Don't Yell At Her Animals

by JonTheBroPony

Rating: mature
Tags: Main 6, Gore, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Cutie Mark Crusaders
Length: 1944

What happens when you yell at Fluttershy's animals, and she finally gets tired of

The Crusaders want to help Fluttershy take care of her animals, but when one of them yells at Angel Bunny, Fluttershy finally snaps.

Published 2014-10-31 01:00:06 UTC
Last updated 2014-10-31 01:00:06 UTC

Don't Yell At Her Animals

It was a bright sunny day in Ponyville: Pinkie was baking; Rainbow Dash was soaring through the sky at a break neck pace; Rarity had just finished her fall line; Twilight had even just finished learning a couple new spells she was going to unveil to her friends later that evening. The only person missing was Fluttershy. The last anyone had seen her she was feeding the animals. She’d been in her cottage for days it seemed. No one had seen Sweetie Belle, Apple Bloom, or Scootaloo that day either. They had been staying with Fluttershy, helping her with bathing, feeding, cleaning up after, etc… her animals.

“Fluttershy?” Twilight yelled softly as she knocked on her door. “You in there?”

The door opened on its own, slowly with a loud creek. It was dark; the lights were out and the night sky didn’t help to illuminate anything. Twilight’s horn lit up as she used her simple light spell until she found a few lanterns to light. She looked around and gasped as she saw what looked like blood trailing up the stairs. She had to take a step back, the blood making her woozy.

“I-I’ll come back. I need the others.” She thought running out the door running into Rainbow Dash, Pinkie, Rarity, and AJ all coming toward the cottage.

“Why darling whatever is the matter?” Rarity says seeing twilight sweating and out of breath.

“Something horrible has happened to Fluttershy.” She says catching her breath. “I don’t know what but I know it isn’t good. Follow me girls, we need to find out what happened.”

The five ponies gallop back up to Fluttershy’s cottage, Rarity reaching the house first and seeing the blood she runs back out and vomits.

“T-Twilight… The blood on the stairs.” She says heaving again.

“Yeah I know I saw. I was going to come get you guys to help investigate.” She says entering the house behind Rarity, Pinkie, Rainbow Dash, and Applejack close behind.

“I hope Sweetie Belle, Scootaloo, and Applebloom are okay.” Applejack says just remembering they were there. “Oh buck! What if something happened to Applebloom?” AJ says breathing heavily, starting to hyperventilate.

“It’ll be okay Applejack, those three know how to get out of a bad situation.” Twilight says putting her hoof on the first step of the blood covered stairs; it started to stain her hoof it is obviously fresh, very fresh.

She started up the stairs the smell of death and refuse almost knocking her back, as the rest of them slowly started to follow her up the stairs.

“It smells horrid.” Rarity said covering her nose with her foreleg.

“Tell me about it.” Pinkie Pie said trying to step around the blood but failing, the red cover her bright pink coat.

Rainbow Dash even had to try not throw up. When they finally reached Fluttershy’s room the smell was over whelming. They could see a shadow moving under the door and light laughter, it almost sounded like Fluttershy.

“On three girls.” Twilight remarked slowly pushing the door open.

“One.” She pushed a little more.

“Two.”

“Three” She shouted the door flying open and hitting the wall.

The five couldn’t believe what they saw before their eyes, Fluttershy was laughing, not noticing them as she ripped the organs from Sweetie Belle’s stomach.

“That’ll teach you to yell at my animals like that!” She shouted grinning as Sweetie Belle’s organs fell out of her stomach.

They stood in silence as they saw Scootaloo and Applebloom’s lifeless bodies hung by the back of the neck their eyes gouged out, and their bodies empty of everything but the blood that still poured out of the stomach of the other two. They were hanging next to Sweetie their capes below them their names written in the blood left over from their lifeless bodies.

Fluttershy laughed as she turned to see her five friends watching in horror as she swallowed Sweetie Belle’s eye.

“Hello guys, they yelled at my Angel Bunny, so I punished them.” She said laughing, a laugh that almost seemed like it wasn’t her own. “They called him mean” Fluttershy looked and kept smiling.

“F-Fluttershy what is wrong with you?” Rainbow Dash said shoving her to a wall, Rainbow Dash screamed once Fluttershy hit the wall. She fell to the ground, her stomach bleeding and scalpel in Fluttershy’s hoof.

Fluttershy laughs loud and kicks Rainbow Dash in the side.

“Guess she should’ve been a bit more careful.” Fluttershy remarks laughing, looking right at Twilight, her eyes bloodshot. Fluttershy grinned and her eye twitched. “Guess you guys were a bit too late huh?” Fluttershy laughed, as blood dripped from her hoof.

“You’ve gone mad!” Rarity says her horn glowing attempting to pull the scalpel from Fluttershy’s hoof, tears swelling up in her eyes as she looks at Sweetie Belle’s lifeless body. “How could you do this to them?” She says shouting the scalpel slowly becoming free of Fluttershy’s grasp.

Rainbow Dash starts to cry as well laying in pain under Scootaloo’s dead body, blood making her light blue coat stain a dark red color. “You won’t get away with this Fluttershy.” She yells as Twilight tosses a lamp at Fluttershy, but misses.

