pony noir

by knut124345

Rating: mature
Tags: Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie, Sex, Twilight Sparkle, Diamond Tiara, Dark, Alternate Universe, Applejack, Gore, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Length: 1274

in long night applejack decides to save her friend at the wrong time

during one of the more unpleasant nights of her life applejack does the right thing at the wrong time. the night then turns goes really bloody as she discoverers that few god deeds ever go unpunished.

Published 2014-12-18 01:00:07 UTC
Last updated 2014-12-18 01:00:07 UTC

an apple doesn´t forget

Author's Note

hello everypony. if you like what you have read please comment and tell me how to do it better. if enough people like it i will write more.

an apple doesn´t forget

The bar was loud and hot has hell. The smell of piss and liquor fouled the air, if you could call it that, we breathe in this place.

“What will it be tonight Applejack? The usual?”

“Keep them coming miss cake”

“Just take it easy, alright?”

These drinks are only a time killer until the main event starts. And there she is, skinny little Flyttershy is getting started. The bar goes silent for a few moments before Flyttershy really gets going and everypony makes the bar shake. She really knows how to make lowlifes like me forget about the world for a few moments.

One of the stallions in the crowed reach over the counter and tried to grab Flyttershy´s tail in an effort to pull her of stage.

Looks like that son of a goat wants to test his luck. Let´s see if it matches his massive balls.

Applejack grabbed the back of his head and smashed his face into counter. He feel down on floor with a broken nose and missing front teeth.

After that little showcase the bar goes quiet and Flyttershy looks she´s ready to call it a night and so am I. But just as I am about to leave two of the most annoying little shit fillies in Ponyville, Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon, walk in to the bar.

“Where do you think you are going, Applejack?” Diamond tiara pushed her back into the chair.

“Nowhere, miss Diamond”

“Good. Because you are going to make our drinks tonight and FLYTTERSHY! Get back on stage, give us a proper show!”

Flyttershy stumbles back on stage, performing an awkward parody of what she did before and the rich fillies reject my drinks by throwing them in my face or smashing the on the floor. I don´t know how long they force me to keep this up but any time is to long. If it weren’t for Diamond Tiaras daddy this would be quite different. For better or worse it looked they were getting bored by this stilted act and for second I thought that they would just walk away.

“Hey, everypony! Is it really fair that Flyttershy stands up there teasing you? Take her and enjoy her! Applejack won´t interfere, will you?”

I thought it was an empty threat, that they were just trying to scare me. But I looking around I could see mares reaching trying to grab Flyttershy. To many to take on, I need to scare them of somehow.

Applejack smashed her hove into Silver Spoon. Cracking the head open like a pumpkin, dispensation warm blood and pink brains.
Silver Spoon got an easy death. She probably never knew what happened. I won´t be so kind to Diamond Tiara. The little filly is lighter then I expected. Makes her easier to hold down.

She chokeslamed Diamond Tiara on to the counter and found 2 smoking cigarette butts next to her head.

This is the death that she deserves. Hopefully it will hurt has much has I hope. When the cigarette butts meet her eyeballs the smell of burning flesh and boiling saltwater overpower any other smell in the room. Her screams make my ears ring and I assume that everypony have left Flyttershy alone. Has I look down on her, raddling around on the counter with black pits of burning flesh where her eyes used to be, I must admit I fell sorry her. So I show some mercy and snap her neck. When I look behind me Flyttershy is gone, she left in a hurry. Can´t say I blame her and I got to get going myself. Got to hide and I know just where. Spending more time then a care to count running while constantly looking over my shoulder i finally arrive at my hiding spot.

“Spike, is that you?”

“Howdy Twi. Got any cider?”

“Sure” Twilight opened her fridge and picked up 2 cans “What are you doing here in the middle of the night?”

“I killed Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon”

Unsurprisingly Twi chokes on her cider, luckily she doesn’t spit.

“Why in the name of Celestia did you do that!“

“They were about to send a some drunken idiots on Flyttershy and they thought I wouldn´t stop it”

“How do you expect me to make this go away? This isn´t some bar fight that got out of hand you know!”

“I don´t. I just expect you to help me hide for a few day until I can leave town”

“Alright I will help you but it won´t take long before filthy rich hires me to find you and if I say no or don´t come up with results he´s going to know that something´s up”

“Thanks Twi you’re the best”

Twi walks back to her bed. I wish could sleep now. The rest of the night was spent in agonizing anticipation. All it would take is for one pony to see me enter this place and both of us will be getting new holes. After standing still until my hooves hurt I see a single pony caring an envelope walking up to the house and slipping it under the door. I don´t bother checking if it´s for twilight I just open it. Inside I find a note with address just outside Ponyville and a cut of flank with three purple butterflies on it. Without any hesitation or second thoughts I run. Only one thing is on my mind, what happened to Flyttershy? Why did they go after her? Everypony in the bar saw that I killed them. It doesn’t take me long to get to the address. Inside I am greeted by a pink pony with three balloons on her flank. She jumps about giggling with a disturbingly joyful smile. I don´t have time nor patience for niceties so instead I just ask.

“Where is flyttershy?”

“She is right there”

She points on the wall next to her. When I look and a chilling felling spreads through me like an electrical surge, concentrating in my guts and I can feel my stomach trying make me gag. On the wall Flytteshy´s head is mounted like a hunting trophy with the same disturbing smile has the pink pony.

“What did you do to her?”

“I made her smile and brightened up her day”

The chill in me is replaced with a burning rage and every ounce of my body wants to kill her. I start of by breaking her ribcage and then I work my way to more painful areas. Despite the pain and suffering I am causing her she keps her damn smile. Not when I have mashed her into a bag of broken bones and crushed organs, not even when I grab a meat cleaver and cut of her head. She never breaks her smile.

As Apple jack walked out the door she is greeted with Filthy Rich surrounded by a horde of armed stallions.

“You killed my daughter and then you go on to end my best killer. It´s almost a shame to have to kill a mare like you”

I know he is just teasing me, that he wants me to beg and plea. But I am not going to give him that pleasure he will have to make do with killing me. See you on the other side Flyttershy.

Everpony in Ponyville are woken by the sound of guns barking like thunder.