The Monster They Made

by Muei-Tou

Rating: mature
Tags: Sad, Gore, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Royal Guard, Princess Celestia, Alternate Universe, Human
Length: 4112

What is the point of living if your nothing? What's the reason for them to torture me?

What is the point of living if your nothing? What's the reason for them to torture me? I never asked to be placed on this god forsaken planet, but the universe is a cruel bitch who likes to see the suffering of its creations beaten and tortured for pleasure.

Going back to the original version I did for this story and reusing the remastered with the original one for chapter one that I combined together. So again changing it once more and hopefully this is the last one.

"This story is a alternate universe of equestria, so the fellow characters will be out of character then from the show."

Published 2014-12-21 14:10:07 UTC
Last updated 2018-04-19 16:42:54 UTC

Chapter One

Chapter 1

The days always seemed to be at a stand still down in the dungeons their was really no telling if it was night or day form here just the darkness that loomed down here accompanying me. I lost count a few days ago of what the day was because my phone died. It was the only thing that I had on me that the ponies did not find or bother to have taken from me which I was graceful for.

The tall white pony was the one that ordered her guards to restrain me and lock me up in the dungeon, when a portal that sucked me in and spit me out during her day court. She had no reason to do so, in the first place and for the first week of being down here her guards started torturing me for answers and eventually it just turned into some sick joke that they got laughs out of from beating me. After they were done beating me they would, then throw my sorry-ass back into the jail cell and I would curl up into a ball crying my eye's out from the pain and misery that soon followed.

My life in this new world or planet always seems to followed the same routine like the first week in the dungeon over and over again. The torturing form the guards soon became second hand to me which resulted in me becoming just a empty shell of my former self and I did not really seem to care much anymore and just let it happen, then soon after that I started punching the stone wall in my cell until my knuckles started too blood and later on found a piece of metal that was part of the cell once and begin cutting myself until it became unbearable.

The forth week I was here I started to receive phone calls from my phone that was on the far side of the cell it started ringing this strange melody that felt really soothing to me and made me feel comfortable, then it stopped. When I slowly started crawling to my phone and pushed the button on the side it just showed a battery blinking red, then soon returned back to the black screen. I became confused about how my phone was able to receive a call even though it was died, but soon I came to a conclusion I think I was starting to loss the last bit of sanity that I had left in me.

The day after that call I got from my phone I started watching it very careful to see if it was going to ring again. The time passed on and on and I was still sitting their right by it until I was about to call it a loss cause. The phone started to ring. I hurried up and crawled over to it and picked it up and then looked at the caller ID and seen that it was a unknown caller.

I pressed the answer button on my phone and put it up to my ear.  On the other end I heard a raspy voice which sounded like a little girl who send a shiver down my spine, when she begin to talk it made me feel uncomfortable and safe at the same time which was a strange feeling.  Her voice was just above a whisper while her words were drawn out. The first few minutes were quiet with neither of us saying a word. That's when I decided to say the first word with hesitation behind it which was hello.  Then after I said that she replied back with a greeting and begin saying if I would like to have chat with her.

  I replied back to her with a yes because if it met anything to me I would have liked to hear a voice who I could talk with without them beating me or calling me crude things. It was nice to have another soul to talk to even if it was a dream, delusion, or my sanity starting to slip away it was still better than talking to myself in this dark damp cell.

The days and time seemed to have slipped by me without me knowing because for the most part of my time I was focused sitting their by my phone waiting for her to call me which became something of a habit after the first time she called and it became a daily thing later on down the road that I always looked forward to, that or either escaping into my dreams . My torturing changed after the four weeks of being here because now instead of the guards doing it was the tall white pony who came down here and started using some kind of magic on me that forced herself into my sanctuary were I was able to forget this hell and she would than take whatever knowledge she wanted and ripped it out form my memories and the pain that soon followed was always to much for me to point were I would cry tears of blood and scream for mercy until I passed out.

