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Jedi: Sins Of The Mother

by Logic Flip
Should one be defined by their past or their future? Even if they don't know about it? Should the sins of the past shakle those of the future? Star Wars/MLP Crossover

Where there is treachery, find loyalty.
When there is hate, be kind.
Where there are lies, find honesty.
Where there is greed, be generous.
Where there is sadness, find laughter.
When there is magic, there is the Force.—Ditzy Doo, to her daughters two days before her death.


It was raining when we buried mom. Sparkler and I with the help of the priest, Time Turner wrapped her in a white shroud and carried her to the cemetery.

Her name was Dtizy Doo.

It had surprisingly easy to lift her. Pegasus ponies were light by nature but I never imagined that mom would have been this easy to pick up even with the help of Mr. Time Turner and my sister. When she was alive she seemed larger than life itself. The sickness that killed her somehow made her…less. Even her tattoos had faded ever so slightly.

Now…

Now she just seemed so small. The mare who had worked her fingers to the bone, who smiled in spite of everything, who taught me, taught my sister, was just too light.
I can still remember when she first started coughing.

It’s probably nothing, my little muffin. I’m just a little under the weather. It’ll pass.

Only it didn’t.

The burial took place at the poor and destitue ponies’ graves in a walled-off section behind the church, away from the main plots of land. It was there that we dug her grave in the water logged clay. It took no time to dig one big enough.

There was no coffin. We couldn’t afford one for her.

I had thought, during that funeral, that life couldn't possibly get any worse.

The next day I was proven wrong.

Note: Inspired by this and this and some other fanfic on fimfiction that I can't find right now.

Thanks to Autumn Forest for collaborating and editing the first chapter with me.

Cover art done by this brilliant guy

Teen
Incomplete
Adventure
Crossover
Gore
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Dark
Alternate Universe
Anthro
 
SDDPM

20000 words: Estimated about 2 hours to read

6 Chapters:

  1. Prologue: Dark Horse 2014-10-31 19:21:01 UTC
    709
  2. Simple Gifts Can Be Taken Away 2014-12-05 20:56:29 UTC
    4783
  3. Forgive Me For Failing You 2014-12-31 00:43:13 UTC
    4705
  4. New Faces, New Problems 2015-01-12 16:14:28 UTC
    3276
  5. The First Step 2015-01-18 19:35:37 UTC
    4417
  6. Flashback #1: A Meeting Of The Minds 2015-01-29 18:16:51 UTC
    2110