An alternate end to "The Cutie Mark Chronicles"

by Redthox81

Rating: mature
Tags: Random
Length: 1289

The cutie mark crusaders are in pursuit of Rainbow Dash, and they find her, in a, well, I'll let you find out. (my first fic, cloppy) (foalcon)

Events take place during S1E23 "The Cutie Mark Chronicles"

The newly formed Cutie Mark Crusaders are on the hunt for Rainbow Dash and they find her doing something a filly should never see.

(foalcon)(cloppy)

My first story, I tried my best.

IMAGE: http://v-d-k.deviantart.com/art/Scootaloo-gives-you-ideas-339520829

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2014-11-16 15:20:04 UTC

The Only Chapter...

"Gee, that sure was borin'." said Apple Bloom.

"Yeah, I thought that a party pony like pinkie pie would at least have an interesting story on how she got her cutie mark." Chimed in Scootaloo.

"Oh well, lets find Rainbow Dash." sighed Sweetie Belle.

And so they set off in pursuit of the mare the so dearly wanted to see. However, Rainbow Dash was no-where to be seen. The three young filly's asked everywhere: Fluttershy's cabin, Sweet Apple Acres and Sugar Cube Corner. But they finally hit the jackpot at the Carousel Boutique where they found Rarity.

"Rarity?" Asked Sweetie Belle

"Yes my dear?" Replied the alabaster mare

"Have you seen Rainbow Dash?"

"As a matter of fact I have" said Rarity with a concerned look "She appeared to be heading into the Everfree Forest."

"The Everfree Forest?!" The cutie mark crusaders exclaimed in unity.

"At least, that's where it looked like she was off to." She added.

Scootaloo took charge "Well, come on girls, lets go!"

"I Really don't think-" Rarity started, but the three young filly's where already out the door and headed for the forest entrance.

Rarity stuck her head out the door and shouted after them "You three do be careful!"

But the girls were already going full speed, going straight for the single road that headed into the forest, eager to find Dash and finally find out the story the so dearly wanted to hear. Upon arrival at the dividing line between ponyville and the forest, the girls stopped, peering into the dark gloominess of the dense canopy. It was an unspoken fact that the Everfree forest was a dangerous place, but never-the-less, they went on, intending to find Zecora's hut. But a wrong turn had landed them in an unknown part of the forest, the girls tried to back track but the forest seemed to turn and twist forever and somehow the three filly's had ended even deeper in the forest. About to give up, Apple Bloom heard a faint moaning coming from somewhere near by.

"Girls, did ya here that there sound?" Apple Bloom whispered.

"What" said Scootaloo.

"Keep it down" whispered Apple Bloom, her voice even quieter then before.

The Three curious foals followed the moaning as quietly as they could, trying to locate the source of the strange sound, it appeared to be coming from a nearby clump of bushes. The crusaders climbed in the nearest tree and peered down into the small clearing.

"Is that..." Whispered sweetie belle.

"I think it is" Scootaloo mouthed back, fearing they were too close to even whisper.

And it was, sure enough the pony they were looking down upon was none other than Rainbow Dash, easily enough recognised by her striking multicoloured mane. but she was doing something that the three filly's had never seen before.

"What's she doing?" Whispered Apple Bloom.

"I don't know, but I think I saw Rarity doing it one time, she was making weird noises too" Sweetie Belle whispered back.

All of a sudden the branch they were perched on snapped, sending the Crusaders straight into the clearing were Rainbow Dash was lying, landing in a heap before her feet. Rainbow Dash had just enough time to snap her hind legs together before the small cloud of dust generated by the falling Crusaders cleared. Dash's face went a deep red at the embarrassment of what the filly's may have seen.

She tried to play it cool "Err, hey girls, what are you three doing out here?".

"What are you doing out here?" The Crusaders said in unison.

"Well, er, sometimes a pony need, er, some time alone" Dash stuttered, he face growing redder by the minute.