I am really starting to loss this battle with staying alive down here and my sanity is already lost to me. Even though it would be a blessing for it to all come to an end, but I know if I did that then I would be a coward for taking my own life and give those ponies the privilege and win of breaking me I would not let that happen instead I want to show them what happens when you push a human to there breaking point and I will get my chance to do, so its just a matter of time an being patient until they make a mistake or slip up which will allow me to escape this cell, then I will slaughter all of them for doing what they did to me. Even though when I  was scared and confused from my arrive here and asking for there help in returning me to my world instead in return I got a hoof to the face and thrown into this dungeon. They will finally get the monster that they all called me.

Chapter Two

Chapter 2

*Two mouths later*

The torturing soon stopped after the tall white pony seemed pleased with the knowledge she had taken from me. That was maybe a week or two ago if I remember or at least it felt like it to me. After that they just seemed to have left me down here to rot because no one or should I say pony came down here to continue what they did to me and the water they left was barely enough to get me by. The food I really did not care much for.

In that time I thought it would be over with the pain, but now it came to my mental health. I was facing loneliness and dehydration. I started becoming more weak over the days, but I did not let that get to me. I started trying to exercise to get my strength back a little so that when my escape window came I would be able to get up on to my feet and get as far as I can away from here were I could regain my strength, train, and plan.

The exercising continued from that day forward, while hurting myself took a dive for the worse. The calls I always looked forward to now came to an end because instead of helping me it started making me angry and the phone was no longer usable after I throw it hard at the wall, but still I could hear that sweet melody playing each time from the phone even though it was broken. My dreams were another story instead of it being the sanctuary I use to escape to now was just nightmares of memories becoming twisted instead of nice ones and the result I had from them was sleep deprivation. Hurting myself became more brutal instead of just what was bearable to me, I started pushing myself further and further until I passed out from the pain.

The days or whatever was the same as always drink the water they left me, exercise, and hurt myself. This day however felt sort of off to me it was just a feeling more than anything, but from what I learned it was something not to question and I made sure to be alert of my surroundings. About an hour or two later the dungeon ceiling started shaking back and forth and rocks started falling. I quickly as I could dodged the falling rocks and run over to the corner of the cell were I started thinking of what could be causing this. At first I thought it would have been a earthquake or something, but could not be sure unless I could see above and the second one would have been some pony screwing around with chemicals or spells above.

I get my answer sooner than I had expected. I heard a pony scream from down the hall. I could not really tell if it was from pain or fear, then that's when I seen some sort of pony who had this dark black coat, solid blue eyes, and it had holes going up its hooves. It was just standing there in the opening where I heard the scream come form and it started searching around in the cells. Soon it lied eyes on my mine.

The cheese hole pony started making its way over to my cell with each step, while I was trying to think of what I could do in this situation because 1. I was rather weak, so I could not take it head on. 2. My only weapon was a shiv, which do not give me much of a range advantage. 3. My cell did not give me much room to move around or hide and surprise attack it. So the only thing I could do was sit in the corner and pretend that I was asleep.

The pony soon came to my cell door, then started looking through the little window. I made sure not to move, breath slowly, and my image already showed how weak I was. It stopped looking through the little window and that's when I started to hear the gears to my door slowly turning. The door finally opened and then that's when the pony came in and started approaching me slowly. I quickly tightened my right hand around the shiv in my sleeve and waited until it got a little closer. The pony was finally in my reach and that's when I quickly jabbed the shiv into its neck, then I quickly pulled it out and kept at it for a few good seconds until all I seen was a lifeless pony beneath me. The pony did try fighting back, but the wound I delivered was fatal from the start with all the blood that was flowing out and he would have been lucky to have made it out of the dungeon before he dropped dead.

The feeling I got from killing that pony felt really good, but not as good as seeing my cell door open and the freedom of escaping this hell hole. Before I could do that though I had to leave a message for the tall white pony and be sure that she got the message and that would be that I would be back to finish what she started. so I picked up the pony that I killed and placed him in the back of the cell and used his blood to write the message above his corpse.

