I have Cherry?" "Of course my dear" Rarity starts to make tea,Mako wonders why is he here,theirs nothing going on here it's almost peaceful."Mako" "Yes Sweetie Belle?" "Have you met Fluttershy,Pinkie Pie,Rainbow Dash,Applejack and Twilight Sparkle?" "Fluttershy yes the rest no" "What about Scotaloo or Applebloom" " Have not met them ether" Rarity interrupts with "Tea is done" Mako says "Thank you Rarity" Rarity asks "Where did you come from dear?" "Well I'm not sure honestly" "Well any idea dear?" "I woke up in the Everfree,then I met Fluttershy" "Well how was she?" "Good,seems she was feeding some animals" *Mako finishes his last of his tea* "Well thank you Rarity for the tea" "You're welcome dear,but are you hungry?" Mako says "Yes" "Well my dear there is a restaurant in the middle of Ponyville" "Well I have no money"  "Well want to work a little for some bits" "Sure"  *Mako works with Rarity around the shop for about 2 hours and earns 75 bits*

To be continued.....

Chapter 2 Meeting Scotaloo,Appleblom and Applejack

After Mako and Rarity finished drinking tea. Sweetie Belle wanted to show Mako something so Sweetie Belle said "Mako may I show you something?" Mako reply's "What is Sweetie Belle?" "You'll see Mako" *Mako says goodbye to Rarity and heads out with Sweetie Belle * "Well Sweetie Belle what is it you want me to see?" "Well I want you to see are club house" *Are club house* Mako wonders *Then Mako sees the club house* "Here it is Mako" *Sweetie Belle leads Mako in* Sweetie Belle says "HI girls"  Young pony says "Hi Sweetie Belle" Another voice says "Hi Sweetie Belle"  "Mako this is Scotaloo and Applebloom"  Scotaloo says "Hi Mako" Applebloom says "Hi Mako too" "And you would like to see something else Mako? " "Sure?" "What is it"  "Art."  *Mako look at there art as they hold each of theirs pieces of art*  *Sweetie Belle's is a picture of her and Rarity* *Very nice*

*Applebloom's is of Apple trees* *Relaxing* *And Scataloo's is of her an somepony else helping her to fly* *How sad she can't fly too,I might ask that blue pony* "What do you think Mako?" "Very nice all of them" "Thank you" they all say at the same time . *Mako hears the door open* *Then Applejack walks in and gets into a defensive pose* *Mako turns around and sees Applejack and says "Hi?" *Applejack just stares at Mako* Applebloom says "Applejack he is fine" Applejack says "He better be" "Mako says "I am sorry to annoy Applejack,I was coming because Sweetie Belle wanted to show me their art." "Well I am sorry for being grumpy I just had a large branch fell on me" Applejack says "Well how did you meet Sweetie Belle?" "I met her at Rarity's" "What is your name?" "Mako" "Well are you hungry Mako ?" "Yes, Applejack" "We have some food and you can work for little bit" *Mako and the C.M.C and Applejack walk to the barn*

"We are here" Applejack said  *They walk into the kitchen and Mako meets Granny Smith and Big Macintosh "Applejack you brought a new pony for dinner?" A old Mare

"Yes Granny Smith." Applejack said "Well what is your name?" "Mako" And suddenly A large pony says "Yup" "Hello the Apple Family" *Well Mako and the Apple family eats dinner of apple pie and other apple things* *Time 7:30 Pm* "Thank you for the dinner Applejack" "No problem " "Didn't you say you would need my help with something?" "Yep,but it is late"  "And do you have a bed tonight?" "No I do not Applejack" "Well you can sleep in the barn tonight" "Thanks Applejack" "No problem but first thing in the morning you can start helping" "Ok Applejack" Mako heads to the barn to sleep*

Too be continued...