Path of Discord

Chapter 5: Kindness

I didn’t have much of a plan for this one beyond “I do that thing where Twilight wonders nondescript halls for a while, then stuff happens” in that Twilight would come across a frightened, huddled Fluttershy, who would at first be so overjoyed to see somepony she knew that she’d flytackle Twilight in a tearful hug.

Naturally, because it’s this story, Twilight would then rape her, smacking her up a bit at the same time and being a sadistic bitch.

That’s about it. This is about the normal amount of planning I did for all these chapters. I’d just let alcohol and 2-4 hours of writing take care of the rest.

Chapter 6: Magic

This was the fun one; the whole reason I started writing the story was to get to this. Kind of a shame I didn't get to it when I found this that fun, but oh well.

The chapter would open with Twilight walking for a very long time, giving the chance for some of her crazy to wear off.

Twilight would have at last arrived at the center of the maze, finding Discord there. To her surprise, so were other ponies: all her friends (in their various states of duress as she left them, or just gaily enjoying the fun if they’re Pinkie) would be there, each getting tentacle raped.

Celestia would also be there with a big, throbbing cock. She’d be chained to the wall, but eye Twilight hungrily as she entered the room.

Twilight would have some dialogue about how Discord didn’t live up to his word or whatever excuse plot this story had, which Discord would basically ignore. With a snap of his fingers, he’d set Celestia loose, who immediately would zip to Twilight and start to mount her, which would feel oddly familiar (implying that Celestia was the one who raped Twilight when her ass was stuck in the wall).

As Twilight protested and struggled, Discord would explain that he wasn’t the one doing these things, oh no!

“For you see, my dear Twilight, I am an act-tor at heart!” In a flash, Discord appeared spotlighted on a stage, with an invisible audience throwing roses at his hoof and claw. “And I do so love to appease my audience. It’s a weakness, really.” He feigned a swoon. “And what did my audience want to see? Why, this of course!” He grinned.

Twilight strained under the weight of Celestia, desperately pawing at the stones for some purchase. A squeak escaped her as a searching thrust of Celestia’s throbbing cock went through Twilight’s tail and brushed up against her own rock-hard shaft. “What in Tartarus are you talking about, Discord?” Cum cum get the cum Celestia I want you inside me I always have—shut up! “Who would want this? Who in Equestria would want to see this?”

“Oh, nopony in Equestria, my small-minded little pony.” Discord grinned delivishly and snapped his fingers. “They, on the other hand…” He gestured toward a wall.

At this point, the story shifts into second person, present-tense, addressing the reader directly as Discord babbles some fourth-wall breaking shit about how if his “audience” decides to stop watching, he’ll stop all of this. And then, the very last bit of the ending:

As you stare at the wide-eyed ponies, their shining eyes beg you to end this, to let them return to a time when their lives were filled with friendship, magic, and the occasional world-saving exploit. Twilight, at last collapsing under Celestia’s advance, lets out a pained whinny as Celestia penetrates her. “Please!” she cries, before all that comes out of her mouth are oddly aroused sobs.

Discord shrugs at you, as though to say “Can you believe the nerve?”

One by one, that pleading light in each pony’s eyes dies as she surrenders to her new reality of continual rape.

You clearly wouldn’t have it any other way.