vulcan in bloom

by solarflare17

Rating: teen
Tags: Romance, Comedy, Slice of Life
Length: 4123

this is the story of a 14 year old colt named solar and how he became im love with a young fillie named apple bloom

Solat will go and do many things in this funny romantic tale

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2014-10-19 08:19:00 UTC

introduced to the cmc

(The cmc come out the yellow earth pony with the red mane and solar couldn't stop staring at her orange eyes she also has a bow on steps out first then a orange Pegasus comes out she has a purple messy mane her eyes match her mane and she has a few bandages on her legs and one on her cheek then a white unicorn with a cotton candy mane her face is kinda hidden sense she is kind of hiding behind the other two.) cmc- Hi pinkie pie! apple bloom- Hey who are ya? (Solar backs up a bit.) Solar- Umm I...ugh gulp....... I'm solar. apple bloom- Huh what is wrong with ya ya acting mighty strange (smile) she steps closer (laughs) pinkie- Solar are you okay? (Pokes him) solar- Uh umm y..yeah I am alright (looks down) (she is c..cute agh I got to stop thinking like that .....so cute with those gulp eyes a..and ascent) scootaloo- I think he is shy or just a weirdo (laughs) sweetie belle- Leave our new friend alone you dodo. Scootaloo. Alright im just having fun. Pinkie- Girls why don't you show him around I have to go help Mr and Mrs cake you'll keep an eye out on him for me apple bloom see you girls later. (She begins to walk away then winks at solar and whispers have fun with apple bloom sticks her tounge out then bounces.) apple bloom- Huh why does she want me ta watch over ya? Solar- Gulp um I don't know. Apple bloom- (Glares at solar) ah can tell when ya lie in case ya didn't know I'm the sister to the element of honesty so no lies ever! Solar- Y...your a...applejacks sister?!?! (backs away) umm .......... (Backs away more) I umm think m...maybe I.....should maybe leave. Sweetie- Why were not special just because our sisters are elements of harmony please don't go no pony ever spends time with us were lonely and ......diamond tiara is always so mean to us plea. Solar- DIAMOND TIARA!? the cmc- Y...you know her? Solar- Yes I know HER she was at manehatten once and she wouldn't stop it girls I won't let her pick on you anymore (his mane went up in a fiery blaze) scootaloo- Oh that's awesome!! A hour later apple bloom. So ya going to be our body guard (laughs) or something (apple bloom hugs him) solar- Umm yeah ....or s...something. ???- Apple bloom! (An orange mare walks in she has a hat on and her mane is a beautiful golden yellow and her eyes are like emeralds her cutie mark is tree red apples) where are ya ah there ya are...... Why in blazes do ya have a colt in here ya know the rules. Apple bloom- It ain't what ya think applejack he's our new friend and new cutie mark crusader so its alright. (Applejack glares at solar) could ah talk to ya outside? Solar- Y....yes mam (outside) applejack- So ya better and I mean it ya better (she got close to him) behave ya self if ya ever hurt my little sister in anyway I will teach ya a lesson ya won't ever forget ya understand. Solar-..........y.e...understood b...but um w..were just friends we only just met earlier today a...and (looks down) I..... Applejack- Huh what is it sugarcube? Solar- I..(sniffle) starts crying. Applejack- Ya alright come now calm down (she wipes away his tears) maybe ya ain't the type of colt I though ya seem sweet now (chuckles) have fun oh and I will give ya this talk a lot (walks away) a lot (back in the club house) Apple bloom- So ma sis wanted what. Solar- She um said she umm not to hurt you in anyway or else. Apple bloom- (Laughs) she thinks (laughs) we just met today and (she walks up to solar) ah mean just what was ma sister thinking. Solar- Its probably because we are the only two in here......(oh my celestia) your eyes.... Apple bloom- What's wrong with ma eyes? Solar-........ugh did..did I say that out loud (apple bloom stares at him with disappointment) you have nice eyes that's all (looks away) ???- (clears throught) soo what's going on here (laughing)( a beautiful white unicorn mare walks in she seems very sophisticated her mane is s very shiny purple and her eyes are blue she looks a lot like sweetie belle) oh apple bloom you finally got a little colt friend oh you two look so cute together!! Oh does applejack know I don't know if shell approve of this. Applejack- Rar there just friends. Rarity. Oh well maybe sweetie belle likes him. Apple bloom- Rarity i don't believe he is sweetie type he ain't very dominant I'm pretty sure he is the most submissive pony I have ever met (laughs) i bet he would do anything I say. Solar. H..he that..... (Looks down) n..not true...maybe n..not anything (applejack looks at solar angrily) i...I mean ....never mind. Rarity- aww your so cute. Apple bloom- Solar I was just joking with ya (looks at him with concern) i am just not used ta ya yet just wait a week or two alright. Solar- It's alright apple bloom (applejack and rarity leave) umm apple bloom just so you know I um probably would do anything you said.  Apple bloom- (Laughs) really anything huh well then (grins) umm kiss ma. Solar- W..wh......what k..kiss you (blush) but we j..just met today a....(solar kisses apple bloom.) Apple bloom- Ah.... ah can't ya.... actually kissed me (laughs) well then ya know that kiss ment nothing right? Solar- umm apple bloom umm that kinda ment something. Apple bloom- Ya first kiss (smiles at solar) it was mine to its kinda funny ya know we met today and shared our first kiss. (apple bloom shoves solar in a friendly way) an don't go getting full of ya self just because of it and ya better of getting ya cutie mark before ya get another... Umm if ya ever get another (Smiles sweetly at solar) I guess it's time ya went home huh.

