A vampony in ponyville

by Toxic Charm

Rating: mature
Tags: Sex, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Romance, Fluttershy, Original Character
Length: 2476

Keen observation received a new case involving a colts death from bleeding out via bite marks on his neck.

Warning:Contains clop, and small amounts of blood.

Keen observation was sitting in his office when Dusty prints informed him about a new murder. The victim being a colt, cause of death bite marks. Keen starts to wonder. What is in ponyville... And what will the killer do for freedom...

Published 2014-10-29 06:20:07 UTC
Last updated 2014-10-29 06:20:07 UTC

A vampony in ponyville

I sit in my office dozing off, it had been a slow day and it was nearing midnight. When suddenly a loud bang fills the room from my office door being slammed open. None other than Dusty Prints stood at the door. "Celestia damn, what happened to knocking these days?" I ask annoyed as I sit up. "What is it this time?" I inquire.

Dusty takes a deep inhale before speaking quickly."Well we have a strange case Keen, it seems this victim was known as 'Cut Stone' a diamond merchant from Las Pegasus, he was in town for the third annual gem fair and was last scene leaving with a mare who could not be identified due to wearing a hoodie. He was Found dead at 11:39 PM in a back alleyway with his neck spurting blood from two small holes over his artery."

I raise a eyebrow at him. "Oh? What is this some kind of pre-nightmare night joke?"

Dusty grumbled. "Keen I'm dead serious, we have the scene cordoned off and we moved the body to the morgue, if you don't Believe me come with me and I'll show you."

I shrug. "Fine, I'm bored out of my mind anyway." I get up and walk to the door. "But seriously, learn to knock before ramming Into my office." I grumble as I close the door behind.

He stayed silent as we left the station and started walking off to the crime scene. As we arrive I'm greeted with the yellow 'Crime Scene do not cross!' Tape gently blowing in the wind marking off a dark, dingy, alleyway.

I step under the tape and approach the chalk drawing, the colt had been on his side his hooves extended forward. I glanced around. "Hmm, this ally seems to be a bit um, dirty for a diamond merchant,don't you think?" I pointed out as I turned to Dusty.

Dusty shrugged. "Maybe he was taking a short cut to the hotel and someone followed him."

"Or, someone was with him. Didn't you say he was from Las Pegasus?" I asked looking around the area closely.

"Yeah, but how's that relevant?" Dusty asked quizzically.

"The only way a pony could navigate through the labyrinth of alleyways is if they are very familiar with the streets and turns. Seeing as he was from Las Pegasus for the gem fair which was established three years ago there would be absolutely no way he could know these alleys." I continued as I find a strand yellow fur. "It seems there's a small bit of evidence. We're looking for a mare with yellow fur that would be interested in gems enough to go to the fair."

"How do you know it's a mare?" Dusty asked curiously.

"The fur is to soft to be from a colt, you said he was leaving with a mare but she couldn't be seen? Maybe that was someone wanting to help him by showing him a shortcut. Only not to his hotel, but to the morgue..."

"Well Keen, the only yellow mares I can think of off the top my head is Fluttershy, but she wouldn't hurt a fly...seriously she can't even get close enough too, she's afraid of them." Dusty pointed out.

"I don't care if she's afraid of flies. At the moment she's a suspect, bring her in for questioning while I go to the morgue to examine the body." I demand walk towards the direction of the morgue.

Dusty sighs. "Ok, I'll go get fluttershy for questioning. I think it's a waste of time though." He stated walking towards the other direction. As his hoof steps get softer and softer from distance I begin to think. "I don't think it would be Fluttershy,but she's the only mare with yellow fur. However,it is possible it could be another pony." I sigh. "Guess I should wait till I see the corpse and her questioning." I
Mutter to myself as I arrive at the morgue. I walked into the clean room lined with metal doors all on the walls, the smell of early decomposition filled my nostrils as I walk towards the coroner,I hear him softly muttering to himself. "And I'm gonna make sure you're all Perty,and I'll put you in the make up that's been sittin' on my shelf."

