A heros final moments

The piercing claw of discord went through my rib cage as he lashed it at rainbow dash.

I fell to my knees as celestia rushed in and beamed him down with her horn. Not that I was paying any attention, because I had blood pouring out of my chest. Rainbow dash flew to my side as I started saying memories from my past on earth. Rainbow dash then started saying things like "don't go, I need you" this would have taken me off guard but It didn't because my mind started playing a scene of a happy future where me and dash lived together and married and died normally. But when I came to it, dash was crying on my shoulder screaming don't die please!!!!!!!!! I love you!!!!!!!!!! I looked down to see that my shirt was drenched in my blood. I spoke softly the Lord's Prayer and said my goodbyes which made dash cry even more. I then took In my surroundings. There was a crowd around me with a look of sympathy. I met eyes with applejack who had her hat taken off. I looked around and said loudly; I have no regrets, it was a blessing to come here but a curse to leave. At this point blood was coming out of my mouth. I kept talking; I did this because I love her!! And I shall die doing the same. Dash then wailed; but i need you!!!!!!! Don't die!!!!!!! But I would even if I tried to stay alive. I knew that his claw had his something important. And I was slowly fading from this world. I was starting to get weak from blood loss and I couldn't hold my self up anymore. So I fell back only to be caught by the forewhooves of rainbow dash. Who looked at me with puffy eyes and told me to hang in there and that I would live. I smiled warmly at dash and told her to remember me. She started crying In which I caressed her face. I knew I was about to die when my breathing turned shallow. I looked up at her and told her that I love her and would see her later. She clung to me and whispered don't go but I was already fading and the world went black as I heard her wailing. I felt nothing and then I woke up. I stand here outside of canterlot castle ready to break discord's prison and rip his mismatched body to pieces, no one puts me through that,better yet rainbow dash through that and lives. This is my time to shine.