The feeling of exiting my cell felt wonderful, but still I was not out of the woods yet. I would need to escape this dungeon, castle, and city before I could enjoy it. I quickly as I could walked to the exit of the dungeon were the pony I killed came from while leaning on the wall for support. When I got there I peeked around the corner to see if there was another pony their for me to worry about and seen that it was all clear. I continued on with my path and soon came upon stairs were I cursed to myself of having to walk up them.

*few minutes later*

It was the pain in the ass to make it up here, but I am up here now and I could see the door out of here. Once I got to it I looked through the little window it had to see if there was anyone outside and there was none instead their was a few guard ponies laying unconscious with cuts and bruises on them. I walked by them and continued on to where I walked upon a intersection that went three ways  into the castle. I was not sure which way to go, so I decided to follow a drift I felt on the hallway to the left and went down there.

*1 hour later*

I walked down these hallways that seemed like they went on forever and ever until I seen a door that the drift I felt ended at so I prepared myself with my shiv in my right hand and kicked the door open and seen a shit load of those cheese hole ponies from the one I killed before in my cell.  Well this was not what I was expecting to find out here, but the hell with it my escape was only possible because the one I killed opened my cell and it looks like all the other ponies are more concerned with them, then me so the tall white pony and her guards would not get in my way of escaping.

I ran straight for the alleyway that I seen from were I kicked the door open. When I made it there my whole body was hurting, while I was having a hard time catching my breath form the run here. The cheese hole ponies seemed to not have seen me run here and I was graceful for that because I would not want to have to engage them if necessary. I am already as weak as it is and I could not add on to that unless it was something that I could not avoid. I walked down the alleyway, while trying to avoid being spotted by the cheese hole ponies in the sky and I was not sure how long I would have until the ponies cleared out the threat in the city. So I would have to hurry it up and find somewhere I could get away from this city before than.

I reached the end of the city limit which took me awhile to do so and I seen that the only way down would have been to take a train down or walk down the train tracks, which either choice was not a option to me because I was short on time. So I had to take a alternative route , which was not possible were I was because the whole city was on a mountain in which limited my routes and the only idea I had to get down quickly would have been jumping down the waterfall I seen flowing down the mountain and it was a not a pretty idea to jump down from this height either, but it was a choice I had to take.

I ditched hiding in the alleyways and decided to sprint toward the waterfall. I did not care if I was seen by the cheese hole ponies because my goal was the only thing that I was focused on. I was about a quarter away from my goal until three cheese hole ponies got in my way which stopped me from progressing any further. I told to get the fuck out of my way or else I would end them and all I got was a snicker form the three of them. The snicker I got from them really made my blood boil to the point were it pissed me off and that's when I began to loss control of my body.

I became confused at what was happening because my body seemed to have a mind of its own and started moving on its own accord without me doing anything. My body than got into a fighting stance with the shiv raised up and then all of a sudden my body charged straight toward one of them and stabbed it right in the eye. The pony dropped to the ground like a rock and then that's when I heard a small chuckling without emotion behind it coming form me, sent a shiver down my spine. Soon my body turned to the other two who were filled with panic and fear. My right hand raised the shiv and swing at the pony on the left. At first nothing happened and a second later blood came gushing out from the pony's neck. The blood splattered onto my clothes and the chuckling became louder. The last one was curled up into a ball on the ground crying maybe from the two ponies I killed or because it know it was next. My body slowly walked toward the cheese pony and grabbed it by the neck and stabbed the shiv straight into his stomach. I begin to slowly start getting control of my body afterward.

I fell on to my knees with the shiv still in my hand and started processing what came over me during the fight or should I call it a slaughter instead. I was on my knees motionless trying to go over what happened to me and all of a sudden a shockwave came form the castle. It was a wave of magic that sent all the cheese ponies away from the city and the force of it sent me over the edge of the cliff to the body of water were the waterfall hit the land and that was the last thing I seen before I passed out.

Chapter Three

Chapter 3

The wedding was rescheduled for the next day because of the changeling attack on the wedding of shining armor and Princess Mi Amore Cadenza. The city of canterlot was under going clean up afer the changeling attack and search parties were sent out to look for injured ponies. Celestia was looking down at canterlot from her baloney wondering of how all of this could have happened right under their muzzle's without them knowing about it, but accept her fateful student twilight sparkle who was the only one suspicious about the fake Candace when she was not acting like herself and not knowing their special dance.

