An Affliction of the Heart: Chitin's Story

Chitin gave a low hum around her mouthful, carefully dragging her tongue across the rim of Thorny Bramble’s throbbing, jerking cock. She peered up at him with a sly smile dancing in her blue eyes, her equally blue tongue slowly swivelling across the tip of his swollen, eager length.

“O-Oh b-buck, Chitin, s-stop teasing!” Bramble whimpered, a hoof pushing against the back of her head almost urgently, trying to hump up into her muzzle.

Chitin rumbled around her mouthful, giggling, her wings buzzing slightly as she resisted his motions. “But it’s so cute, the way you squirm and gasp!” she purred, lightly kissing at the tip of his wanton erection, letting her lips brush against him with each word.

“Just let me f-finish!” Bramble whined, both hooves trying to push her muzzle down over him this time.

Chitin gave a lustful growl, arching her back slightly and leaning forwards, letting the thick stallion cock shove deep into her muzzle, and then her throat, the smaller changeling pushing down and down and down.

Bramble whimpered in delight, hips humping up towards her face urgently as she gave a series of firm bobs, her tongue grinding against his tip every time she came up, splayed along his underside each time she pushed down. He stared down at her, his cock stiffening and jerking wantonly as he watched the way his eager cock disappeared between her fangs and into the lovely blue muzzle.

A dull buzzing echoed throughout the compound, and Chitin pause, brow furrowing deeply, her nose resting somewhere past the halfway point of Bramble’s aching cock.

“No, no!” Bramble whimpered, hooves clutching at her head urgently. “Don’t stop! Keep going!”

Chitin tried to say something around her mouthful, only ending up making a few muffled gurgling sounds before Bramble began to forcibly move her head up and down his stiff, spasming cock.

The changeling harrumphed around her mouthful, before leaning forwards and setting to work with a rapid, urgent pace. Both forehooves came up, grasping around the base of his cock and starting to jerk it off with a rapid, determined motion, even as she tugged back and began to wash the flared tip of the throbbing length with rapid flicks of her smooth, eager tongue.

Thorny Bramble arched underneath her attention, going rigid and jerking several times before rapid bursts of stallion spunk started to burst from the tip of his cock.

Chitin gave an eager growl, latching onto the flared, spurting tip, soft blue tongue grinding up against the sourced of the musky volleys of cum that were rapidly filling her mouth, tasting her first ever load of stallion spunk.

A soft rumble left the changeling as she swallowed over and over again, mouthful after thick mouthful of stallion jism being pumped into her mouth, coating over her tongue and the inside of her muzzle, only to be swallowed down by the eager changeling.

After several long moments of delight, Bramble came down from his orgasm, giving a shudder and going completely limp.

Chitin came up for air, gasping, tongue hanging out, white with Bramble’s spunk, soft little splatters of it visible on her chin. “You taste good,” she growled heatedly, leaning in to drag her tongue up the front of his cock, “But I need to go.” She leaned back, licking her lips and then rubbing her hooves over her muzzle, and then licking them clean as well.

Bramble was snoring before she even rushed out the door.

Chitin stared.

There was blood everywhere.

It really was quite surprising how much blood a pony could hold.

Carefully, she looked up at Warden, where he stood in stunned silence with his wife. Did he really have that much blood inside him? Did all ponies? That was insane!

“Who did this?” Kuno asked, her tone entirely devoid of any warmth.

Chitin shivered slightly, resisting the urge to take a step backwards. But nobody took a step forwards.

“If any of you did this, step forwards now. Your Queen orders it,” Kuno hissed. The stamp of her hoof smashing against the flagstone beneath in an angry punctuation made several ponies and changeling twitch and jump in surprise.

But still, nobody stepped forwards.

“Did anyone see anything?” Kuno asked, her tone growing more urgent and plaintive. “Someone must know something. There’s a hundred of you!”

“I cannot speak for all, but I was was… otherwise indisposed,” one of the changelings said, giving a significant glance towards a large stallion lurking in the back of the crowd.