"But what were you actually doing?"...

An awkward conversation later...

On arrival at the Cutie Mark Crusaders clubhouse, the three young filly's minds were spinning at what Dash had told them. But, Scootaloo being Scootaloo, had a "bright" idea.

"Hey, girls why don't we try and do what Rainbow Dash was doing earlier."

"Say what now?" Asked Apple Bloom.

"Well, she seemed to be enjoying herself earlier"

"Okay then, so where do start?"...

The Crusaders all laid down, trying there best to replicate Dash's position.

"OK so, now what?" asked Scootaloo.

"Well, er you know that little slit thing that we pee from?" Said Apple Bloom.

"Yeah" The other two said at the same time.

"Well Rainbow Dash was rubbing her, one of those..." She trailed off.

Scootaloo, being the adventurous one, went first, her soft orange hoof sliding down towards her virgin nethers. She stopped just before her slit started to form.

"Well, here goes." She said.

She slid her soft hoof a little further and immediately felt a tingling feeling.

"Wow! That's amazing!"

But Sweetie Belle interrupted "Your doing it wrong, let me show you."

Sweetie Belle stood up and trotted across the tree-house towards Scootaloo, raised her hoof and lifted it towards Scootaloos nether region, but she stopped, taking time to examine the orange pegasus's small, tight pussy. She then proceeded to gently touch her slit.

Scootaloo gasped "Wow Apple Bloom, that felt even better!"

Scootaloo knew it would feel good, she knew that just by watching rainbow dash. But she was still curious...

"Hey err Apple Bloom?" she asked

"Yeah" The Yellow filly replied.

"Could you err..."

Apple Bloom was growing impatient "What?"

"Use your mouth on it?" Scootaloo revealed with a awkward smile.

"Use my mouth? What in the hay are you talking about?" Exclaimed Apple Bloom.

"Please?" asked Scootaloo.

"Well, okay, if you say so"

And with that Apple Bloom dropped her muzzle so she was face to face with Scootaloo's pussy. she noticed that it appeared to be glistening with some form of liquid, none the less she stuck out her tounge and run it up scootaloo's clit. The orange filly felt a bolt of pleasure ripple through her.

"WOW, that was amazing." Scootaloo moaned.

"Really? Wow, hey Sweetie Belle come and do what I'm doing"

Sweetie belle stood up and trotted over to her two filly-friends and looked at Apple Blooms pussy, it too glistening in the same way that Scootaloo's did, Sweetie Belle had an idea, instead of going straight for the prize she made her tongue swirl in circles around Apple Bloom's clit. Apple Bloom started to moan and grind her hips into Sweetie Belle's muzzle. Sweetie Belle took the hint and gave a long lick up Apple Bloom's pussy. Apple Bloom Squealed in pleasure. Meanwhile, Scootaloo felt her pleasure levels almost double as she began to reach what Rainbow dash had earlier called a "climax".

"Omigosh, that is AMAZING" she shouted, practically screaming.

And the pleasure just didn't stop, Scootaloo Arched her back, trying to push Apple Blooms tongue as deep inside of her as she could.

"APPLE BLOOOOOM!" Scootaloo screamed as bolt of pure pleasure ripped through her and a strange, hot liquid erupted from inside her, spattering Apple Bloom's face.

Apple Bloom was also nearing her climax and the taste and smell of Scootaloo's juice pushed her over the edge. She screamed her head off and arched her back, trying to get as much of Sweetie Belle inside of her as possible and before she knew it. She felt the same liquid that was on her face rocketing out of her pussy and into Sweetie Belles face. Sweetie Belle drank as much as she could before Apple Bloom collapsed on top of and already fallen Scootaloo. I was apparent that the oral sex was tiring for all three of them for Sweetie Belle then laid down and rested her head on Apple Bloom's back and the three young filly's drifted off to sleep.

THE END