Derpy's adventure with Lunex

by XxBlazecatxX

Rating: everyone
Tags: Adventure, Dark
Length: 1486

Derpy got struck with lightning, and broke her wing. Without it she was not able to fly. So she stayed in a cave not aware of a mare living in that cave. When the mare welcomed her, she was feeling more comfortable.

Derpy's wings flapped as hard as they could, as she started to cry. "Nobody cares!" She said to herself.
Just then, her left wing got struck by lightning. She started falling to the ground and heard a crack when she landed. "Oh no… My wing," She exclaimed. "Its broken!". She ran to a nearby cave, not being careful of her surroundings. "I will hopefully be safe here…" she thought. Then, a voice appeared behind her.
"Hello there." Said a strange mare.
"H-hi.." Said Derpy.
"My name is Lunex." She said.
"Im Derpy." Derpy replied.
"Where are you from?" Lunex asked.
"Ponyville.." Derpy said.
"Cool, I was born here, in the Everfree forest." Lunex said.
Then, lightning struck the ground and there was a big boom after it. It rained harder and harder, and got darker and darker. "Would you like to see a trick?" asked Lunex. Derpy nodded as Lunex got something in her mouth. She showed it to Derpy. Then set it on a tree stump. "Ready?" Said Lunex. Derpy once again nodded and Lunex swirled the dust-like structure that she showed to Derpy, and a portal was created. It was shaped in a circle. "You ready for the adventure?" asked Lunex, excited. Derpy nodded, seeming excited. "Alright then! lets go!" Then Derpy and Lunex hopped in at the same time.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2014-11-05 12:23:14 UTC

The river

As soon as the herd of creatures passed through, there was a big, dark river with spots of red. They looked at each-other and back at the river. They slowly flew toward it and realized there were strange things in it. They both started to feel uncomfortable. They soon also saw some bones of other ponies that possibly tried passing through. They even saw some Pegasus in it, so they probably couldn't just fly over it. They landed at the shore of it and Lunex touched the water and felt her hoof sting.

"Eels are in here.." She said. "Possibly traps hidden in the trees around it, so we cant fly over." She added.

"Then...Do we just run through I-" Derpy said as Lunex nodded.

"Its the easiest and fastest way through," She said. Derpy nodded and stuck her hoof in. She flinched and tears started to form in her eyes. "Fight it... Don't let it get to you Derpy." Lunex said. They both ran through, feeling the tears in their eyes and the eels stinging their hooves. A few minutes have passed and they finally made it past the river. They settled in a dark cloud, relieving the pain in their hooves.

Mountain of whispers PART 2

"Ummm.....When did you get a horn!?" Asked Derpy surprised and curious about it.

"I was born with it," said Lunex "although, people never really cared for me, I would always screw something up, and when I did....They would all laugh. Lunex's eyes turned into some kind of bat eyes "But I got them back." She chuckled. "I managed to murder every single one with my horn." She started to laugh like a maniac.  "I got my revenge...Its your turn..." She said as her eyes were starting to bleed. Derpy backed up, "Lunex..?" She asked as Lunex's horn glowed red and a big red beam shot at derpy....It shot straight into her left eye. Derpy was shocked. She put her hoof on her left eye that didn't even exsist anymore. There was only one thing causing her to do this: The mountain itself.  "Derpy was then kind of frustrated and punched Lunex straight in the head, which put her out cold and then carried her on her back.  She was slowed down by this, but she won't stop until they get to the top.

Derpy started to hear the whispers again.  She blocked them out as much as she could.  Her eye started to hurt, mostly because snow was getting into her hollow eye socket.  She looked in her bag to see if she had anything to block her eye socket, when she found her old eye patch, as a kid, she played it with pinkiepie and rainbowdash.

She put it on her eye and tied it around her head.  She hovered over the ground, to keep her hooves from aching.  Derpy started to feel angry, mostly at her friends.  She started to feel hatred and sadness, She shook her head trying to shake it off, but those feelings kept coming back.  She had to at least TRY to ignore these whispers, but no matter how hard she tried, they will get to her mind and take control of her.

After a few hours of flying, She has been feeling angry and sad.  They were almost there, but she didn't feel very happy about it.  Lunex groaned and slid off of Derpy's back.  Derpy kind of giggled, seeing that Lunex had just randomly slid off of her back.  She picked her up, when she felt pride reach her.  She saw a big beam of light aiming at her.  She was transported into some area with only darkness, blood stains, and somepony she could not identify. She started walking  with Lunex still on her back.  "You did well.....Now its your turn..." Suddenly the pony showed itself. Derpy was shocked, it was King Sombera.  She backed up.  "What do you mean?" Asked Derpy. "What do you mean by Its your turn?"

