Pride-The Story of Evil

by Rose Quartz

Rating: teen
Tags: Flash Sentry, Tragedy, Sunset Shimmer, Twilight Sparkle, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Sad, Romance, Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, Crossover
Length: 3626

Inspired by the Evil Chronicles. Sunset Shimmer is known as the Daughter of Evil in her Yellow Kingdom, and her twin brother, Sunburn, is her servent. Suburn would do anything to make his sister happy...even the evil way .

Inspired by the songs Daughter of Evil by Kagamine Rin, Servent of Evil by Kagamine Len, and Daughter of White by Yowane Haku.

This story is about Pride, one of the seven deadly sins. Princess Sunset Shimmer is known as the daughter of evil in her Yellow Kingdom but her servant Sunburn (Who is also her twin brother) doesnt think so. I would explain more, but then I would ruin everything.

Daughter of Evil:
http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=lYJATjB88lI

Servant of evil:
http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=RQeMU8oa55U

Daughter of White:
http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=WOa7O0GUzsY

Published 2014-11-11 01:30:10 UTC
Last updated 2015-01-28 21:52:36 UTC

Ch.2 9 Years Later

Nine years later, Sunset Shimmer now rules the Yellow Kingdom. After seperating the twins, Solar Flare took Sunset to Zecora the Witch Doctor to erase her memories of Sunburn. So now she doesn't know that she had a twin. Fire Starter took Sunburn to the servant's quarters where he was trained to serve royalty. Solar Flare felt guilty after seperating the twins, so she died from starvation. Fire Starter died from Ebola (Im sorry, I just had too). So now, Sunset became the ruler at only age 14. One day, she was walking to her throne room in her yellow and black dress. Her cutie mark was a red and white sun. Sunburn walked in holding his tea tray with his magic. His cutie mark was a silver dish cover with a sun behind it.

"Tea, my lady?", asked Sunburn.

"Yes, that would be great.", replied Sunset.

Sunburn poured Sunset a cup of tea.

"Anything new?", asked Sunset.

"It's just that somepony didn't pay her taxes.", explained Sunburn.

Sunset did a spittake and threw her teacup out the window.

"Show me!", ordered Sunset.

Sunset and Sunburn walked to the chariot and rode throughout the kingdom until they reached a blue pegasus mare with a rainbow mane and a rainbow lightning bolt as her cutie mark.

"That's her.", said Sunburn walking out of the chariot with his sister.

"You!", said Sunset pointing to the Pegasus, "State your name!"

"Rainbow Dash, your majesty.", replied the mare.

"My loyal servant has told me that you have not paid your taxes."

"I know, Im a little low on bits and I told him that I'll pay next month."

"She already said that five time.", explained Sunburn.

"In that case…Sunburn!", yelled Sunset.

Sunburn used his magic to levitate Rainbow and he slammed her to the ground a couple times.

"Look I-", said Rainbow.

"No, you look!", interupted Sunset "For not paying your taxes, you will be punished!"

Sunset performed a spell that made Rainbow's wings disappear.

"My wings!", said Rainbow on the verge of tears.

Sunburn dropped her.

"One of these days, you will suffer!", warned Rainbow.

"Oh you can just tidy up my gown!", said Sunset "Let's go Sunburn"

The carriage took off.

"Daughter of Evil.", whispered Rainbow walking away, "I will never forgive you!"

Ch.4 The Prince of Blue

After having enough of the ridicule. Fluttershy and Twilight decided to run away from the Green Kingdom and descended in the Yellow Kingdom. They decided to work as maids for a wealthy merchent. Meanwhile, Sunset was sitting in her throne room, until Sunburn walked in bearing a scroll.

"Your majesty, I have a letter from the Blue Country", said Sunburn bowing and giving her the letter.

Sunset took the letter and started reading it.

"Dear Princess Sunset Shimmer of the Yellow Kingdom,
In order for my country to survive, I must have a bride to rule the country with me. But since my country does not have many mares. I must search for my bride in your country. I will arrive tomorrow morning.

Sincerely,
Prince Flash Sentry of the Blue Kingdom"

After Sunset read the letter, she gave a fangirl scream.

"Is anything the matter, your highness?", asked Sunburn.

"Prince Flash Sentry of the Blue Kingdom is visiting the Yellow Kingdom to seek a bride, and Im gonna be his bride", explained Sunset

"Congratulations, your majesty"

"Sunburn, prepare a ball when the prince arrives tomorrow"

"As you wish"

"Now if you excuse me, I must find a dress. Prepare me some of your famous brioche"

"As you wish"

Sunburn walked into the kitchen, and started cooking. He then opened the cupboards, and started looking around.