Chitin was about to confirm her own ‘indisposed’ state, but was cut off by Kuno almost yelling, “One day. ONE DAY! One fucking day and somepony is murdered! This will not go unsolved! And if one of you are lying about this, I will personally strangle the life from you.”

Chitin was suddenly glad that she was not the murderer. Kuno was pissed.

A guard stepped forwards, saying something to Kuno that Chitin didn’t quite hear.

“Nobody is going anywhere,” Kuno hissed, her tone filled with suppressed rage.

With that, Kuno turned, stepping away from the body and towards the guards, talking to them in a low, sad tone.

Chitin just sat, awkwardly rubbing a hoof with the opposite hoof, ears splayed back and wings buzzing fitfully. Half of her wanted to comfort her queen, to help solve the problem. But the other half of her, the half closest to that place between her hindlegs, wanted to return to Thorny Bramble and enjoy the veritable banquet of love and intimacy.

With a long-suffering sigh, Chitin decided to stay, watching Kuno with narrowed eyes.

“Chitin?”

Chitin almost jumped into the air when her name was spoken. She had been trailing after Kuno, trying to divine what was going on. The dead pony, the one that Chitin had spoken to not even that long ago, was apparently a friend of Kuno and her husband. And her husband, Warden, was off to tell the husband of the dead pony what had happened.

Chitin had been trying her best to keep quiet and unobtrusive, but Kuno had evidently noticed her.

“Y-yes, my Q… Kuno?” Chitin said, trying to regain her composure.

“Follow him, make sure he comes back safe,” Kuno ordered.

Chitin nodded firmly. “Yes, Kuno.”

Warden was already halfway down the road when Chitin started after him. A pair of royal guards were already standing guard at the front gates, watching the skies for any pony or changeling that might try to leave.

Chitin wrinkled her nose, focusing intently for a moment. A flash of green consumed her, and when it faded, she was a pegasus royal guard. She galloped down the drive heading for the front gate. Her new shining blonde mane rippled in the wind, and powerful muscles worked under her new shining white coat. She skidded to a halt in front of the two guards, panting faintly.

“Warden? Where did he go?!” Chitin demanded, injecting authority into her voice.

One of the guards pointed lamely, watching her with interest.

“Celestia damn it!” Chitin growled, whirling on her hooves and spreading her wings. “Don’t you dare let anypony else leave!” Without another word, she threw herself into the air, spreading her wings.

One of the guards turned to the other, eyebrows raising. “Did we… do you recognize her?”

“Nope,” the other guard said, obviously a little bit smitten. “But holy buck that rump!”

“I hope she gets put on our shift more often,” the other guard said, watching the receding shape of the guardpony.

Chitin allowed herself a thin smile of victory as she flew after Warden, quickly gaining on the pegasus.

Warden had sat in front of the door of the little cottage for the longest time. Chitin was already growing bored, laying on her stomach in her natural form with her chin on her hooves, wreathed in shadows where she wouldn’t be seen.

She could feel the pain rolling off Warden in waves, and it was quite a strange sensation to feel from such a close range.

After a few more minutes, Warden managed to scrape together the confidence to knock on the door. A crystal pony stallion Chitin had never seen before opened the door, and Warden dropped the bomb. There was a terse conversation, and then the door was closed and Warden retreated.

Chitin watched the cottage with mild interest. There was a pause of a few moments while the father spoke to the son, and then went to his room. The foal continued to eat his breakfast in mild confusion, more perturbed than actually sad. But the stallion…

Chitin could feel waves of grief rolling off him. Cautiously, she crept towards the cottage, sneaking up to the window of the bedroom and peering in. The stallion was staring at the wall, unblinking. It really was an unsettling image.

With a trembling hoof, he reached for the dresser, pulling down a pink perfume bottle. He sprayed some of it on his hoof, and then held it up to his nose, inhaling deeply, before beginning to sob quietly into his hoof.

The most intense surge of pain and loss poured from the stallion, and Chitin reeled, taking a step back from the window, overwhelmed. Her wings buzzed anxiously, and she staggered a few steps away before likewise retreating, fleeing from the intense emotions that were threatening to overwhelm her senses.