"Uh hello." I stammer out as I touch his shoulder.

He jumps back in alert and looks at me in almost disgust. "Do you mind? I'm spending time with one of my friends!" I glance at the autopsy table and see the cadaver of a young mare on the table naked.

I turn pale. "I'm not even gonna ask..." I think to myself. "I'm keen observation, I'm with the police and we're investigating a murder. Do you have the body of the colt 'Stone Cut'?"

He murmurs to himself and points to one of the doors. "It's unlocked, just make your examination quick."

"oh trust me,I ain't looking for any reasons to stay. You crazy bastard." I think to myself as I walk to the door watching my back as I see him caressing the mares cheeks.

I open the heavy metal door and feel cold Air escape as I slide the try out. "Lets see what we got here." I mutter to myself slide the white sheet down and see the frightened face of the dead colt.

I lean in to the neck almost instantly as I see something to catch my eye. On the edge of his neck tangled in his long black mane I see a single pink hair...

"Fuck..." I think to myself realizing that it's not looking for for Fluttershy. I replace the sheet and return the corpse into it's chilling bed.

"Uhhh thanks?" I say the colt as I walk to the exit. He waves his hoof to the door not taking his eyes off the body.

"we may need to investigate what goes on here sometime..." I think as I leave with quick haste.

On the way back to the station I can't help but think how bad this must look for the element of kindness. I sigh as I walk back into the station and see Dusty at his desk. "Yo keen, we got fluttershy,she was seen wandering around the fair grounds when we found her. She claims to know nothing at all but she was found wearing a hoodie,like the one ponies said they saw." I nod as I walk to the questioning room.

"Thanks Dusty,I'd like to ask my own questions." I say opening the door and walking in.

Inside the windowless room sat a single light over a metal table and two chairs. Sitting in one of them was Fluttershy with her mane unkempt wearing a black hoodie,staying silent she glared at me. "Hello fluttershy, I'm Keen and I have a couple questions for you."

"If it's about that colt I had nothing to do with his death!" She hissed showing her fangs.

I looked at her raising a eyebrow. "Oh than maybe you can explain a pink strand of hair on the cadaver and some yellow fur found at the scene hmm?"

She continued glaring at me. "Fine I did bite him,So what of it? All I did was have a little sip, stupid pony couldn't take it I guess. Not my fault."

I looked at her my jaw agape at the fact that she just admitted to it. She slowly gets off the chair and walks close to me. "Now keen,I don't want to go to prison, so perhaps there's something I could do for you if you make it so I get off the hook..." She said as she slowly kissed my neck, her icy breath tingling my skin.

"A-ah,I-I'm afraid I c-can't d-do that..." I said trying to keep track of my thoughts.

"Oh why not?" She asked as she backed away and slipped her hooded off and stretched out her bat wings. "It's not like killed a great person, if you check his record you can see he stole some gems from shops to sell in his, and all I did was have a little drink." She said smirking.

I try to remember a case I read about from Las Pegasus a while ago but my mind too fuzzy from the lack of blood flow to my head. Fluttershy still smirking trots over to me putting her hooves on my chest leading me to sit on one of the chairs "Oh? Looks like you're excited...I can take care of that." She softly teased as she lowered her head to my now fully erect dick. She softly puts her lips on to the tip before gently licking the tip of it with her tongue,the slippery muscle felt slightly cold as she slowly moved her head down my length flicking her tongue around the head.

I gently moan as I put my head back I feel her smirk. She suddenly fits the entire erection into her mouth and throat as my breaths get heavy. I feel her tongue slipping around as she bobs her head up and down,her sharp fangs just barley scraping my member. As I feel close she suddenly pulls her head up.

"Oh no you don't,if I'm doing this I'm getting off too," she teased with a wink as she gets up and walks to the table putting her front hooves on it. She gently hisses as she wiggles her flank to me.