chapter 1 solar meets apple bloom

(A 14 year old yellow orange colt with a red and orange brown mane with ocean blue eyes walks off the trains platform) Solar flare- So this is ponyvile I...I hope I fit in (I hope I see some cute mares around here) ???- Cute mares huh you must be the new colt huh seems some pony is going through puberty (giggling) (the pink mare with an even pinkier mane she has three balloons as a cutie mark the two blue and one yellow her eyes are a bright blue that looks like they can see in the to your very heart and soul says) solar flare- W.what h...how did you I was thinking and y..you ???- Yeah its a thing I do I call it a pinkie sense (she says while bouncing around) my names pinkamena Diane pie but my friends call me pinkie pie because I'm the sweetest mare around (giggles) solar flare- ...uhhh (blushing) pinkie- (Giggles) that was a joke silly they call me pinkie because its sooooo much easier I'm not really the kind of mare that does that (oh this will be so much fun teasing him all the time) solar flare- ....okay then (blushing) um pinkie I'm solar flare nice to meet you (extend hoof for a hoof shake) pinkie- Oh when I meet pony's I hug them as greetings you can ask everypony i know everything about everypony solar- Umm (this mare is very cute but scares me) pinkie- Come on I'll introduce you to a few ponies oh and thanks for thinking I'm cute solar. Solar- Do you always do that pinkie. Only sometimes (song voice) (pinkie is jumping around and solar can't keep himself from staring at her flank and pinkie giggles and lift's her tail up) pinkie. So you seem to like what you see I'm going to enjoy the time we spend together. solar- C..could you stop teasing me (pinkie stops short so solar`s muzzle hits her flank) pinkie- (Giggles) opsie dasie this is derpy hooves or sometime ditzy doo (the grey mare with a blond mane and two yellow eyes look at you and some place else her cutie mark is a bunch of bubbles) ditzy- Hello! I'm ditzy I like muffins. Solar- Hi I'm solar I also enjoy muffins ditzy. There amazing right! (They continue walking along) Pinkie- alrighty oh oh I know you will just love time turner (they walk up to a brown pony his mane is also brown his fez and bow are red his cutie mark is a full hourglass and he is next to a weird box that is blue and says puplic police box what's a police?) Pinkie- hi time Turner!!! Can i go in your box that you leave the brakes on like all the time? Time turner- pinkie i told you my im the doctor and no you cant you always take off the brakes and make it less fun. Pinkie- and thats why your mister cranky raggedy who has a dumb fez! Doctor-Fez's are cool your tiny pony mind can Handel its coolness. Pinkie- oh please I handle dashie you fez is lame even ditzy thinks so. Doctor- what but miss hooves said I look good. (They walk away from the weird pony as he goes in the box and it disappeared) Pinkie- okay now let's meet oh hi Trixie! Trixie- its the great and powerful Trixie! (The blue mare with a silver mane said judging by her cutie mark she does magic tricks) trixie- Trixie doesn't have the time to waste with you (she goes to walk away) hello pinkie. Pinkie- well that was fun oh want q cupcake I could get you one from mrs and mr cake oh you'll like Mrs cake she has a big flank so you could stare at it. Solar- why are you still doing that what ever I want a cupcake. (At sugar cube corner) Pinkie- so like the cupcake I made it this morning I really put a lot of love into each one. Solar- it..its the best cupcake I ever had (its the first cupcake as well wait I hope she is not looks at pinkie ....she is) Pinkie- so want to talk about it? Solar- I really don't if you don't mind (pinkie's face when from exited to caring smile) Solar- umm pinkie I know its not good to ask a mares age but I'm curious sense you act well very young? Pinkie- it's okay I'll tell you im 18 (she said casually think drunk some coffee) Solar- 18? But you look 25? Pinkie- that's funny well I was 25 but a spell went wrong and now I'm a cute young mare again I kiss like one too. Solar- seriously stop it. Pinkie- nope I'm going to tease you forever (she said too happily) so you don't want your first kiss with such a cute mare? Solar- I think I will wait until I'm older. Pinkie- well good luck with that (she said as though she knew something) Pinkie- Okay now let's introduce you to a trio of fillies that just like you mister blankie blank solar. Not funny. (they arrive at sweet apple acres at the cmc clubhouse) solar- I hear a lot of giggling. pinkie- Apple bloom, sweetie belle, scootaloo come out! (The cmc come out the yellow earth pony with the red mane and solar couldn't stop staring at her orange eyes she also has a bow on steps out first then a orange Pegasus comes out she has a purple messy mane her eyes match her mane and she has a few bandages on her legs and one on her cheek then a white unicorn with a cotton candy mane her face is kinda hidden sense she is kind of hiding behind the other two.)