“You! Changeling!” one of the guards called as Chitin strode towards them confidently.

Chitin, back in her pegasus guard form, faltered slightly but she straightened her wings and lifted her chin, tossing her blonde mane. “Are you making a formal accusation, recruit?”

“Drop the act,” the guard said, lowering his spear to point at her.

Chitin’s eyes narrowed slightly, and she snorted once. A puff of green flames consumed her, and Chitin, in her natural form, strode out of them, pushing the spear aside calmly. “I was under orders from Queen Kuno, feel free to take it up with her.”

The guard growled slightly, considering something, before pointing up at the mansion. “If you try to leave again, I’ll have you detained and I will personally see to it that you are as miserable as possible. And by the way,” he added as Chitin started walking up the drive. “Next time you’re going to pretend to be somepony, pick somepony that isn’t as ridiculously attractive. Do you know anything about blending in?”

Chitin arched an eyebrow, before giving a smirk. “Either that, or I’ll just bribe you with sex.”

The guard’s cheeks pinkened, and Chitin noticed that his heart-rate increased quite a lot.

“Gotcha,” she murmured triumphantly as she continued up the drive.

“Kuno?” Chitin asked carefully.

Kuno looked up from a thick book with scribbled writing all over the pages, giving a long sigh and putting down her quill. “Yes, Chitin?”

“I followed your husband. I… lost track of him though,” Chitin admitted, rubbing her hoof with the opposite. “I apologize.”

“It’s fine, he found his way back. Did the guards bother you much?” Kuno asked wearily.

“I told them to come bother you if it was a problem,” Chitin said with a wry grin.

Kuno sighed, placing her chin on the table. “Just what I needed, more chores.”

“Are you okay, Kuno?” Chitin asked carefully.

“I’m drained… tired. I want to curl up and sleep but everypony keeps bothering me. And I’m still waiting to know who murdered my friend. I wish to return the favour,” Kuno said darkly.

“Kill their friends?” Chitin asked blankly.

“Kill them,” Kuno corrected, her eyes flashing dangerously. “Celestia is sending one of their best investigators over from the castle. He’ll find out who did it. More chores, more bother.”

“Let me help,” Chitin said, taking a step forwards, straightening. “I was second in command for Chrysalis. I can handle it.”

“Can you?” Kuno asked plaintively, rubbing her eyes with a hoof. “I need someone to help the investigator. Somepony I trust.”

“Do you trust me?” Chitin asked, uncertain.

Kuno nodded. “I already confirmed your alibi with Thorny Bramble.”

Chitin gave a smug smile.

“You didn’t waste any time finding a partner, did you?” Kuno asked with a wry smile.

“He… satisfies me,” Chitin said candidly.

“I can see why,” Kuno said with a faint giggle. “Look, there is something you can do. I need somepony to help with the investigation. They’re sending over their best investigator, and I need a changeling to partner with him.”

“You want me to…?” Chitin asked carefully.

“WORK with him!” Kuno said with a facehoof. “As in, conduct the investigation along side him. I am not whoring you out.”

“Oh, well,” Chitin said with a slight wave of a hoof.

“I’d do it myself, but I already have too much on my plate,” Kuno admitted with a deep frown. “I can’t devote half my time to that and getting this place running. There’s not enough of me to go around.”

“Warden would agree,” Chitin said with a smug smile.

“Was that… was that a dirty joke?” Kuno asked carefully.

Chitin nodded awkwardly. “It was. Shouldn’t I have?”

“No, it’s fine,” Kuno said with a slight smile. “I’m just pleased that you’re developing so fast. You guys were all clones the day before last.”

“I had some personality humped into me,” Chitin said with a naughty grin.

Kuno rolled her eyes. “I’m sure you did. Look, the investigator will be here in an hour or so. I’ll introduce you, and then you can take your cues from him.”

“Yes, Kuno,” Chitin said with a salute. “Though I do… I have a question.”

