
Starfall
To right a wrong of long ago, Princess Celestia and Luna use their magic to return an exiled pony during the spring starfall festival.
Please note: This is the original story released on DA over 2 years ago and - despite how hard I tried to give it a connection to FiM then - it didn't really stand the test of time. Still, even with all its issues, this was my first fic for MLP and I wanted to give it a permanent home on here.
This story lead to the prequel Dominion of the Night, the spin-off Nightfall, and multiple other stories that have yet to be released. Even so, Starfall was originally a stand-alone story so you won't need to read anything else beforehand. Also, because this story is mostly unedited (and was my first attempt at really writing a full blown fic), it has numerous grammatical mistakes. I've touched it up in places, but some sections would require complete rewrites which would be a bit too much work.
Last but not least, the story centers around an OC of mine named Star Flare which is clearly a mary sue. Love her or hate her, she is what she is. /shrug
tldr; version: is the original story, has a mary sue, only has touch-up edits





9 Chapters:
- Prologue 2014-11-10 21:58:17 UTC1345
- Chapter 1: Reunion 2014-11-10 22:18:19 UTC2387
- Chapter 2: The Festival Begins 2014-11-10 22:29:33 UTC1380
- Chapter 3: Friend or Foe 2014-11-10 22:46:41 UTC2309
- Chapter 4: When Stars Collide 2014-11-11 01:05:05 UTC1895
- Chapter 5: Storm Front 2014-11-11 13:21:56 UTC2670
- Chapter 6: Nightmare Unveiled 2014-11-11 16:10:35 UTC2383
- Chapter 7: Elemental 2014-11-11 22:44:26 UTC3617
- Epilogue: A Return to Once Was 2014-11-12 16:20:43 UTC665