the adventures of comet the changeling

by comet the changeling

Rating: teen
Tags: Adventure, Tragedy, Dark, Comedy
Length: 1058

the adventure of my life is told here in this amazing story about my OC

For two and a half years I've been looking for a home. Once i thought i found one, of course it wasn't though. I began to question "will i ever find a new home. A place that I can call home". I knew the the answer was yes but i didn't belive that. One day i saw a small town I thought i might stop in to get a drink. When i landed by the entrance i saw a sign that read "NO CHANGELINGS ALOUD!" I knew i couldnt go in there but, i did anyway. What did they expect a damn sign to keep changelings out, really some ponies. As i walked in there was a blue pegasus laying on a cloud. I thought i might ask him or her where a could get something to drink. When i did she woke up and scremed for somepony named Twilight. Shortly after there was a purpel unicorn standing in front of me.she told the blue pegasie that she would "handle this" <—- notice the quotes No you dont well then your an idiot….anyway those words are in quotes because one damn unicorn cant stop me, then thats when i saw it, this wasnt just any unicorn, infact it wasn't a unicorn at all it was an alicorn princess. I dont know why i said this out loud but i did,"god I am so dead" as i said that she put something around my hoves. When i tried to fly away i wasnt able to get even an inch of the ground. Then she said "dont bother you cant fly or use your magic with those things on, oh and dont try morphing it might kill you or worse" then i mumbled "how is anything worse than death, oh wait i know, princess Celestia's dungeon of torture and dispare" she then shot me with a beam from her horn. I then cried in pain as i colapsed on the ground. To make maters worse, I now have a hole in my body somewhere in a spot that i would rather not talk about. The last thing i remember is geting hit in the head by the blue pegasi. When i woke up in a dark room i saw a small light coming from what looked like a door. When i got up somepony came in and sat in front of me. I knew who she was, it was princess Celestia and then her sister princess Luna walked in after her. They then asked me questians about what i was doing in ponyvile witch, hapened to be the name of the town i was in. After the questioning they made me a soldier for there army and said if I declined I would be killed. I knew i couldn't. Decline so i didn't.(anticlimatic right? I thought so.) Later that night the whole Changeling army invaded the place i was at whitch i guess happened to be Canterlot. The last time i was at Canterlot it was to take the throne, and now im fighting for the city, intresting twist i quess. When i ran into battle soldiers kept faling and dying, one of them was on the ground writhing as his eye was riped out from its socket, then when it roled to the ground blood sprayed from his eye or at least where it was. A similar insident happened shortly after where some guys rips where riped out while he was alive. After that i picked up some weapon i had never seen befor. When i used it something shotout of it and hit a changeling in the face and riped it apart like it was scisers cuting through paper, then his brain fell out and one of the guards laughed, i shot him too dont ask why ask were in shot him in the,leg riped his leg strait off blood and a bit of bone went every were. After the battle Canterlots forces won. I was happy because i didnt die,but I was mostly happy that i got a home in ponyvile right next to a guard tower and twilights castle, of course they still dont trust me but, never the less i was still happy. I finaly had a place to call home. After 2 and a half years of searching for a home i finally found one
One day when i was walking out to buy food i saw the most beuitiful girl she was also a changeling so i had to make a really good first impression "hey hu im Comet and you are" she said her name was Meteor i told her "thats a wonderful name" then she said "the felling is mutual". Its been 4 years since i took her out on a date and now im ready to propose. I think she knew what was coming. However she was still surprised. Of course she said yes i mean who wouldnt im awsome. On our wedding day i saw twilight and the blue pegasus whose name i still dont know. Unfortunitly i dont think ill ever know her name because im moving to Canterlot soon. I thought no one would miss us but i was wrong. I was also wrong about never finding out the blue pegasies name it turns out her name was rainbowdash i told her mine was comet and that i will always miss you and every pony here.
The End

