Thestral dawn

by Sweet pup

Rating: teen
Tags: Dark, Romance, Adventure, Sad
Length: 959

Dawn bites a pony out of rage, now she may be killed, how will she escape and will she save the bitten pony?

Dawn gets angry and bites a bratty earth pony. To her surprise he becomes and vampire pony. Now she is running from the ancient magic law so she isn't killed.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2014-11-25 23:18:21 UTC

Bitten

Dawn was sleeping when he woke up. The white stallion towered over her bed his yellow hair tangled, white bat wings on his body, and long fangs curving out of his mouth. He examined the figure lying peacefully in her bed before him and groaned. She didn't have blood. Well her blood was different. Now what he wanted. The figure flew off but the rustle of him leaving woke dawn.

"No!" She cried flying out the window after the newly bitten.

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The newly bitten was tackled out of the air and began bleeding as dawn tackled him sweat covering her body as she panted holding him in an iron grip. He tried to pry himself out but she held strong.

"No blood," she growled," look I was born like this unlike you so I don't know what's it's like but no blood!"

The stallion struggled under her grip again as she flew home to prepare him something, unique.

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The raw steak sat in front of him dawn smirking across from him.

"Eat whatever your name is."

"Sun."

"Whatever."

Dawn poured herself some coffee savoring each gulp as the sun rose up outside.

"Drink up," she muttered to the pony with the bloody steak in his fangs as she passed him some coffee. As the sun rose he changed and soon he was spitting out the blood from the steak cursing and downing the coffee to rid himself of the taste.

"We need to get you pony again," dawn said grabbing his mug and refilling it.

"Ya no kidding," sun answered drinking the new mug dawn handed him.

"I'll ask luna or one of the guards what to do," dawn said washing out her mug and drying it.

Sun just mumbled something and demanded more coffee making dawn sigh.

"You know what mister?" She said," you are going to come with me when I talk to general twisted fang.

General twisted fang

Oh wise one oh great one tell me the answers to what I seek

Twisted fang cursed under his breath as the glowing object in his hooves stayed dormant. His scarred blue hooves, gray streaked black hair, gray bat wings with red scars and hidden weapons made him look old, horrifying, and wise.

"General?"

He cursed tucking the object under his wing as he whipped around. The bright yellow eyes of his soldier dawn met him and it took twisted fang a few moments to see a white pony with red eyes and a blonde mane standing next to her acting high and regal.

"What?" He growled angry she had disturbed him.

"I urm, um," dawn coughed and sighed," I accidentally bit him." Dawn hung her head and pointed to the stallion. Twisted fang gasped and looked at dawn shaking his head.

"To help you I would be harboring a criminal," he replied. Dawn looked at him horrified and confused.

"Celestia and luna-"

"They don't matter the others would kill you anyways, yes they would be punished by luna and celestia but they would rather die than be punished by the ancient law of magic," twisted replied. "Now get out." Dawn looked like she was going to cry as she trotted away and twisted fang turned around ashamed. "Today," he whispered," I lost a soldier."

Torture

dear princess celestia I hopeno wish that you save this soldier. She is in dire need of a saving. Her name is dawn and she is a thestral. She has broken an ancient magic law and you must save her. I am unaware of her whereabouts so I hope you will find her

-sincerely secret

Dawn dragged the complaining brat through the town.

"Why are we doing this!" He cried.

"Because I'm going home!"

"You're house I too far away!"

"GET UP!"

Sun sighed as he forced his aching hooves to walk. They climbed up the hill and continued on and sun constantly ran into rocks.

"This is torture," he growled. Then dawn disappeared.

Consumed

oh master please answer me! Please I need you! Am I not weeping beneath you!

The object hummed with power turning red as smoke erupted from it coiling around twisted fang. He laughed a horrible laugh and his eyes became red as the madness and power consumed him. The last bits of the amazing kind hearted general was the letter not yet sent that asked if celestia could save dawn. As the power began to control him he looked at the letter and regretted everything that was going to happen.

Biter

"Screw you!" Dawn screamed at the angry pony trotting away.

"Jerk!" He screamed back. The white pony with the yellow mane glared at her with his red eyes and he spit at her. Dawn's rage boiled and she felt for her sword. It was gone.

"Come here if you can little filly!" He laughed pointing at her with her hoof. Dawn glared at him and screamed in rage. Her wings opened and she flew towards him opening her mouth and....... He cried out her throat tearing under her flesh. Blood ran out and into dawn's fangs surprising her. She gasped and pulled her teeth out spitting out blood. Dawn grabbed the limp body and shook it to open the closed eyes of the pony. He eyes slowly opened and he looked at her and moaned.

"Ow." The. He began choking and dawn screamed calling out for help. He fell limp in her hooves.

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Dawn looked at the blood stained body tears welling up in her eyes. She blinked them away and tended to the body.

"You're okay, it's okay," she whispered as she put cold rags on his clammy body. It was no use. He was changing.