The evasive

by Pantherz

Rating: everyone
Tags: Comedy, Adventure, Dark
Length: 1260

A strange pony is terrorizing families and stealing form noble ponies. Will Panther a gray pegasus with brown hair stop him?

A strange pony is terrorizing families and stealing from noble ponies. Will Panther a gray pegasus with brown hair stop him?

This is a story on me! Enjoy!

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2014-11-24 22:34:56 UTC

Confronting the Princess of Night Herself

Panther flew to the Canterlot castle as fast as her throbbing wings could go. Her mind raced with questions and fear spinning in an endless hurricane. One thought was embedded deep in the roots of her mind and It was the life taking glare the masculine young thief had given her with his glinting ugly colored eyes. He looked strong and fierce behind his thin rough covering with a sleek slimming black coat and also a stolen glance at attractive chestnut hair. He would most likely get a nice pretty girl if he gave up on the thievery. Panther swiftly landed and galloped through the halls reaching the throne room.

"Your Majesty Princess Luna! May I your commander of your personal thesteral army and part time student talk to you!? Please!" She was tired and panting like a dog. "Sure." said the azure princess. "I saw a thief last night and ( bend ) hold on - okay well he  attacked Fleur but before he could strike I warned her and she sprinted off. Then he looked at me and princess, his eyes were dark as night." Luna frowned. "Excuse me but what exactly were his eyes dark as?" Panther blushed and gave a sheepish smile. "Erm coal Luna hee, hee, sorry." She rubbed the back of her sweat coated neck. Luna smiled then grimaced. " You have brought dire and urgent news. Thank you for sharing this pressing matter. I will send my sister's guards to patrol Ponyville and Canterlot. You may return home now." Then Panther zipped off.

The End and the Release

"Please let him go in some years from now! Princesses this may sound foolish but he did not kill. I beg of you let him go in a few years, half a lifetime of learning respect and discipline will teach him! Please he was trying to protect himself and angry at me so it is not his fault." Panther begged.

Luna smiled.

Celestia frowned.

"I will ponder your decision and may carry it out. For now he has a lifetime sentence. Please leave now." Spoke the alicorn showing no emotion except a tiny glint of care in her eyes.

Panther grinned then sighed and trotted out the grim guards still looking forward into what seemed to be no where.

She walked to an iron door that was guarded by two guards and requested to see the thief. The pair hesitated but the allowed her in. Down the damp dark and musty spiral stone stairs they went and into the room holding the cells. Panther looked for the thieves cage and found it.

He was slumped against the wall staring at the floor his coat gleaming in the dim light. "Be careful." muttered one guard bitterly. "Hello sir, sorry to bother you just wanted to say hi. By the way if you should know I sorry you're in here so I'm fighting for your freedom, at least you might be free forty years from now but it may be sooner." For some split second he looked up at her then back down. "That's enough." the other guard gruffly. "Come on Miss let's go." And so Panther went hoping that the thief would not hate her.

Dark Deeds Not Unseen

In the cover of the night a cloaked figure with shimmering cat eyes a horrid squash color trotted about, tense and wary. He came upon a large thick and coarse tree with soft emerald green leaves swaying gently at the top and started scaling it's trunk. Once at the highest branch the pony leaped at a cloud, a magical red aura encasing him ensuring a safe landing and a cloud walking spell. He seemed silent and graceful as a tan owl in the night his light brown cloak flowing and waving around his coal black hooves.

Once he reached the puffy light cloud he pulled out a shining dagger illuminated by the moon. Next he pulled out a large sack soon to be full of bits and food for a meal. Just as he were about to enter a movement caught his eye. He cursed and jumped from the cloud and onto the tree top only to gasp in awe.

What he saw was a pearl white pony with a luscious pink mane and a delicious bag of gems and bits. She was humming to herself sweetly while twirling and tossing the bag around with her magic. It was as if she were just begging him to steal her precious stones and money, though we know that isn't the case. He grinned and crouched low to the damp earth. Smiling like a maniac he descended upon her, the unicorn mare otherwise known as Fleur, was completely oblivious to the thief. He pounced but in those few split seconds a sound was heard. It was a warning cry making Fleur rear and gallop of in fear.

The thief pony turned, murder in his eyes to see a glaring gray pegasus with a flowing brown mane and sparkling yellow eyes streaked with orange at the cloud house he was going to rob. He growled and spat in rage and the pony ran a little faster than normal into her house. Angry with his latest failed mission he slipped off into the night air, furious.

The Nimble and the Deadly

That night Panther couldn't help but thirst to confront the bandit. You see Panther had a thirst for doing stupid dangerous things which she barely sorted out. She felt guilty but what could she do, sit around and wait for him to slit her throat? She was the commander of have of Luna's private army for Celestia's sake! She may not be the most battle ready commander but she was quick, swift, and clever. Though now she was going to face one trained robber who could kill her if she weren't careful. The thought made fear swallow her but she was determined to stop him. So she took off into the night as silent and fast as a mouse.

After a while she saw the billowing movement of a cloak and looked down to see him with his dagger held in his crimson aura and his bag on his back. Close to a nervous breakdown but still stubborn and achingly mischievous she carried on.

  Landing carefully and silently on a cloud she peered over to see him closing the distance between him and Fleur. Panther groaned. Not again. She crept forward, spread her stone gray wings, and arced her back eyes trained on his every movement. Then she swooped down fear and adrenaline coursing through her veins. With a lightning fast cuff to the head and the refreshing sound of a surprised cry Panther hovered a few feet above him. He snapped his head up, his hood sliding back to show wavy short locks of chestnut hair, and jabbed his dagger at her. She shrieked as the oncoming blade barely missed her and zoomed around him paying no mind to the screaming Fleur who was desperately trying to help Panther. Panther felt a cold sweat breakout on her forehead and wiped it off. She had to get away, now! With one more dangerously deadly encounter with the knife and a punch to his chest she flapped away shaking.

Panther collapsed on her couch but was soon aroused by  the sound of struggle and yelling. She ran to the window to find the guards pinning him down and readying a mobile prison carrige.