
Riven Gloom
In darkness, there is light.
Equestria has been consumed in fire and darkness. The land and it's people are tarnished and broken, and it seems things only change for the worse. But about two millennia after Equestria's destruction, a pony is born whose fate will change the course of the land...for better or worse.
Author's Note I: So this is my first attempt at really writing a story, so helpful criticism is always welcome, I'm always hoping to become better. I'd be really happy if you'd leave a comment explaining why you liked/disliked it or to just leave a critique for me. Thanks, and I hope you enjoy the story!




21264 words: Estimated about 2 hours to read
6 Chapters:
- Prologue 2015-01-14 10:36:50 UTC2137
- Chapter One: Amity (edited) 2015-01-16 13:41:20 UTC2842
- Chapter 2: Town 2015-06-19 04:52:19 UTC2425
- Chapter 3: Elmsgate 2015-06-19 05:02:44 UTC4317
- Chapter 4: Brotherhood 2016-02-05 19:24:46 UTC5989
- Chapter 5: Making a Plan 2016-04-18 19:27:47 UTC3554