A River of Crimson

by Tehmustachedbiscuit

Chapter 4: Feeding on Crimson

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"My dream can not have been real!" protested Raindrop.

"Oh but it was." Crimson said slyly.

"WILL YOU STO--"

Raindrop's voice was suddenly cut off as she was slammed against the wall and was being held up by her neck causing her to choke.

"Now down to business, I suggest if you want to live that you provide me with some accomodation and keep are secretly perfectly safe from any of these stupid pegasi. Do I make myself clear?"

"Y-yes." was the only word that Raindrop managed to sputter out before the hoof released and she fell to the floor gasping for air.

"Alright."

As they walked through cloudsdale towards Raindrops cloud home she took on another host of scared looks and Crimson decided it was time to feed and left behind a almost dead corpse in an alley.

"H-here w-we are." whimpered Raindrop.

"Why are you so scared of me Raindrop, i've had my fill for the day." asked Crimson.

"B-bec-because you nearly killed somepony!" shouted Raindrop.

"I guess i was hungrier than i thought. Huh?" awkwardly said Crimson.

"I GUESS I WAS HUNGRIER THAN I THOUGHT, MY LEFT WING!!!" shouted Raindrop.

"I HAD TO PULL YOU OFF HIM SO YOU WOULD STOP!!!"

"S-sorry." Crimson shedding some tears as she spoke.

"You have to learn to control yourself!"

"O-okay." said Crimson as she shedded a few more tears.

"Oh come on, there's not point crying over it now." said Raindrop as she was suddenly dropped into the awkward conversation.

"Wow i love your home it feels so... homie." exclaimed Crimson.

"Thanks its nothing really though."

"How can you say that? This house is absolutely lovely!

"Its really nothing."

"Right now down to you." Crimson becoming serious as she spoke.

"What about me?" asked Raindrop inquisitivly.

"Your changes, including your pearly whites." glancing at Raindrops muzzle as she spoke.

"Oh, that about me." Raindrop glanced to the floor, dreading the thoughts of what she soon would be doing as she spoke.

"So I guess I'm feeding tonight then?"

"Well the question is do you want to live?"

"Well, it would be preferable." said Raindrop.

"Your going to be feeding tonight then."

"What if something goes wrong or I end up kill--"

"You won't, I'll be with you for every step." said Crimson as she nuzzled Raindrop on the cheek.

"Thank you." after Raindrop finished they both broke into a friendly and compelling hug.

"But first."

"But first what?" asked Raindrop

"You might wanna catch some sleep." suggested Crimson.

"Why?"

"Because it will be your last until your eternal one." said Crimson in a annoyed tone.

"Oh. I'll take your advice then." said Raindrop in a flat tone.


"Oww..." Raindrop woke with a groan of pain.

"Evening." Crimson said with a pleasant tone and smile.

"Please don't shout... I'm right next to you." Raindrop groaned.

"Oh sorry." Crimson reducing her voice to a whisper.

"But Raindrop, i'm not shouting its your senses intensifying." Crimson said still keeping her voice at a low tone.

"O-okay." stuttering at the pain in her head.

"H-how long will it b-be til I g-get u-used to m-m-my sen-senses?" asked Raindrop.

"A week, give or take." said Crimson with a modest expression.

"O-okay. W-well i g-guess we sh-should g-get th-this over w-with."

"Thats the spirit!" giving Raindrop a heart-warming smile as she spoke.

"And if you drink soon there's less chance of you ripping someponies throat out!" Presenting a faux smile while knowing she said something she definetly shouldn't have.

"That... is reasurring." Raindrop said with a awkward smile beared on her face.

"Lets go then!" said Crimson as she turned for the stairs.

"Quieter please." complained Raindrop.

"Oh, sorry." apologised Crimson.

It took about half an hour for the two to find some decent prey. Crimson managed decided on a pair of pegasi mares, while Raindrop just wanted to get it over with.

"Alright Raindrop, i'm gonna get those two mares to come into this alley and then hypnotise and lock up there bodies. Okay?" Crimson asked.

"Alright, lets get this done."

After hypnotising the mares and forcing them to walk into the alley the two vamponies were ready to take there earnings.

"Okay Raindrop watch me." said Crimson.

As Crimson peirced the turqouise mares neck artery Raindrop watched anxiously as she caught sights of the rich, flowing blood seep out of the mares body.

Once Crimson had finished she gave a satisfied sigh and motioned for Raindrop to do the same to the yellow mare.

At first Raindrop took a while to peirce the mears neck artery with her fangs, and even she did it was quite a messy cut. As Raindrop started to lap at the blood flowing from the artery she felt a warm, tingling sensation overcome her body and she was immediately indulged herself into what was tonights blood bank. It was the most beautiful thing she had ever tasted.

Between gulps Raindrop managed to put together:

"I-I-I L-l-lo-love i-i-it."

Crimson returning a satisfied smile as she saw Raindrop lap up all the flowing blood.

"Alright, Raindrop stop now." said Crimson.

"B-b --" was all Raindrop managed to say before she spotted the guard at the end of the alleyway.

"HALT!" bellowed the guard.

Crimson turned around in bewilderment before being hit by a speeding pegasus, managing to knock her against the wall.

Crimson looked up and Raindrop noticed the pure fury in her reptilian eyes as they began to turn a bright red.

Before the guard knew what was happening Crimson had managed to jump on top of the guard, hissing at him.

In a single motion Crimson whipped her head to his neck and lapped at his blood, the guard seeming to be able to do anything.

In a few seconds the guard went cold the blue fading from his coat.

"I-is h-he d-d-d-de-dead?" Was all Raindrop managed to force from her throat.

"No." snapped Crimson.

Raindrop suddenly felt intimidated by the pony again, but when Crimson turned her head around instead of seeing rage in bright red pupils, Raindrop saw the ponies natural green eyes again and a smile beared on her face.

"Up for seconds?" Crimson asked sarcastickly.

Raindrop just nodded in response.


Author's Notes:

Yay i finally got number 4 out and its finally long! I hope you all enjoy this one because it took some time. Chapter 5 will be coming soon!

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