A Canterlot love tale

by Harmonic Brush

Suri Polomare

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Tirek, Trixie, and Lightning Streak were walking in the shadows of ponyville, trying to be unseen. They spotted Lightning Dust along the way, who tagged along because of her need of revenge against Rainbow Dash. As they were hiding in the shadows, they spotted a mare with 3 buttons as a cutie mark with dark violet hair and pale orchid fur. She had brown eyes and wore tattered clothing.

"Hello?" Lightning Dust asked.

"Hello, I'm Suri Polomare. Do you know where Rarity, is. I've been needing to have a little...talk...with her since she beat me in fashion week in Manehattan." Suri said with an evil look on her face.

"Actually, were just escaping from Tartaurus to get revenge on ponies." Trixie said. "The great and powerful Trixie, is getting revenge on Twilight Sparkle." Trixie said as she started to use her magic. "And is gonna eat peanut butter crackers." She said as peanut butter crackers appeared by her magic.

"I am lord Tirek. I am getting revenge on every pony."

"I'm Lightning Streak." Lightning Streak said as he pointed to himself then to Lightning Dust. "And this is my cousin, Lightning Dust. We are getting revenge on Rainbow Dash."

"Nice to meet you all, as you already know, I'm getting revenge on Rarity, m'k. Anyone know where I can find her, she cost me a perfect Coco Pommel."

"Come with Trixie, the great and powerful Trixie knows where this Rarity is." Trixie said.

"M'k."

"Do you always add 'the great and powerful' to everything you say?" Lightning Dust asked.

"Of course Trixie does."

The creatures walked towards a dead end of Ponyville where no one was. Trixie used her magic to send Suri to Canterlot. Her last words were.

"Have fun." Trixie said.

"M'k."


Rarity was cleaning her and Fancy Pant's bowl when her horn flinched on and off.

"I feel a disturbance in the force..I mean Equestria." Rarity said

"Were you taking to yourself Rarity?" Fancy asked

"Yes. I was."

"Ok then."

"Fancy?"

"Yes darling?"

"Do you think that because someone went after you, someone will go after me?"

"Maybe."

"This is the part where you tell me I'm going CRAZY!"

"But I don't think you are, it's very probable Rarity."

"My horn flinched on and off today."

"Hmm, there is something wrong in Equestria. Some people can sense when something bad is gonna happen. They feel a disturbance in the force..I mean Equestria."

Rarity laughed, then was joined by Fancy Pants.

"Well Rarity," Fancy started. "I have got to go to a banquet. I would bring you, but.. can you keep an eye on things around here, with that horn flickering, something might go on."

"Got it."

"Bye Rarity, darling."

"Bye Fancy."

Rarity waved as Fancy left out the front door. She turned towards a old picture of her family. Her mom, Cookie Crumbles, her dad Hondo Flanks, but in the middle, her younger sister Sweetie Belle. Now, instead of her being her little, immature self, she was dating Button Mash and moved to Trottingham. She trotted into her work room and cut out a specific pattern. She placed the fabric underneath her sewing machine and began to stitch them together when she heard hoofsteps downstairs.

"Hello?" Rarity asked.

Her horn flinched on and off faster and louder as the hoofsteps got closer. She shut her eyes and the hoofsteps stopped. She opened her eyes to see Suri Polomare.

"Suri?! What are you doing here?"

"You cost me a good Coc Pommel. Now I have to get all my coffee myself! Plus, you beat me, and I need to.." Suri said as she put on an evil look. "Finish things up."

Rarity used her magic but it quickly turned off.

"What?" Rarity asked.

"With you being able to sense things wrong in the force after your magic improved when you defeated Tirek, who is on my team, your horn shuts off when your close to the problem."

"Wait Suri, what do you mean on my team?"

"I've said too much."

"Tell me."

"No."

"Yes."

"No."

"Yes."

"No."

"Yes."

"No."

"Yes."

"No."

"Yes."

"No."

"Yes."

"No."

"Yes."

"No."

"Yes."

"No."

"Yes."

"No."

"Yes."

"No."

"Yes."

"No and infinity!"

"Yes infinity and 1!"

"No infinity and 2!"

"Yes infinity and 3!"

"No."

"Yes."

"No."

"Yes."

"No."

"Yes."

"No."

"Yes."

"STOP! ASKING ME! ALREADY!"

"Sorry Suri."

"Where is Coco Pommel?!"

"In Manehattan."

"Ok. Oh and Rarity, watch your hoofsteps, I'll be back."

As Suri started to walk away, Rarity's horn started working. I must cast a mind-reading spell she thought. She cast the spell and tried to listen, but with Suri far away, it was quite hard. She tried her best to listen. She listened to Suri's thoughts.

They have no idea we're coming back, why Lightning Streak, Lightning Dust, Tirek, Trixie and I will make a fantastic team, but we better get a few more ponies, or creatures.

Rarity's jaw dropped as Suri's thoughts blurred out as Suri Polomare walked a cab.

"I gotta go tell Twilight." Rarity began. "Better leave a note for Fancy."

Rarity summoned a quill and a scroll. She spoke aloud as she used her magic to write.

"Dear Fancy Pants, This is Rarity. I am going to visit Twilight to tell her about the problem, it's the flinching horn, I will tell you when I and you come home or meet, Love, Rarity."

She sealed the scroll and placed it on the table in the front foyer. She teleported to Twilight, who was on a picnic with Flash.

"TWILIGHT! WE'VE GOT AN EMERGENCY! Oh, you are on a date with Flash."

"It's ok Rarity." Flash said.

"Rarity, what's the emergency."

"Suri Tirek Trixie Lightning Streak Lightning Dust Tartaurus ESCAPE!" She said as she collapsed onto the picnic blanket.

"Flash, we've gotta end this date, duty calls, I promise I'll make it up to you."

"No problem Twily."

"Hey, Only I can call her that." Said a hologram of Shining Armour for about 3 seconds before disappearing.

"Ok then..." Twilight said as she teleported away.

"Bye Twi!"

"Bye Flash."

"BE BACK SOON, AND GOOD LUCK!"

"BYE FLA-"


Author's Note

I looked it up! Hondo Flanks and Cookie Crumbles are rarity's and Sweetie Belle's parents actual names! I really just wanted to give shining the spotlight with that scene..

*FORESHADOWING*

Big fancy {Not really Fancy} yes and no scene, and added infinity cause I remember hearing it in like Look before you sleep or something. And since I was in the crazy villains girl zone with Fleur Dis Lee, I thought having Fancy attacked, might as well do the same for Rarity. Sorry about the delay, homework before ponies, I wish it was the other way around...

BIYA!~ :pinkiehappy:

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