"I mean its your turn to take the throne, take the princess's lives, take their places." Sombera said as he took Derpy's mind.  Then, Lunex woke up and looked with wide eyes at Sombera.  "What are you doing to her!?" Asked Lunex.

"I simply told her what to do with you princess's." Said Sombera, knowing her secret

"What did you tell her..?" She said, when Derpy shot a beam at Lunex's heart with her new horn.  Lunex fell and stopped breathing.  Derpy laughed.

Shadow Forest

Lunex, and Derpy ended up in a dark forest, with strange looking plants, and all kinds of creatures. One of them lashed out at Derpy but Lunex pulled out a sword and slashed it in half, and Derpy simply stared, seeing all the creatures blood and guts. "Don't look at it or touch it... It can make you nauseous." Said Lunex, when she tossed a bow and arrow to Derpy. Derpy picked it up and put it on her back. They continued down the path, killing any creatures/monsters lashing out at them. Suddenly one big one, tackled Derpy and bit her in the neck. Lunex quickly got its attention, and fought it. Derpy was down and Lunex was fighting it alone. The creature knocked the sword from Lunex and lashed at her eye. Derpy saw what was happening and snapped back up. She pulled out her bow and shot it straight in the head. Lunex touched her eye with her hoof and felt blood gushing from it. "Are you ok?" Derpy asked, pulling out something out of her bag, she brought with her. She pulled out a first-aid kit.

"I guess...." Said Lunex, "It will take a few days to heal though." She added.

"Yeah."Derpy agreed, and started to rub a pain resistent type medicine on Lunex's eye. "Sorry if it stings, but its all worth it in the end." Said Derpy, realizing she had a scratch on her arm. She looked at it closely and realized how bad it actually hurt. She swallowed up some pills to make the pain go away. They continued down the path until they found a cave to stay in for the pitch black night, just in case it rains. Lunex brought out a muffin, for Derpy. Derpy munched on it while Lunex ate a sandwich. They fell asleep fast, after a day of fighting strange/creepy looking monsters, to stay in a cave to continue the adventure. Derpy had never been in a real adventure. Derpy was really happy to be here.

It was the crack of dawn when they awoke. They gathered their things and continued through the forest. A few hours had past, and no creatures jumped out, no creatures were even heard. "What's going on here..?" said Lunex. "They're usually creatures roaming.."

"Maybe they're...." Said Derpy, wondering what they could be doing or where they're at.

"Oh no..." Said Lunex, Pointing forward so Derpy could see what Lunex's uh-oh was about. There was a huge amount of creatures ahead of them, running toward them.

"Wait....did you completely break your wing?" Lunex asked. "Because there is only one way out of this... We need to get into the air." Derpy tested her wings and barely hovered over the ground. She flapped until she reached Lunex in the sky. She flapped her little heart out until she was able to take control of BOTH wings again. The herd of creatures ran past them below, and looked up, probably wondering how to get up there. Then they gave up and kept going forward.

"Phew, that was close." Said Lunex.

"Yeah.." Said Derpy, panting.

Mountain Of Whispers PART1

They flew from the cloud to the ground and saw a huge and dark mountain. It looked painful to climb or even fly over, it was about 400 ft. tall. They slowly walked toward the mountain and realized there was a path

"Thank Equestria," Lunex said in relief "There is a path." They walked the path up and both started to hear whispers, high pitched whispers. "Cover your ears!" Said Lunex. "They can damage your mind!" Both Derpy and Lunex covered their ears to prevent hearing the whispers, not even half way up and their heads were hurting. They flew a few feet up and flew from there. Just then, there was a big roar.

"Um....Was that a dra-" Derpy got cut off by Lunex. "Yes.."

The dragon dug its way out of the ground and revealed itself. It was a beautiful, snow colored dragon, with red eyes and red claws. It had many scars on its face and its body. "Wait..." Lunex said as she walked toward the dragon. "I think I know what's wrong." Lunex said as she pointed to a cave, a dead cave, that was cracked, and broken down. The dragon's habitat is gone. "Hang on." Lunex showed her unicorn horn. Derpy was surprised. Lunex put the cave together with one of her spells. And the dragon licked her in the face and slithered into it.