chapter 3

Solar- fine but I don't want to sign so stubborn (he gets his fangs out and softly bites her neck and sucks for about 5 minutes then takes his fangs out of her and licks the wound and two wholes disappear) apple bloom- (smiles and hugs solar) thanks for showing me a great night now Maybe applejack could help. Applejack- Ya don't have ah home? Apple bloom- Do you think twilight will let him stay in her castle? Apple jack- Hey Mac do we have any spare rooms- (A big red stallion walks over to applejack and with a strong ascent said) big Mac- Well the spare room is used as an storage room so there ain't much room well unless apple bloom doesn't mind sharing a room? Apple bloom- I don't really mind at long as you don't touch ma stuff.(she looks at him with a big smile) (Later) (apple bloom is under her blanket) solar- Um are you sure sleeping in the same bed is a great idea? Apple bloom- Well I trust ya and ya are my friend.....oh ah kinda cuddle in ma sleep but I'm sure ya won't mind will ya? Solar- Umm I'm not really conferrable with this apple bl. Apple bloom- (Yawn) just go ta bed and don't wake ma up I get cranky when am woken up. (She roles on to her side) solar- Sigh (solar tries to go to sleep but he has to go to the bath room) big Mac- Ya still up huh? Solar- Umm y..yeah I can't really sleep. Big Mac- I think I can help ya. (They go into the kitchen big Mac gives solar a glass of milk) solar- Um so how come you did yell at me like how your sister did when you met me. Big Mac- (Chuckles) well ah don't exactly like talking and ah could tell she already gave ya that talk sense ya were kinda shaking. Solar- Why does she treat apple bloom like she's her mother though a..and were are your parents anyway? Big Mac- Well there... Not around anymore ya met rarity Right? Solar- Yeah why? Big Mac- Well she blames herself for there death. Solar- Oh so that's why she looked like that I saw a lot of sadness and regret in her eyes. Big Mac- Eyup maybe ya should go to bed now oh and (grins) ya lucky ma sister gave ya that talk instead of me. Solar- (He is quite terrifying) (solar goes back to apple Bloom's room and slowly gets back in to the bed and quickly falls asleep) sweetie and scoots- (Whispering) so he is going to stay with your family apple bloom? Apple bloom- (Whispering) ya for now he is in ma room but we will move him ta another room. Scoots- (Whispering) so you invited him in to your bed huh what happened last night (wink) (sweetie belle just sits there with a blush on her face) apple bloom- What!? Nothing what's wrong with ya! (Whispering) scoots-Shhh I was just joking (she said while putting her hoof over apple blooms mouth. Sweetie- (whispering) so sense he wouldn't really talk yesterday when we left did you get anything from him? Apple bloom- (blush) ugh what do ya mean by that? Scoots- (whispering) what's with the blush? Apple bloom- (whispering) huh blush oh um it's just kinda hot that's all it's summer time scoots. Sweetie- (whispering) hey answer the question what are his interest and hobbies? (Solar is awaking and staring at the girls) apple bloom- (huh he's awake turns around to look at solar how did I know?) Solar- why are you three whispering? I am awake? Sweetie- good then you answer the question. Solar- well I don't really have any hobbies I never really left my....home and uhh interests well I like umm using my magic if that counts I usually use it for like a few games and almost everything. Applejack- so ya just like twilight then? Oh twilight want's to talk to ya and it seems ya not busy. Scoots- hey not fair we finally got him to actually have a real conversation with us! Apple bloom- well with the two of ya actually. Solar- it won't take long right? Applejack- uhh ya might want ta bring a few snacks with ya (later)