"I guess I need to get more spices", said Sunburn

He walked up to Sunset's room, and knocked on the door.

"Yes?", asked Sunset.

"Princess, Im going to the market to get some ingredients. Do you need anything?", asked Sunburn

"Yes actually", said Sunset opening her door and giving him a dress, "My favorite dress has a hole in it. Can you give it to the tailor to fix it up?"

"Of course"

Sunburn took the dress, and started walking to the market. An hour later, he grabbed everything he needed to make the brioche, and the dress was fixed. Suddenly, he bumped into somepony. He fell down, and dropped everything he had.

"Oh, Im so-", said Sunburn

He looked up and saw Twilight wearing a green dress with a white apron. A blush crept on his face.

"Oh, are you ok?", asked Twilight

"Y-yes, Im fine", stammered Sunburn

"Let me help you with that"

"Oh you don't have to"

"Im a maid, It's kinda my job"

Twilight helped Sunburn pick up the dropped items.

"Thank you um…", said Sunburn

"Twilight. Twilight Sparkle", introduced Twilight

"Nice to meet your aquaintence, Ms. Sparkle. Im Sunburn"

"You can just call me Twilight"

"Such a lovely name"

Sunburn and Twilight blushed. Suddenly, Fluttershy walked up to them. She was wearing the same dress as Twilight.

"Twilight, I got the oranges and bananas for Lord Fancy Pants, so we can go", said Fluttershy, "Oh, Im sorry. Am I interrupting anything?"

"No, it's fine", said Twilight, "I must leave, but I hope to see you again"

"Same here"

Twilight bowed and walked away with Fluttershy.

"Beautiful", whispered Sunburn before walking away.

Meanwhile, Fluttershy and Twilight were walking through the market.

"Who in the world was he?", asked Fluttershy

"Just somepony I met", explained Twilight

"He looks an awful lot like Princess Sunset Shimmer"

"Hm, I guess she does"

They kept walking, until they reached a manor.

"Lord Fancy Pants", said Twilight walking in "We're back"

"Excellent", said Fancy Pants walking in "Now, tomorrow there's a ball to celebrate the arrival of Prince Flash Sentry, and I want you girls to accompany me"

"You want us to come?", asked Fluttershy

"Well, you two deserve it since your my two favorite maids", explained Fancy.

"THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU", cheered Twilight hugging Fancy "Eh, sorry"

"It's quite alright, my dear", assured Fancy walking away "I have important business to attend to. You two can have the rest of the day off"

Fancy went into his office.

"Im really excited about the ball, but how are we gonna get dresses?", asked Twilight "They're too expensive for us"

"You can leave that to me", said Fluttershy, "I happen to be an expert at sewing"

"Fluttershy, your too kind"

"Thank you. Now, let's measure up so we can get started"

Meanwhile, Sunburn walked into the castle still blushing. He made the brioche, and gave it to Sunset along with her dress.

"Here you go, your majesty", said Sunburn

"Why are you blushing?", asked Sunset

"Oh, no reason"

"Aw, did Burny meet his special somepony"

"Maybe"

"OOOH HOW CUTE"

Sunset grabbed Sunburn and hugged him.

"Who is she? Is she rich? IS SHE PRETTIER THAN ME?!", asked Sunset

"Her name is Twilight", explained Sunburn "She's one of Lord Fancy Pant's maids, and nopony is as pretty as you"

"Good. Now leave and let me eat in peace"

"As you wish"

Sunburn left the room as his sister ate. The next day, was the ball. Everypony was dressed in fancy outfits. Sunset was with Sunburn, wearing her usual dress.

"Sunburn, does my mane look ok? How about my dress? And does my breath smell ok?", asked Sunset nervously

"Princess, you look amazing. And Im sure the prince will feel the same way", assured Sunburn

"Thanks Burny", replied Sunset hugging him.

Suddenly, trumpet sounds played, and a servant appeared.

"Now announcing the arrival of Prince Flash Sentry of the Blue Kingdom", announced the servant.

The prince walked into the ballroom. He was a tan pegasus with a blue mane with a shield as his cutie mark.

"HE'S HERE", cheered Sunset running over to him. "Prince Flash Sentry. It is I, Princess Sunset Shimmer"

"It is an honor to meet you your majesty", replied Flash bowing.

