The Rise of Colonel Carnage

by Maxwell Moon-Hoof

Rating: mature
Tags: Random, Dark, Alternate Universe, Human
Length: 506

Gumy Has Been Kidnapped by a revolution war General Pinkie Pie Has changed to Insanity to Rescue Gumy.

Maxwell Moon-Hoof has been invited to another one of Pinkie Pie's Parties. Maxwell Must help Pinkie and the rest of the human and pony team prepare for the party in a special location, while a mystery war general is planning a attack on ponyville, to destroy building and kidnap pets. Pinkie's pet Gummy gets stolen and Pinkie calls on war with his allies, including Maxwell in this dark and violent, warfare story.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2014-11-11 05:58:34 UTC

The Invitiation

"Hey Listen to me, Max! I really could use a pony like you!" A voice in Maxwell's dream sounds as he sees his vision blur, his vision shifting to a new blurry image. "I'm glad we can count on you golden blood" A female pony voice sounds. Maxwell suddenly wakes up by his digital phone, playing his musical ringtone. Maxwell then uses a hoof to grab the phone and examines the number. "Pinkie?" Maxwell says to himself, still trying to awake from bed and answers the phone. "Hello?" Maxwell says holding his phone to his ear. "Hi Max! Sorry to wake you so early! Me and Gummy are planning this giant party and I was wondering if you would like to come and help, the party will be so fun it will be worth it trust me!" Pinkie Pie says in a exciting way as usual. "uh sure Pinkie, I will be there soon." Maxwell says sitting up on his bed.

"Oh no no no Max! I will send you a human escort, he will be driving a black car, but meet him on the road not far from the house, I will see you then, Bye!" Pinkie says hanging up the phone, Max then hangs up his phone and gets out of bed. Meanwhile a mystery pony with sunglasses is a staring at a computer terminal, looking on a overview map on Ponyville. "Sir the operation is ready!" A dark dressed soldier pony says to the Mystery white sunglasses pony. "Excellent we strike tonight, I want everypony to remember their roles, remind them again, I want no pony to screw this one up!" The sunglasses pony says, lifting his hoof in the air. "yes sir!" the soldier pony says, running away from the mystery pony, while the mystery pony smiles. Maxwell is then waiting on not far from his house, listening to his music through a media device, while looking at the black car that is arriving to him.

"Finally" Maxwell says to himself, preparing to enter the vehicle, the vehicle then stops and Maxwell enters the black car the human is driving. "What's up" a white dressed human, breaded man, says to Maxwell as he enters the vehicle. "I'm ready to work for the party dude, the last party Pinkie Pie threw was a blast!" Maxwell says with a smile. "yeah dude, she told me to give you this, the posters, and the invite." The bearded human says giving Maxwell both of the items. Staring at the poster, Maxwell then tries not to laugh, seeing the poster of Gummy and Pinkie Pie smile lifting her hooves. "I know dude, sometimes I think Pinkie Pie is crazy" The human says again with the smile. "I can tell today is going to be great." Maxwell says as he sees the odd building, looking like a weird, poorly wooden shack. Maxwell's ears then lower as he is confused by the location, both the pony and the human leave the car to enter the building.