Celestia was happy that none of her ponies badly hurt from the attack and that half of the city was close to being fixed from the small destruction the changelings left. The time was now 8:00 p.m. and it was now time for Celestia to lower the sun and make way for her sister to raise the moon for the night. Celestia fell asleep for the night and was hoping that the next day in equestia will be back on track and hopefully this incident will blow over in a few days, but not be forgotten for the day their capital was attacked by a great threat.

*11 hours later*

Celestia woke up the next day and raised the sun. She was still kind of tried from the  attack yesterday, but she decided to push on for the day even though, because a duty for a princess is never done. Celestia arrived at the dining hall to get her sweet morning nectar of the godly black liquid, which helped her get through each day and put up with the peasent nobles and their unbelievable idiotic request which made no sense, instead of wasting her time.

"How are thee faring this morning sister?," Luna said. Celestia snapped out of her day dream when she heard her sisters voice. Celestia was embarrassed when she didn't notice that her sister was in the room with her, but quickly recovered and said "I am doing alright this morning Lulu, just a bit tried is all."

"Sister are thee going to be able to get through the day," said Luna worried a bit. "I'll be alright Lulu." Celestia countinued on "I will try to get through the day and make sure to make it to Candace's wedding tonight. Even though I would rather want to go to sleep instead until the wedding, but I will get behind on my work and it would be a pain in the plot if I had to play catch up with it." Celestia said.

" If thee is confident in getting through the day then I will not push on the matter at hoof sister. Just promise thee that you will not work thee self to hard." Luna said. " I promise lulu that I will not work myself to hard in my work." Celestia said. The sister's morning breakfast continued on with them chatting about random stuff and when they were done they parted ways to do what they needed to do for the day.

*4 hours later*

The day was going alright until a guard quickly ran into her day court. The guard quickly apologized for interrupting her meeting with the nobel, but Celestia was happy to have the distraction. She raised her hoof and told the guard to stand and to report what was this important information that could not wait until later. He looked at the Nobel on the right side of him and told Celestia that this information would rather be spoken in private. Celestia nodded her head and told the Nobel to wait outside.

Celestia now told the guard to speak this information. He walked up to her and whispered into her ear about the information. After hearing the information Celestia's faced hardened and quickly got up from her throne. The doors to the court opened and celestia told all her little ponies that the day court is dismissed for today because of some important business.

*30 minutes later*

Celestia approached the dungeon doors, while a few guards walked behind her. The guard guarding the dungeon door bowed to celestia and asked if she was here to check on the cell that the prisoner resigned in. Celestia nodded and the guard unlocked the door to the dungeon.

*11 minutes later*

Celestia arrived at the humans holding cell. She ordered her guards to stay outside while she looked inside of the cell. When she entered the first thing to hit her was the unpleasant smell, the second one was a lot of strange drawings on the wall with some tally marks by the bed. The cell walls that use to be dark gray was now covered in dried blood and the last thing she seen was a message on the wall that said "He will finish what she started." When Celestia looked down at the cell floor she had seen a dead changeling with a puddle of dry blood. Celestia quickly ran to the far corner of the cell and started throwing up her breakfast.

*3 minutes later*

Celestia walked out of the cell and made sure to close up the door tightly. She turned to her guards and told them line up. When they were done Celestia told them that this will be a serect mission for a few certain guards if they chose to accept it and if not then she said to leave the area immediately. They all stayed put and Celestia said I am sorry to ask this much from each and everypony, but the human has escaped and this human will be willing to kill without mercy toward our kind and is not willing to be reborn of friendship and harmony. So the two options that are present to you will be died or alive and if you happen to bring him to me alive I will give you one thing in return depending on what it is.

I will remind you that no pony will not speak or say anything about this human and it will only be the guards who were their on that day. If anyone of you tell this to another soul even to the other princesses you will be be removed from the royal guard and killed. Any objection *guards shake their head* then dismissed.

Chapter Four

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Acceptance

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