"Oooh let's dance"

Sunset used her magic to grab Flash, and dragged him to the dancefloor. A new song played, and they started dancing.

"Your such a great dancer", complimented Sunset

"Um…thanks, I guess", replied Flash

"What do you think our kids will look like in the future?",

"Uhh…"

Suddenly, the trumpets played again.

"Now announcing the arrival of Lord Fancy Pants and his two guests", announced the servants again.

Fancy Pants walked down the stairs with Twilight and Fluttershy. Fluttershy was wearing a pink and green dress, while Twilight was wearing a lovely white silk dress.

"Beautiful", whispered Flash blushing.

"I know", said Sunset "Our future is beautiful"

"I'll be right back"

Flash walked away. Meanwhile, Sunburn was still serving drinks. Suddenly, Twilight walked up to him.

"Sunburn", greeted Twilight

"Oh hello Twilight", greeted Sunburn blushing

"I didnt know you worked for the Princess"

"Yeah, it's a living"

"What's she like? Is she nice"

"Well, she has her moments. But, other than that, she's really sweet"

"Oh"

"Apple cider?"

"Sure"

Twilight used her magic to levitate the glass.

"Wanna dance?", asked Twilight

"Sorry, I can't. I have to keep serving drinks"

"Oh, maybe later"

"Sure"

"Ok, Im gonna find Fluttershy"

Twilight walked through the crowd looking for her friend. Suddenly, she bumped into somepony and spilled cider on his tux.

"Im so sor-", said Twilight

She looked up and saw Flash. She started blushing. When Flash saw her, he started blushing as well.

"Prince Flash Sentry", said Twilight "I apologize"

"Don't apologize", said Flash "A beautiful mare like you shouldn't apologize. Now tell me fair maiden, what is your name"

"Twilight Sparkle, your majesty. Nice to meet you"

"Twilight, like your mane and Sparkle, like your eyes. Would you like to dance?"

"I'd love to"

Twilight and Flash started dancing, when Sunburn saw this, he grew a little envious. Then Fluttershy walked up to him.

"Excuse me, sir", said Fluttershy "But may I have a glass of cider"

"Oh, sorry ma'am", replied Sunburn giving her a glass.

"You seem to be distracted"

Sunburn looked over at Twilight and Flash.

"Aw, how sweet", said Fluttershy

Suddenly, Sunset walked over to Sunburn and levitated a glass towards her.

"Sunburn, have you seen Flash anywhere?", asked Sunset

Sunburn pointed to Flash and Twilight dancing. When Sunset saw this, she did a spittake.

"Come with me, Twilight", said Flash

"Ok", replied Twilight

Flash and Twilight walked over to the balcony. Sunset set the glass down and secretly followed them. She hid behind a plant while they talked.

"I bet your wondering why I came to the Yellow Kingdom in the first place", said Flash

"Well, yeah actually", replied Twilight

"My Blue Kingdom is dying and I need a queen to rule with me. My kingdom has only a few mares and they're all already married. I decided to go to the Yellow Kingdom to seek a bride. I was also hoping to marry the Princess there to get more political power, but I realize that I don't love her"

Flash went on one knee and showed Twilight a diamond ring in a box. When Twilight saw this she gasped while Sunset grew angry.

"I love you, and I want to spend the rest of my life with you. Twilight Sparkle, will you marry me? And rule my kingdom with me?", asked Flash

"WHAT?!", thought Sunset

"YES", cheered Twilight

Twilight took the ring and put it on her horn. Then she and Flash kissed. When Sunset saw this, she ran to her room and started crying. Sunburn walked to her room and knocked into her room.

"Princess?", said Sunburn

"GO AWAY", yelled Sunset

"Please let me in"

"No"

"Why not?"

"BECAUSE IM HEART BROKEN"

Sunburn walked into the bedroom and saw his sister crying.

"I told you to go away", said Sunset

"I couldn't stand to see you like this", said Sunburn "Now tell me what's wrong"

"My prince doesnt love me. He proposed to another mare…WHEN HE WAS SUPPOSE TO BE MARRYING ME"

Sunset continued to cry, until Sunburn hugged her.

"Is there anything that can make you feel better?", asked Sunburn

"Well, there is one thing"

"What is it?"

Sunset whispered into Sunburn's ear

"Make sure that the Green Kingdom is badly stired"

Ch. 5 The Fall of The Green Kingdom

"Make sure that the Green Kingdom is badly stirred"

Sunburn couldn't believe what his sister has said. Sure, she says some evil things, but nothing like that.