I bite my lip as I get up, my animalistic instinct taking over I put my hooves on her flank and gently insert my tip into her her now glistening vagina. "Oh don't be such a pussy! Just ram it in already!" She demands. Following her request I slam my hips forward making my hips flush with hers as she loudly moans, I begin to start pounding her insides with my member. "Ahhh, that's mor- Ohhhh...like it.." She said through hissed pants as she bit her lip, strands of her mane start falling over her eyes as she starts to roll her hips with my movements a she puffed out her bat like wings.

As I gave my final thrust I feel her tight her pussy as I came,filling her with my hot sticky seed, as I finished inside her she reached her climax, as I pullout I see our juices mixing and dripping out of her. Her hooves on the table and her mane a mess she turned her head to look at me over her shoulder. "A-ah that felt s-so good..." She said through her panting as she picked herself off the table. She picks her hoodie up and with a bit of struggling her slips it over her and her wings. "Now remember, I get let go.." She reminded me as she walked up to me nibbling my neck.

"I'm a colt of my word..." I Reply as I play back everything in my head.

She smirks at me. "don't worry, I'll be a good little pony. I only eat a few times a year, and not all of them die." She assured me.

I clear my throat. "Ah...right,anyway I should go out there and let them know your free to go..." She smiles as I walk out of the questioning room.

"Hey keen, was everything alright in there? I head some moaning and shit," Dusty asked me looking concerned.

"You're hearing things buddy, anyway you were right it's not her. She's free to go." I respond as I walk back to my office.

I close the door behind me wondering if I made a mistake. I look at the clock and see it's nearing 3:15 in the morning. I sigh as I lay back in my chair. Excited for getting off work in forty-five minutes I start to flick through the pages of one of my horror books.

As I flick through I see a bit on vamponies, I freeze in sheer horror at the bit I read:

"vamponies were a rare breed of pony, not much known about them or how one becomes a vampony, all that is known is they are bloodsuckers of the opposite gender,and that they can be normal in the day and some nights,however a few nights a year they turn into the vampony form.

A hundred moons ago the last remaining tribe was banished by the great 'Star Swirl The Bearded' the vamponies sights dwindled but never ceased. Vamponies are known to be seductive, and if the opposite gender is to fornicate with them they are bonded to the vampony until either the vampony master/mistress dies or the pony bonded to them.

"What the hell do they mean by 'bonded'!?" I tell madly at myself slamming the book closed. "Relax keen, it's just a story. Maybe I just need to go home and get some sleep,too much stress maybe." I mutter to myself as I flick off the light and close my office door.

"Hey Dusty,I'm gonna turn in a bit early, a little tired tonight ya know?" I say to my friend as I pass his desk.

"Ah finally you're taking it easy, for once you're not gonna sleep in the office.you have a good night man." He replies with a smile as I walk out of the station into the dark cold night.

As I walk I try to talk myself out of how silly my mind is, "fluttershy may have been in on a prank,or maybe the officers hired some mare that does look a like" I sigh as I open the door to my old apartment. I close the door behind me and flick the switch, the light flickers and goes out. "M-maybe the fuse burst?" I say through nervous laughter as I stumble in the dark. "Maybe I should just get some sleep." I mutter.

I hear shuffling behind me and I freeze as I feel a icy breath run down the back of my neck. "Oh, but the fun is just starting..." I hear a soft raspy voice whisper.

I quickly spin around and see the yellow vampony, before I could react she charged at me and threw me on the bed and straddled me.

"Hopefully you'll be able to handle blood loss my little pet..." She giggled as she drew close to my neck and sinks her teeth hard into my neck.

I struggle under as she sucks on my neck hard,the world starts to turn fuzzy and dark as I pot the luck under the spell of my new vampiric mistress.

Author's Note

Happy Halloween/nightmare night everypony :D

I hope you all enjoyed the fic as much as I did writing it. There may be more like it and/or more of this story (as a keen story arch)

Thank y'all for reading!
~Toxic