The Asylum

by Harmony771

Chapter 2 - Hooves Asylum

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The buliding was extreamly large and tall, a very frightening place to be. Mothers used to say to the children if they misbehaved, the lunics of hooves asylum would come and take them away if they didnt go to bed. But of course there just storys but even so the four mares stood wide eyed trembling with fear and Twilight gulped walking towards the gate and pushing it open as Fluttershy screamed and jumped into a near by bush.

"Fluttershy come on!" Rainbow Dash spoke whilst pulling her friend out of the bush and pushing her to keep walking. Sighing Fluttershy found her hooves and started following Twilight who was already half way down the path. As they lost space between them they were at the doors, from here you could see how run down it was as the stepped through the doors a crash was heard, they all span around to see that they were blocked in by piles of bricks which had fallen down.

"I guess theres no turning back now" Rarity giggled nervously stepping in the lead she said
"Lets get going" walking to the desk she picked up a map, some keys and a torch.


The deeper into the asylum they went the creeper it got, the farthest hardest to reach room was the one they wanted, typical really. Shadows crept round every corner as the four mares said nothing to each other and just kept walking with Rarity in front, the Twilight, Rainbow Dash and at the back Fluttershy. As they got closer and closer to their destination and laughter filled there ears that once used to be reassuring and brought a smile on their faces, but now was disturbing, menacing and brought a chill down each of their spines. Then silence, it was like this for a few minutes until a clattering filled the corridor and then darkness pure darkness.

"Whats going on" Rarity screamed
"I think the powers gone out, the flash light Rarity the flash light!" Twilight spoke in a panicked tone, Rarity fumbled with her bag and turned the flash light on.
"One Two Three Four five.. Good were all here.." Rarity said sighing in relief but As she said five Twilights face went pale and her ears flattened.
"R..rarity theres only four of us.." Raritys eyes widened as she saw the fifth pony. Pink body and a straight pink mane and tail. Laughter filled the corridor again.
"Run!" She screamed as the four mares ran in any direction the could but rarity dropped the flash light so ran in complete darkness as they split off into two groups Rainbow and Fluttershy, and Rarity and Twilight. Pinkie had vanished as Dash panicked in blidness tripping over the lost flash light.

"Great now we can see" as the two pegasi went in one direction the others went the opposite way using there horns as a light source. Four mares one killer in a maze of darkness trapped and scared, laughter once again filled the air.


Author's Note

Okay sorry its not longer but its short and sweet

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