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The Visitor.

by The Frank
A mysterious mare is haunting Fluttershy's dreams. Then the same mare appears in the flesh... There is no such thing as vamponies...right?

As a young filly, Fluttershy was troubled with nightmares, in which a beautiful unicorn did unspeakable things with her. The dreams subsided after some time, only to return shortly after her mothers funeral.

And then, the mysterious Rairty appears, turning her life upside down and evokes feelings Fluttershy never thought she'd have.

But who is this Rairty Van Bellemont? Why does she look like the mare from her dream? And what does she want with Fluttershy?

And does vamponys really exist?

Anthro, because I can. Inspired by Carmilla, so if you've read that one, you know what to expect. Still, I hope it will be an entertaining story! There wont be clop, but there is one scene that contains sex (if there's is a difference there...) It's in chapter five.

Cover art by Vautaryt

Chapter one is edited and proofread by Nopony important. Chapter five is edited and proofread by Taialin. And chapter 2-4 is slightly rewritten with the input of the latter. Actually, without their help, it wouldn't be half as good as it is now.

Chapter six is now totally rewritten. I wasn't satisfied with the events.

Edit 5th April 2018: I'm sorry. But it's just been to long and i've lost contact with the story. I don't want to give any more false hope. There will be no more.

Cancelled
Anthro
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Dark
Alternate Universe
Romance
Sex
 
TROFB

19861 words: Estimated about 2 hours to read

7 Chapters:

  1. Chapter one. Obscure dreams (second edition) 2014-10-23 15:39:55 UTC
    3123
  2. Chapter two. Dust to dust. 2014-10-24 23:54:02 UTC
    3430
  3. Chapter three. Feline. 2014-10-30 23:39:37 UTC
    2545
  4. Chapter four. Tea and cakes. 2014-11-05 23:55:08 UTC
    3832
  5. Chapter five. Consummation. (a bit NSFW) 2014-11-16 00:07:01 UTC
    3456
  6. Chapter six. Examination and temptation. (rewritten on July 22th 2016.) 2015-02-23 22:47:08 UTC
    3475
  7. Chapter seven. The importance of dinner. 2016-07-22 16:04:14 UTC