scootabonding

Solar- (tries to put his wing back in he winced) ow I..I'm not able to. Pinkie- oh your not.....you don't have enough power you don't feed often do you? Solar,apple bloom, and twilight- how do you know that?! Pinkie- umm well duh I'm pinkie pie (under her breath) sometimes everypony is just an idiot and even I can't stand them. Twilight- I heard that. Pinkie- (cheerfully tone) heard what twilight i think your going a little (sing voice) loco in the coco? Twilight- what! Pinkie we both know I heard what you muttered under your breath and it was very very rude and very unlike you! Pinkie- well (her tone went from fast and happy and with every word got slower and angrier) maybe its because I'm very very very ......VERY ANGRY Solar- (her looks were now a duplicate of pinkamena but with no blood) pinkie- SO TWILIGHT SPARKLE SHUt the fu......(she looked at apple bloom and solar and looked down she looked a bit less dark pink) I...I.......I was so angry and I almost said..... Solar- (I though she was going to cry but I'm glade she didn't she seems like the pony who shouldn't ever cry) twilight- I..its alright pinkie maybe you two should go. (Solar finally pulled his wings in) (Solar and bloom were walking near sugar cube corner when they saw diamond tiara insulting scootaloo) Solar- that little (he rushed over to scootaloo and heard only the end of the insult.) Diamond- good cry a useless Pegasus like you should cry I mean seriously you idolize a pony and want to fly with her yet you can't even fly stupid little broken....(scootaloo was crying really badly she could have filled a pool solar tackled  diamond tiara) Solar- leave scootaloo alone! Diamond- how dare you touch me you filthy swine looking beast! Solar- I'm sorry PRINCESS but you little words wont work on me! Diamond- oh well it will work on the stupid dump pathetic little hillbilly! Apple Bloom- h..hey (she saw how angry solar was she feared he would try something horrible) s..solar c..calm down please I know what ya thinking. Scoots- do....... it..... solar (said between sniffles) diamond- oh yes listen to flightless abomination and the farm girl born from incest! Solar- d...don't you dare ever call them that again!! Diamond- hmm it seemed the little farm girls insult really got on your nerves oh I can't believe this somepony actually cares about IT and you have feelings for IT! Solar- it...it if you don't stop it i will kill you!! (A shadow flew over them and looped back around a cyan mare landed her mane was a rainbow her eyes were velvet and the by the looks of her she was furious her cutie mark was a rainbow lightning bolt coming from a cloud she seems very tomboyish) ???- what is happening here!!!! Scootaloo- rain...(sniff) bow dash (scoots tried to make it looked like she wasn't ever crying) Solar- (started to charge at diamond tiara while she was distracted but bloom grabbed his tail with her mouth and solar fell she let go) apple bloom- KNOCK IT OFF! (she glared at diamond tiara) AH HOPE YA AND YA WHOLE FAMILY DIE!! (She runs away crying) Solar- a...apple... Bloom ....apple bloom wait ( he starts to run after her but stops and looks at scootaloo) you alright scoots (she shook her head so rainbow wouldn't hear the crackling in her voice) dash- you little brat you better leave before I tell your dad (diamond tiara got scared an ran off) (dash looked at solar) who are you! You another bully! Scoots- h..he's ....ou...our n...new friend/ body guard (she starts to cry again and solar wipes away her tears.) Solar- you can stop crying now it makes you look ugly (he chuckles) scoots- (smiled and chuckled and shoved him) shut up solar now we should get ....you should go see if apple bloom is alright maybe you can get a kiss for making her feel better. Solar- (blush) w...www..what w..why w...would I want......h..her to .....k..kiss ..me? Dash- what is..... going on? Solar- umm....n..nothing I... Ugh got to get going..now. Scoots- yeah get a kiss. Solar- (as he runs off) shut up scoots!! Scoots- (laughs then she gets upset) why does she got to be so mean to us? Dash- hey squirt want to get some ice cream rarity says it always helps. (Solar is running to sweet apple acres he runs past Applejacks and big Mac they look at each other applejack with curiosity and big Mac with a don't do it kind of look solar runs into the house and stops to catch his breath then walks up the stars but slowly he was never able to go up stars with out falling at least once it was a rarity that he didn't fall this was not one of those times he fell at the top step and at the bottom step) Solar- ow!! why did I have to go and get a crush for I never cared about anypony else I never even cared for my parents! especially girls they always  brought so much trouble everypony always brings so much trouble and I have to become such a social bucking pony!! (He bangs his head on the bottom step a twice) why... My heart feels so weird my mind feels so clouded with so many thoughts that I know won't ever happen I'm not ment to be here I should just... Just leave g..go h..home.... Great now I'm lying to myself more I don't have a home or a family never I....I don't even deserve it only ponies need homes,love,and family's .....I...I'm no pony there is no chance in hell that a filthy beast like me would ever get loved! (Solar burst into many tears.)

