Author's Note

This is my very Very first fanfic, so please tell me what's wrong and I'll fix it ASAP. Please don't criticize to harshly, though some is appreciated. Thanks a bunches. This is a preview of what i might make into a bigger better story, depending on the reviews. Sorry in advance for bad punies.....no...? Tough crowd.

(Okay, newer A/N this updated version is shorter but it's cleaned out in my opinion of unneeded words and I fixed up how it looks while also fixing the view point. Hopefully this is at least slightly better!)

To Jump or Not o Jump (RW)

"It felt like only a second ago we were joking around..Ramirez, Philip, Daves, how did it come to this slaughter." Jacob said as he was sitting behind a large boulder oddly shaped like a diamond.

He couldn't think on what to do until something clicked in his head. A cliff side was a short ways away, the enemy on the other side of the rock was closing in..fast. He has to make a decision between two choices, get covered in holes, or break some bones and have a lesser chance of becoming a sponge while also maybe escaping. It was obvious, he didn't want to be swiss cheese with a side of copper fillings, so he did what any soldier or sane person for that matter, would do to survive, he got up and started in a full sprint off the cliff. He felt pain in his right shoulder and back while having a burning sensation in the left thigh before he even got off the cliff, the rest he wouldn't remember, since he had blacked out after jumping off the edge.

-some time later-

Jacob slowly opened his eyes while being greeted by large amounts of pain with the taste of dirt in his mouth. Jacob see's that his right shoulder was shot via the exit wound.

"Shit, hurts but better then dead." He says to him self.

Knowing he should start moving by looking at the blood puddle, he tries to fumble for support with his left arm but only manages to roll over on his back which sends siring pain shooting through his shoulder and to the bullet wound. After catching his breath he feels the pain pulse through his shoulder. After thinking about the wound he starts going over his wounds.

"One 9mm round to the thigh, three 5.56 rounds in the back which doesn't need tending thanks to my vest. Besides a few bruised ribs/and or broken ones aren't the source of my pain. A 7.62 round in my shoulder is." He states.

In his bag is a small med kit, which had the basics for keeping small wounds stable. Knowing the pain would be excruciating, he puts a stick in his mouth. He starts to patch up some wounds and bites deep into the stick. After biting and groaning at the pain of antibiotics, dry wraps, and a needle, Jacob looks at his body seeing cuts and scrapes across all parts from head to toe.

"This is gonna be a hell of a story..and medical bill.." thought Jacob thought trying to calm him self down from seeing the cut and punctured parts of his body.

Jacob looked at his thigh, sighing at how it barely moved. He looked for an exit wound but couldn't find one, the bullet was still in his leg some where. After a few minutes he gets up and moving slowly while a slight painful scream escaped as the bullet moved inside. It made him lose consciousness on the muddy floor of the Everfree Forest...

Fluttershy heard something off in the distance from inside her cottage, shy as she is cowered slightly at the scream. Angle's ears had perked up from the sound of the scream.

Fluttershy said to her self with fear "Oh no..! That sounded like it came from the forest...and didn't sound l-like a scream for joy o-or hap-happiness.."

Fluttershy coming back to Reality, grabbed her medical bag with her free hand slinging it on as Angle jumped into another bag that she grabbed. As soon as she left the cottage she flew up and out towards the forest in a direction in which she heard the creature that screamed would be at. While flying over the tree line of the forest she saw something laying down with bits of red near it.

"What could that be?" She asks herself.

Flying in and landing to take a closer look, Fluttershy sees that it's a creature with some type of camo that's bleeding.

"Oh my Celestia! You must be the poor animal that screamed in pain." Fluttershy saying in a soft, caring tone. She Flipped Jacob over and onto his back, she notices him flicker his eyes open with pain being visible in them.

`After being turned over in reality, Jacob flickers his eyes open to see a "Pink haired..pony? With a yellow coat?" he asks himself. "Wait not a pony..a..human?" he doesn't understanding how or why the girl's colors are that way or even to how and why she got here, he just stares at the lady until pain comes rushing into his brain like a train packed to the brim with C4. "Agh.." He groans.

The girl backs away a few feet with a frighted and scared expression written on her face.

Given her looks she's really damn shy or scared, maybe both. So you lay there groaning at the pain.
"I need help..now...or I'll probably die out here by tonight or tomorrow..." Jacob says to the woman. He gets whiter at the thought of dying alone in a forest.

"I'm a v-v-v-vet..and g-getting my bac-bachelor's degree.." which she said in a quite but audible tone.

Shocked, amazed, and confused, he blinks a few times and says "You talk...finally.."
As she gets closer to Jacob knowing he needs help but to shy to say out right that she will help him.

At that moment he drops out of consciousness as the lady sees his eyes close and his body go limp, she tries picking him up but fails. Knowing she can't drag him from the weight of his body and attire, she tells Angle the plan of action. "Okay, Angle bunny, I need you to go and run to Twilight's house as fast as you can, we need her magic to pick him up to get to the hospital. If you could please?" She asked nicely to Angle who gave a little salute before bouncing off towards Twilight's library.