Across the Universe

by C_The_Creator

Rating: everyone
Tags: Alternate Universe, Random, Adventure
Length: 423

This is a retell in god the story of the Disney movie Treasure Planet, based off of the book Treasure Island, with a few of my own OCs, and some familiar MLP FiM characters!

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2014-12-21 18:32:30 UTC

The Beginning...

King Sombra was the most evil shadow pony in all the cosmos. He showed no mercy, and killed anyone whom he was displeased with. He would travel the galaxies using his dark magic, stealing riches and treasures beyond anypony's imagination. He was legendary for his stealth, and was never caught by the Princess Celestia in all his years of pillaging. He would slip in as quiet as a shadow, to the treasure hold of she castles, then he-

"Electrocolt Shy, why are you not asleep? I thought you were dreaming, is this book too deep?" Zecora walked into Electrocolt's bedroom impatiently. Electrocolt laughed nervously and said, "but auntie, I was just at the best part! Pleeeeeaaassse...?" He opened his big shiny eyes as wide as they could go, and Zecora rolled her eyes playfully. "Fine, five more minutes, then you must go to bed. You have a long day ahead." She sat next to him and he snuggled close to her, and continued reading, "then he and his vicious shadow-ponies would storm the castle, knocking out guards, and finally, making off with their spoils quick and quiet as the shadows they were. King Sombra hasn't been seen for many years, and some say his treasure is hidden in a planet far beyond our reaches of the cosmos, a planet so dismal and dark, so cleverly hidden, only Sombra himself could possibly find it. He called the planet, Treasure Planet." Electrocolt beamed as he closed the book and set it on his nightstand. "How do you think he did it auntie? How did he just take it all and go and never get caught?

"I don't know, but now I must go..."

"Auntie...do you think my daddy will be back in the morning...?" But Zecora had already left. Electrocolt's father, Buzzshy, was the son of Fluttershy and Discord. Buzzshy left on a mission weeks before, and had been gone much longer than expected, but little Elecro didn't know any better, and clung to the dream of his father returning and spinning him around in the air, but deep inside he felt it would never be. Electrocolt was born an accidental Alicorn, and his wings were to be removed when he was older, which was discouraging, but he figured when his daddy came back, he could fly with his daddy's wings because his daddy was a pegasus, but sadly, his daddy would never fly with him again, as he was now lifeless and colorless in the pit of a demonic, multicolored factory.