A Promise Fulfilled

by JBSgirl

First published January 1st, 1970 00:00

Note:There are a few wrong grammars/spellings here, please don't say anything bad about them :) But do correct me in the comments. I hope you enjoy the story!

After Rainbow Dash's birthiversary, Cheese was walking into the sunset , leaving Ponyville. Pinkie couldn't resist, she didn't want Cheese to leave so she runs up to him and tells him to stay. Cheese explains to her that he would love to stay but can't, however, he promises to write often and to visit someday. After that, she let him leave. One day, Cheese's Cheesy Sense suddenly triggers while he was walking to the next town/city. What is his Cheesy Sense telling him?

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Pinkie Promise?

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A Promise Fulfilled

Pinkie Promise?

Cheese's POV:

I was about to leave Ponyville, even though I didn't want to..I couldn't help but turn back a few times..I couldn't but look at..her...Pinkie Pie. Her face looked so...sad...I could tell that she didn't want me to leave..but I didn't want to leave either. I stopped looking back and continued my way..I don't to see her sad...I almost cry, actually, but I held my tears. I was finally a few meters away from Ponyville.... "CHEESE! WAAAIIIITTT!!!!!" I turned around and by my surprise, I saw Pinkie running towards me! "Pinkie--" before I could finish what I was saying, she quickly jumped over me an we fell on the ground! I blushed like super duper crazy! "P-Please Cheese..." she said while sobbing "please don't...leave..."

"What? W-Why?"

*Sniff* "B-B-Because...I......I........"

I let out a grin "Because you're gonna miss me?"

"............Yepadoodles..........."

She blush while crying, I also blush. I told Pinkie to get off me, she did, and then we sat on the ground. I held out her hooves.

"Pinkie, please listen, I'm gonna miss you too and I would love to stay. But as much as it hurts, I can't."

"B-but w-why not?"

I let out a sad sigh "I'm a party pony, you're a party pony, it's our duty to make ponies happy and throw super duper parties. I vowed to myself that I'll travel all around Equestria, throwing parties, and making ponies happy. You understand, right?"

She didn't answer me at first, then after like 5 seconds, she wiped her tears and said "Yeah....I understand..." then she gave a hug and I returned the hug.

I then whipered to her ear "Don't worry, I promise I'll come and visit someday." she stopped hugging and looked at me

"R-Really? like super duper absolutely possitively really?"

"Really."

"....Pinkie Promise?"

"Cross my heart and hope to fly, stick a cupcake in my eye."

She giggled to my response..her giggle is so cute..as cute as her...we hugged again. After that hug, we stood up.

"Bye Cheese...I'm gonna miss you..I-I hope we'll see each other again."

"Me too, Pinkie..."

I gave her a kiss on the cheek, she blushed very red....that's so cute....

"Goodbye, Pinkie..."

I then started to walked away while saying:

"Another town, another party..but a party wouldn't be perfect, I'd say, without you. So I promise I'll come back for you someday, that's...a promise."

"..........Bye Cheese..........."

"PINKIE PIE AND CHEESE, SITTING IN A TREE--"

"RAINBOW DASH! Don't tease!"

"Oh you're no fun, Rarity"

"Great job on ruining the sad scene"

"Oh shut up, AJ"

Pinkie turned to her friends with a grin and walked towards them.

Pinkie's POV

After a few minutes of packing my party supplies from the party, I headed straight to Sugarcube Corner, with me pulling my stuff from a wagon and Boneless sitting on my back, I opened the door and closed it quietly to prevent Mr. and Mrs. Cake and the Cakes from waking up. I headed to my bedroom and put my party supplies in my closet then I went to the bathroom to wash my face and brush my teeth. I was really tired from the party but I still had a few energy, that party was pretty easy to throw..especially when you've got two super-duper party ponies! I then let out a yawn then headed back to my room. I turned on my lamp and switch off the lights, I place myself into my soft, comfy bed with Boneless right beside me. He was the gift that Cheese gave me..well, his "memento" or whatevs. Looking at Boneless just keeps on flashing the times I had with Cheese awhile ago..I actually was nervous to talk to him when he came to Ponyville, to be honest..He..He was so...strange yet....handsome and cute. His big, sweet, sparkly green eyes are so admirable..his hair is exactly like mine, alittle shorter, and no wonder he seemed familiar..I actually met him when I was just a filly..I remember...he wore those cute glasses and was sooooooo happy at my party! I remember talking to him actually, I just don't remember our conversation, Gee, that was so long ago..no wonder I didn't remember him. I'm surprised that he still remembered me..he must like have super mind powers or something! Yaaaawwwnnn....Celestia, am I pooped! I looked at Gummy sleeping soundly, then I looked back at Boneless

"Weeelll, I better hit the hay..Good night, Gummy, good night, Boneless!" I placed Boneless in my arms and slowly close my eyes. I then fell asleep, hugging Boneless...

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I know someday..you'll come back..after all, you did Pinkie Promise me. I'll wait for you, even if it'll take years, and years, and years. But I hope you'll keep that promise...I'll look forward to your visit......

...Good night, Cheesie....