"Your highness-"

"I WANT THAT GIRL DEAD", yelled Sunset "So the Prince can be with me. Actually, to make sure this incident doesn't happen again, Every unicorn girl must die"

"But don't you think that's unreasonable-?"

"MY HEART IS BROKEN SUNBURN! IF YOU DON'T DO WHAT I SAY, THEN SO HELP ME I WILL MURDER YOU INSTEAD!"

Sunburn stood there for a moment.

"As you wish, your majesty", said Sunburn bowing

Sunset gave a small yet evil smile.

"Good. Now go and rid the world of them", said Sunset "I want them dead. EVERY! LAST! ONE!"

Sunburn left the room. He was about to do something he would regret forever. He ran to the Green Kingdom and started lighting houses on fire. When everypony ran outside, he started killing the unicorn mares. After killing most of the mares, he walked to the edge of the kingdom and saw the flames growing. Suddenly, he hears somepony crying. He looks around, and sees Twilight sobbing.

"Twilight", whispered Sunburn.

"Sunburn", said Twilight looking up.

She ran up to Sunburn, and hugged him. She starts sobbing once again.

"I don't wanna do this", thought Sunburn with tears in his eyes. "But I must do it, for Sunset"

He levitates his dagger and stabs Twilight in the back. When Twilight felt the pain, she didn't know what to think.

"Sunburn…how…how could you?"

"Im sorry Twilight", said Sunburn with more tears falling.

As Twilight died. Sunburn starts crying on her now lifeless body. The next day, Sunburn spent the majority of his day crying. Suddenly, there was a knock at the door.

"Sunburn!", yelled Sunset

"What is it, your majesty?", asked Sunburn

"It's 3 o' clock. Which means it's tea time."

"Ok, your majesty"

Sunburn walks out of his room. His eyes were red from crying.

"What's the matter with you?"

"Nothing, your majesty"

"Ok, you know you can tell me anything, right?"

"I know, but I'm ok. Now let's get your tea started"

As he was making tea, he couldn't stop thinking about Twilight or the sins he has commited. Meanwhile, Flash was walking around his manor, looking for his beloved. Suddenly, one of his butlers walked up to him.

"Your majesty, I bring news of grief", said the butler

"Not now Chives, I'm looking for Twilight", said Flash walking away

"But the news-"

"CHIVES, NOT NOW!"

"But it concerns your beloved"

Flash stopped in his tracks.

"What about her?"

Chives sighed.

"Lady Twilight...is dead"

"What?", said Flash

"The Princess of the Yellow Kingdom ordered her servant to destroy the Green Kingdom and all the unicorn mares...Your fiancé happened to be there at the scene"

Flash couldn't believe what he was hearing. He flew out of the mansion, until he reached Fancy Pant's manor. He knocked on the door, until Fluttershy opened it.

"Prince Flash, what brings you here? And why are you crying?", asked Fluttershy

"Twilight..."said Flash crying

"What about her"

"She...She's gone! SHE'S DEAD"

Flash began crying, after hearing the news, Fluttershy began crying too.

"Don't worry, Fluttershy", said Flash "I will avenge her"

Meanwhile, Rainbow Dash was sitting at the cemetary, until Prince Flash appeared.

"Prince Flash Sentry, what brings you here?", asked Rainbow

"I need help", said Flash

"With what?"

"Princess Sunset Shimmer has taken away something I loved dear"

"I heard, Im sorry for your loss"

"I heard that you use to be one of her knights"

"Yes, that was before she wouldn't give me medicine to save my husband"

"Well, how would you like to help me bring her down?"

"Im listening, but how?"

"One word..."

Revolution

Ch.1 Separation

A longtime ago, Equestria was separated into four contries. The Red Country, which is Earth Pony Country the Blue Country, which is the pegasus country , the Green Country, which is unicorn country, and the Yellow Country, which is the Capital of Equestria. In the yellow kingdom lived the rulers King Fire Starter and Queen Solar Flare. Fire Starter is a red unicorn with a yellow and orange mane with a flame as his cutie mark. Solar Flare is an orange pegasus with a red and yellow mane with a sun with star as her cutie mark. Solar Flare use to be the Princess of Saddle Arabia, until she was forced to marry Fire Starter. Fire Starter is an evil pony and had a heart as cold as ice. He would rule over the Yellow Kingdom with an iron hoof. Many years later, Solar Flare gave birth to twin foals named Sunset Shimmer and Sunburn. Sunset Shimmer was a yellow unicorn filly with a red and yellow mane. Sunburn was a red unicorn colt with a yellow and red mane. They were inseperable, even after their birth. They were also the best of friends. One day, Fire Starter and Solar Flare were talking in their castle while watching their children play.