“Twilight! You know better than to throw things at your friends!” Fluttershy says bucking Twilight’s chin as hard as she can causing it to shatter. “Now you two can help me take care of them or join them.” Fluttershy smiles, and locks the door putting the key in a jar of salt and what looked like acid.

Rarity began crying as loud as she can. “Never! Kill me if you have to!” Rarity says throwing up from the mix of the smell and seeing her baby sister dead, her organs strewn across the room. “Just why Fluttershy? Why them? Why not somepony else?” She cried out.

“Somepony else didn’t yell at My Angel Bunny.” Fluttershy said stepping on Rarity’s throat, and letting her hoof press on it, and slowly Rarity began to choke.

Rarity looked up as life fled from her eyes, all of the tears pouring out. Her body grew limp slowly, her eyes turned white as they shut one last time.

“Goodbye Rarity.” Fluttershy said without mercy as she watched Rarity die. “I guess I should finish the job with Rainbow and Twilight.” She thought. She looked at Pinkie Pie. “If you want the key, go for it. Just don’t hurt yourself to bad.” She laughed.

Fluttershy began sharpening a blade, watching Rainbow Dash slowly start to bleed out, it was taking a bit longer than she liked so she took the large machete blade and with one quick motion sliced through Dash’s neck without any resistance from her bone or muscle, laughing all the way. “One down two to go.”

Pinkie began trying to slide her hand in the jar screaming and pulling it out quickly, the fur and skin or hoof melting away from the bone. “Why Fluttershy? Why?” She tried again with her other hoof, sobbing as she got it in up to the foreleg, and pulling out like last time.

“I just got tired Pinkie. You all took advantage of my kindness. All of you. Not just you six, but these foals, and the rest of the town.” She said laughing at Pinkie’s pain watching her skin dissolve, and blood rush out through the places the acid burnt holes into. “So I finally decided to stop being so kind. I decided to do a small kindness to myself.” She said seeing Pinkie’s coat and forelegs stop dissolving, and blood pour out of everywhere it could.

Pinkie tried to walk, but her bones had been made brittle, and slowly snapped in half, as they touched the ground, causing Pinkie Pie to scream as loud as she could, passing out from the pain and blood loss, her hair began to flatten, her breathing came close to a halt, and finally her color faded as she died as slowly as she could, her death satisfying Fluttershy.

“Well Twilight.” Fluttershy turned around saw Twilight standing in front of her the scalpel inches from Fluttershy’s face. “We’ve gotten brave, haven’t we?” She smiled. “One of those things you said I should’ve been, but never could.” Fluttershy grinned. “Guess that’s one of the things that’s going to change.” She said stepping aside, the scalpel braising her neck. “It’d be no fun to just kill you like the others. I want you to see what you made me do. You the most of any of them.”

“You won’t get away with this. Everypony will start looking for us” Twilight stuttered and said failing to speak correctly, tears falling from her cheeks.

“I disagree. Spike won’t be able to come look for you.” She stepped aside Spike’s body lying dead behind her, his eyes gouged out as well. “He’s already been taken care of.”

“Sp-Sp-Spike!” Twilight cried out looking at her dead friend. A Closer friend then any of the others had been. He knew everything about her, they shared everything. No matter what. “Why Spike?” She said crying. “He didn’t deserve any of this. He’s never hurt you!” She falls to the ground sobbing.

“I just wanted to see how fun it was to kill something before I did it with the rest of you.” She laughed kicking his head and crushing his really hard skull. “Now how would you like to go?” She grinned. “Not like you have a real choice.” She looked down at Twilight. “Slow and painful? Or quick and painless?” She said mockingly.

“I pick neither.” She tried to gore Fluttershy with her horn, but missed. She hit the wall as hard as she could, her head bending back violently, her neck broke with a loud snap, she tried to squirm. “I-I can’t feel my legs or anything else.” She said her body going limp.

“Perfect.” Fluttershy pulled her horn from the wall. “Such a rude house guest. First you come in here and shout at me, then you put a hole in my wall. You need to be punished.” She said as broke Twilight’s horn, it splintered all over the place. “No more magic.” She laughed. “Now no more fun.” She stabbed it through Twilight’s eyes, only an inch away from her brain. “I think you’ve seen enough.”

“Please Fluttershy let me go. I won’t tell anyone.” Twilight said in a daze, slowly dying from blood loss.

“We both know you will. It’s not like no one is going to ask about how Celestia’s favorite student lost her eyes.” Fluttershy grabbed her favorite blade, and dulled it so it wouldn’t go straight through. “Well Twilight, it hasn’t been fun.” She said swinging the blade once, laughing and smiling as the blade dug into her neck, but didn’t go all the way through. She watched Twilight scream and writhe on the floor in agony. “Two more should finish the job.” She stopped before she swung at Twilight’s neck the second time. “Spike, take a letter.” She laughs “Dear Princess Celestia, your favorite student just can’t see what went wrong.” Fluttershy laughed as she swung the second time, causing twilight’s throat to be exposed. “Today she learned not to buck with me.” She hit Twilight’s neck one more time as it went straight through, her head bouncing across the floor. “What now?” She thought, seeing the cut on her neck getting a bit bigger from her moving her head. Fluttershy fell to the ground as her head hit the ground first.

The End

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