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2014-12-13 13:14:05 UTC

the first and only chapter duh

For two and a half years I've been looking for a home. Once i thought i found one, of course it wasn't though. I began to question "will i ever find a new home. A place that I can call home". I knew the the answer was yes but i didn't belive that. One day i saw a small town I thought i might stop in to get a drink. When i landed by the entrance i saw a sign that read "NO CHANGELINGS ALOUD!" I knew i couldnt go in there but, i did anyway. What did they expect a damn sign to keep changelings out, really some ponies. As i walked in there was a blue pegasus laying on a cloud. I thought i might ask him or her where a could get something to drink. When i did she woke up and scremed for somepony named Twilight. Shortly after there was a purpel unicorn standing in front of me.she told the blue pegasie that she would "handle this" <---- notice the quotes No you dont well then your an idiot....anyway those words are in quotes because one damn unicorn cant stop me, then thats when i saw it, this wasnt just any unicorn, infact it wasn't a unicorn at all it was an alicorn princess. I dont know why i said this out loud but i did,"god I am so dead" as i said that she put something around my hoves. When i tried to fly away i wasnt able to get even an inch of the ground. Then she said "dont bother you cant fly or use your magic with those things on, oh and dont try morphing it might kill you or worse" then i mumbled "how is anything worse than death, oh wait i know, princess Celestia's dungeon of torture and dispare" she then shot me with a beam from her horn. I then cried in pain as i colapsed on the ground. To make maters worse, I now have a hole in my body somewhere in a spot that i would rather not talk about. The last thing i remember is geting hit in the head by the blue pegasi. When i woke up in a dark room i saw a small light coming from what looked like a door. When i got up somepony came in and sat in front of me. I knew who she was, it was princess Celestia and then her sister princess Luna walked in after her. They then asked me questians about what i was doing in ponyvile witch, hapened to be the name of the town i was in. After the questioning they made me a soldier for there army and said if I declined I would be killed. I knew i couldn't. Decline so i didn't.(anticlimatic right? I thought so.) Later that night the whole Changeling army invaded the place i was at whitch i guess happened to be Canterlot. The last time i was at Canterlot it was to take the throne, and now im fighting for the city, intresting twist i quess. When i ran into battle soldiers kept faling and dying, one of them was on the ground writhing as his eye was riped out from its socket, then when it roled to the ground blood sprayed from his eye or at least where it was. A similar insident happened shortly after where some guys rips where riped out while he was alive. After that i picked up some weapon i had never seen befor. When i used it something shotout of it and hit a changeling in the face and riped it apart like it was scisers cuting through paper, then his brain fell out and one of the guards laughed, i shot him too dont ask why ask were in shot him in the,leg riped his leg strait off blood and a bit of bone went every were. After the battle Canterlots forces won. I was happy because i didnt die,but I was mostly happy that i got a home in ponyvile right next to a guard tower and twilights castle, of course they still dont trust me but, never the less i was still happy. I finaly had a place to call home. After 2 and a half years of searching for a home i finally found one

One day when i was walking out to buy food i saw the most beuitiful  girl she was also a changeling so i had to make a really good first impression "hey hu im Comet and you are" she said her name was Meteor i told her "thats a wonderful name" then she said "the felling is mutual". Its been 4 years since i took her out on a date and now im ready to propose. I think she knew what was coming. However she was still surprised. Of course she said yes i mean who wouldnt im awsome. On our wedding day i saw twilight and the blue pegasus whose name i still dont know. Unfortunitly i dont think ill ever know her name because im moving to Canterlot soon. I thought no one would miss us but i was wrong. I was also wrong about never finding out the blue pegasies name it turns out her name was rainbowdash i told her mine was comet and that i will always miss you and every pony here. After moving to Canterlot I was upset because I wasn't able to see any of the ponies from ponyvil. It would be fine if I could see them but Im not aloud to leave Canterlot. im glad I didn't move to the crystal empire though because it would be way worse than this. One day after a walk a saw a guard who didn't like changelings due to one killing his family so I decided to avoid him. When I got home my wife was siting on the couch waiting for me to get back. She greeted me at the door and I gave her a kiss. Then at dinner she said to me "did you speak to Luna ever" I replied "well sort of when they where questioning me" she then said "well that's depressing" and I said "damn right it is".

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