“Yes?” Kuno asked.

“Is it… hard to fall in love?” Chitin asked curiously.

“It’s the easiest thing in the world,” Kuno said with a slight smile. “Why do you ask?”

“That pony that Warden went to visit… he was in pain. A lot of pain. I could feel it. I don’t ever want to feel that pain,” Chitin said candidly. “So I’m just hoping that I won’t accidentally fall in love.”

“Accidentally fall in love,” Kuno said with a soft laugh. “I like that. Though I don’t like your chances.”

“What do you mean?” Chitin asked warily.

Kuno shrugged slightly. “You’ll see. You’ll find somepony, and fall in love with them, whether you want to or not.”

“That sounds horrific,” Chitin admitted, frowning deeply.

“It’s the best thing you’ll ever have happen to you,” Kuno assured, waving a hoof towards the door. “Now leave, I have to continue looking through his bucking list of bucking ponies that came to the bucking afterparty.”

“You seem upset,” Chitin said, taking a step backwards.

Kuno opened the book again, and didn’t even look up as she said: “I am.”

Chitin gave a nervous laugh, turning on her hooves and retreating.

Chitin gave an eager growl, grinding her hips down over Thorny Bramble again and again. the entire length of his stiff cock was coated in her liquids, spreading open the blue flesh of her eager, clenching cunny. Her hips shoved down on him again and again, forcing him right to the base in her tight body with each eager motion, even as she kissed him almost urgently.

“This is so hot,” Chitin growled, squeezing him with her hooves, even as she began to bounce with more power and urgency.

“I agree!” Thorny Bramble gasped, pushing her hips down on himself again and again with a hoof on her rump, the other hoof helping to hold her steady. “G-gonna fill you.”

“Yessss... do it!” Chitin hissed heatedly, bouncing her hips up and down on him with a fervent eagerness. “Fill me!”

The thick tip of Thorny Bramble’s cock flared inside her, spreading her deepest reaches, right before hot bursts of gooey spunk started to pump up into her, splashing almost directly against her deepest barrier.

Chitin whined in delight, her motions growing jerky as her body milked around him intently, squeezing and clenching with each firm shove of her hips. Every time she came down, she forced a fresh gush of the stallion’s gooey spunk to drool from around their snug union, making a mess of the base of his throbbing cock.

After several long moments of delight, both pony and changeling came down from their mutual orgasm.

“Your love is so bucking tasty,” Chitin whispered, licking eagerly along the side of Thorny Bramble’s neck.

“Oh sweet Celestia, you are the best,” Bramble murmured weakly, stroking hooves down over her wings with a faint laugh.

“I don’t think you have an adequate sample size, but I’ll take the compliment,” Chitin said with a giggle, biting lightly at the side of his neck. “I still have half an hour before I have to go meet this investigator…” she said, gently wiggling her hips, making the stallion tense up and groan faintly with the sensation of tight changeling flesh gyrating around his used cock. “Do you think you could go again?”

Thorny Bramble stared up at her, before grinning and lipping at the side of her neck. “Tell you what… you clean me up with that cute little muzzle, and I’ll do my very best to try.”

Chitin gave a lustful growl, sliding up and off him, a thick trickle of the stallion’s essence drooling from the blue slit of her thoroughly-used cunny, before she sank down his form, staring up at him. She held eye contact as she lifted his cock with a hoof, beginning to slowly swirl her tongue around the tip with a naughty giggle.

Thorny Bramble gave a low growl of delight, head tipping back slightly as he held her gaze, watching with wide eyes and giving a breathless little whimper.

“Maybe I’ll actually get to savour my meal this time,” Chitin said with a mischievous giggle, as she started to sink her muzzle down over his used cock.

Thorny Bramble gave a low groan, grasping one of her ears with a hoof. “You are insatiable and I love it.”

Chitin just purred around her mouthful of stallion, beginning to bob her head back and forth with intent. After all, she only had half an hour to enjoy her stallion before she had to go meet this investigator.

And she fully intended to enjoy him.