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Fifteen Dinners

by Quill Scratch
Rainbow Dash's life is perfect. The Wonderbolts want to hang out with her, her relationship with Twilight has somehow lasted seven months, and she's even dropped her cider addiction! But if life is so perfect, why does it still hurt?

“A toast,” Spitfire said, once the noise had quietened and everypony was still, “to Rainbow Dash, for holding the most records anypony in Academy history has held. It’s no mean feat, and I’m sure we’ll be seeing her continue to push herself well beyond our expectations in the future.” There was a murmur of agreement that passed around the table, and Rainbow felt her wings twitch again. Before anypony could begin to raise their glass to their lips, Spitfire continued, “And to Soarin, who seems at last to have gained at least some level of emotional maturity in the past week.”

Rainbow Dash's life is perfect: the Wonderbolts are so pleased with her performance at the academy that they've invited her out to dinner, and she's finally getting to spend time with her idols; she's finally managed to hold down a relationship for more than a few weeks at a time, and her marefriend, Twilight, has been more supportive of her than she could have ever asked for; and she's even gotten over her cider addiction, which turned out to be a much more pleasant change than she expected.

So why does it still hurt?

Written and edited over the course of 30 days for the National Novel Writing Month challenge, Fifteen Dinners tells the story of Rainbow Dash's struggle to maintain the illusion of happiness when the one pony that matters most has grown to hate her.


For David and JD
(who hate ponies, but keep supporting me anyway)
For Vocal Score
(whose music kept me going through this crazy month)
And, as always, for Robbie
(who somehow puts up with my writing, even for fandoms he knows nothing about)


Teen
Complete
Tragedy
Slice of Life
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Romance
 
TRS

65692 words: Estimated about 5 hours to read

15 Chapters:

  1. Chapter 1: Vegetable Chow Mein 2014-11-30 23:57:07 UTC
    4159
  2. Chapter 2: Hay Fries and Ice Cream 2014-11-30 23:57:13 UTC
    3588
  3. Chapter 3: Mushroom and Onion Pie 2014-11-30 23:57:18 UTC
    4469
  4. Chapter 4: Salad and Hors d'Oeuvres 2014-11-30 23:57:38 UTC
    4754
  5. Chapter 5: Lasagne al Forno 2014-11-30 23:57:39 UTC
    4494
  6. Chapter 6: Garden Salad 2014-11-30 23:57:40 UTC
    3795
  7. Chapter 7: Daisy Sandwiches 2014-11-30 23:57:42 UTC
    3493
  8. Chapter 8: Quiche aux Provençale 2014-11-30 23:57:43 UTC
    6062
  9. Chapter 9: Leek and Potato Stew 2014-11-30 23:57:44 UTC
    5673
  10. Chapter 10: A Little Bit of Everything 2014-11-30 23:57:45 UTC
    4429
  11. Chapter 11: Tortellini au Fromage 2014-11-30 23:57:47 UTC
    3558
  12. Chapter 12: Hilltop Picnic 2014-11-30 23:57:51 UTC
    5169
  13. Chapter 13: Hay Burger and Fries 2014-11-30 23:57:49 UTC
    3773
  14. Chapter 14: Buttered Toast 2014-11-30 23:57:50 UTC
    4476
  15. Chapter 15: Stuffed Peppers 2014-11-30 23:57:55 UTC
    3800