???-its good to finally meet you. (This mare was purple with a purple mane and purple highlights and purple eyes and she was an alicorn!) Solar- (whimpers) a..al..alicorn!! ???-are you alright usually ponies are afraid once they meet spike anyway I am twi

???-its good to finally meet you. (This mare was purple with a purple mane and purple highlights and purple eyes and she was an alicorn!) Solar- (whimpers) a..al..alicorn!! ???-are you alright usually ponies are afraid once they meet spike anyway I am twilight sparkle nice to meet you. Solar-.... P..please could you s..stay away? Twilight- oh um what's wrong....with (she sniffs the air) (her cheerfulness disappears and she looks at solar) oh well been feasting lately? Solar-..... I..its not l..like that apple bloom made me I didn't want to I swear I just wanted to be her friend and she said no lies and I don't want a cure pony like her not liking me! Twilight- she forced you to feast wait cute oh...oh I see you have a crush on apple bloom so you told her you were a vampony if you told her that why didn't she run away? Solar-... V..vampony (his mane burst in to flames) vampony I'm no vampony I'm a Vulcan!! (Fire ice and lightning spread around him on the floor) (he looks around scared with tears in his eyes) (everything went away) m..maybe i don't belong here my.... my clan leader was right vamponies can't live with normal ponies? (Twilight feels guilty apple bloom comes through the door to hug solar) apple bloom- don't say that ya idiot ya belong here ya just like us (glares at twilight) how could ya twilight!? Twilight- well I thought he was a vampony I'm sorry solar. Solar- (stops crying) you didn't hear everything did you? Apple bloom- no I just got here why? Twilight- that's not important do you want to talk solar or? Solar- I am fine we could talk now. (They all sit on a couch) twilight- okay so I'm curious about all those powers is that a normal thing for vampony..I mean vulcans to do? Solar- no it isn't I um actually met this weird bearded pony with this weird hat and he was doing something and I ruins it and got this power's. twilight- star swirl the bearded you met star swirl!! Ohmygosh ohmygosh ohmygosh. Apple bloom- yeah she is gonna be at that for a bit ???- twilight what happened apple bloom oh ma new freind is telliñg twilight how he met star swirl