"But we can't just seperate them.", said Solar Flare, "They love each other too much."

"Its for the best. They need to know how cruel the world is.", explained Fire Starter.

"But they're only five, isn't there another way-".

"NO SOLAR THERE IS NO OTHER WAY!"

Solar shrunk down in fear.

"It's for the best.", said Fire Starter walking away, "Just give them more time to play."

Solar looked through the window and saw Sunset and Sunburn were playing together. Suddenly, Sunset started crying.

"What's wrong Sunset?", asked Sunburn running towards her.

"I tripped and scraped my knee.", said Sunset crying.

Sunburn levitated a purple flower and put it in Sunset's mane. She wiped her tears and hugged Sunburn. They both started laughing and playing again. Solar looked at Fire Starter with sad eyes.

"It's time.", said Fire Starter.

Fire Starter and Solar Flare walked outside and their children stopped playing.

"Hi Mommy hi Daddy", greeted Sunset and Sunburn.

"C'mon children, were going on a trip.", said Solar depressed.

"Where are we going?", asked Sunset.

"Well, you and your mother are going to the Witch Doctor, while your brother goes to his new home."

"WHAT?!", said the twins in unison.

Solar picked up Sunset, while Fire Starter picked up Sunburn.

"You can't tear us apart!", said Sunset crying.

"Yeah, we belong together!", added Sunburn crying.

"Were sorry, but it's for the best.", said Fire Starter.

The twins were crying as they were seperated. Little did Fire Starter know, he had made a terrible mistake.

Author's Note

So yeah, Sunburn is my OC. I was gonna make Sunset's twin Trixie, but I changed my mind.

Ch.3 The Daughter of Wings

In the Green country, a yellow pegasus mare by the name of Fluttershy was walking through the village, until she was stopped by a couple of unicorns.

"Um excuse me, can I get through?", asked Fluttershy shyly.

"Sorry, but this is a wing free zone!", teased a blue unicorn colt.

"Yeah, you need a horn to pass through here!", teased an orange unicorn.

"But…but I don't have a horn.", said Fluttershy.

"Exactly, which makes you a mistake!", teased a green unicorn.

They pushed Fluttershy down, and started kicking her until she had a nose bleed.

"Have a nice day!", teased the orange unicorn walking away with her friends.

Fluttershy ran out of the kingdom and into the Everfree Forest. She kept walking until she reached an unusual tree. It was a crystal tree that sparkled. Fluttershy sat near it and started crying.

"Faust, Im sorry for being born!", cried Fluttershy, "Im sorry for being a pegasus, and Im sorry for being a mistake!"

The next day was the same always. After a couple of unicorns picked on Fluttershy, she walked to the tree. When she got there she saw an unconscious purple unicorn mare.

"Oh my.", said Fluttershy running towards her, "Don't worry, I'll help you."

Fluttershy put the mare on her back and carried her to her cottage near the forest. A few hours later, the mare woke up.

"Oh good, your awake.", said Fluttershy with a smile.

"What happened?", asked the mare, "Where am I?"

"Your in my cottage. I found you unconscious near The Tree of Harmony."

"I must've passed out when I fell from the tree"

"Yes, you have a slight concussion, but you'll be fine."

"Thank you, I must get back to the kingdom."

"I'll take you there, you might need help walking."

"Oh you don't have to-"

"I know, I want to help."

"Thank you, Im Twilight Sparkle."

"Nice to meet you Twilight, Im Fluttershy."

The mare smiled at Fluttershy and they started walking to the Green Kingdom. When they got there, they saw a mob of angry unicorns.

"Oh Twilight, you're alright!", said a unicorn

"What are you doing with that freak?!"

"Did she do this to you?!"

"No", replied Twilight, "I fell from a tree and this wonderful mare here saved my life, and you should treat her with respect! Because I wouldve been dead if it weren't for her!"

Everypony's expressions softened and they walked away. Then Fluttershy started crying, an Twilight wrapped a wing around her.

"Why are you being so nice to me?", asked Fluttershy crying, "Im an outcast!"

"That's not true.", assured Twilight wiping her tears, "I have never met somepony as wonderful as you."

Fluttershy hugged Twilight, and they became good friends.