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The First of Many

by Spirit Shift
Twilight takes the foals into Whitetail Woods for the annual Nightmare Night scare tradition. However things don't go as expected. Twilight comes back, scared out of her mind, and the foals are mentally broken. What happened?

Due to a recent string of ponynappings in Manehatten, some of the ponies in Ponyville are considering the cancellation of Nightmare Night for safety. However, this saddens Twilight because she finally came up with a scare tactic for this year's Nightmare Scare that doesn't include Luna. Using her influence, she convinces the town to hold Nightmare Night and allow her to continue her plan.

However things don't go as expected. When Twilight comes back from Whitetail Woods with the foals, Twilight is hyperventilating and scared out of her mind while the foals are mentally broken. The next day, Twilight seems to be the only one to remember anything. Just what in Equestria did she see?

My first Dark Fic. My only regret was that for once I couldn't come up with an interesting name.
Big Thanks to Lightning Sword and Ersmiller for their help with looking over this mess.

Teen
Complete
Dark
Alternate Universe
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
 
SRCOT

22687 words: Estimated about 2 hours to read

5 Chapters:

  1. Letter #1 2014-10-27 23:19:16 UTC
    6497
  2. Letter #2 2014-10-28 23:35:38 UTC
    3995
  3. Letter #3 2014-10-30 02:14:15 UTC
    3611
  4. Letter #4 2014-10-30 23:45:06 UTC
    4742
  5. The Final Letter 2014-10-31 23:50:24 UTC
    3842