Toilet Failure

by lillygirlio

Rating: mature
Tags: Comedy, Random, Slice of Life
Length: 1037

Rainbow Dash and AppleJack are challenged to hold their pee for a week. They accept the challenge but soon find out it's too much for them to handle.

Rainbow Dash and AppleJack make up a holding challenge. But they soon find out it was more than they could handle.

Warning : Watersports. If you don't like that kind of thing then I suggest you click off this video right now.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2015-02-12 20:11:02 UTC

Toilet Failure

Rainbow Dash flew speedily through Ponyville. It was a bright, sunny day and everyone was smiling wide. Rainbow Dash came to Sweet Apple Acres and stopped by the barn door. AppleJack came out of the barn. "Hey Rainbow! I've got something to ask you!" She said happily. "I want to ask you something too!" Replied Rainbow Dash. "I NEED TO ASK YOU A CHALLENGE! ITS TO HOLD YOUR PEE IN FOR A WEEK!" They both said together. "Well that's a good challenge, I'm up for it." Said Rainbow Dash. "Me too!" Said AppleJack.

They both went home and got into their beds "This should be easy!" Thought AppleJack. "Piece of cake! "Thought Rainbow Dash. AppleJack fell asleep, but Rainbow Dash was still tossing and turning in her bed thinking, Will I make it? and.... I hope I make it. she finally fell asleep.

Rainbow Dash

Meanwhile, Rainbow Dash woke up and couldn't get back to sleep because she was so desperate, she also went to Twilight Sparkle and she told her the same thing. She also did what Twilight said and it did her good. She was still desperate. She also had never lost a holding competition and was thinking about. I've bitten off way more than I can chew this time, it's gonna be awkward when I lose control...

She stretched her holding muscles to the limit and decided she would go for a walk in the Everfree Forest. She stumbled off her cloud house and stretched her wings out ready to fly down to the Forest. She was almost losing it and the fact she was flying made her needs even worse. She saw a river and decided on a swim.

She waded through the water but almost leaked because her bladder spasmed and panged badly. She had to stop. She then realized something, she was going to lose control.... Yeh,I guess it would be kinda hot if I lost control but everypony would probably see me but it may ruin my future as a hero forever and I will be known as the worst holder ever because AJ has a tiny bladder and mine will probably be half the size.

The End Sequel

They both met up in the forest. uh-oh thought applejack. Ohhh-no... thought rainbow dash. They both were standing facing each other. "It.. Is...Time.." Stammered Rainbow Dash. "For..The..End...." Stammered AppleJack. They both were almost losing it but rainbow dash suddenly felt a spasm again and was forced to hold harder than ever.

The same happened to AppleJack. "I..Can't...Hold...It...Anymore!" Blurted Rainbow Dash "Me..Neither!" Blurted AppleJack. As they both said it a long stream gushed out from between their legs and pattered on the dirt below. Their streams kept coming out until finally they stopped. "Woah.." Said Rainbow Dash with sudden arousal. "That was kinda hot watching you pee." Said AppleJack. "Same.." Said Rainbow Dash. "So.. A friendly draw?" Asked AppleJack. "Yes, a friendly draw." Replied Rainbow Dash.

They also were friends forever and it turned out Twilight Sparkle has saved all of it on camera and posted it on ponybook for everypony to see and they all loved it, it was a very arousing video and everypony was happy with a sexy video to look at. Ponyville was happy forever and the video was shown throughout equestria.

Bonus!

Princess Celestia and Princess Luna were in their throne room staring at their laptop screens. The video on the screen was the video that Twilight Sparkle posted of Rainbow Dash and AppleJack losing control. They found it very arousing and began to rub between their legs "Oh Luna this video is sooo hot and sexy and arousing!" Celestia Said. "I know Tia! Its soo hot! OMG!"

They both cummed at once. "SOO HOT!" They both said together. "Lets watch it again Tia!" Suggested Luna. "Yes!" Answered Celestia. So Celestia replayed the video and the same thing happened over and over again. "Umm lets stop now..." Said Luna. "Yes it's getting a bit messy isn't it?" Asked Celestia as she looked down at the sticky white cum all over the thrones. "Yes, very." Answered Luna.

A great big thanks. (Author's Note)

Thanks a lot for reading guys. This took me about 2 hours and I'm grateful. I've also been in school a lot lately so I haven't been able to finish this.

AppleJack

AppleJack woke up in the middle of the night and a thought struck her. Wait... In the morning what if im bursting? She was very worried. She had never lost a holding contest before and she never intended to lose one. She worried and worried and kept thinking the same thought, Wait... In the morning what if im bursting? but she finally drifted off into a dream. There was so much apple cider, the ponyville lake was full of it. She got a mug and went over to it, filled the mug up, and drunk it. She drunk about 10 mugs then felt a strong pressure in her bladder then she saw a toilet she went to it and sat down and got ready to relieve herself. AppleJack woke up "Oh no!"

She whispered and checked her bed for wetness, nothing was there. "Thank goodness!" She whispered.

She looked at her clock and noticed it was 8:30am. She got up and put on some clothes then went out to the apple orchard to start bucking some trees. She felt another strong pressure and stopped immediately. She made her way back inside but then remembered, Me and Rainbow Dash's challenge! Uh oh.. I'm probably going to lose... She shoved her front hooves between her legs and held hard like a little filly.

"I'm going to see twilight for advice..." She said. She waddled through Ponyville and all eyes were on her, someponies were giggling or putting hooves over there mouth. She found Twilight Sparkle's house and went in. "Twi, how can I hold this anymore? Me and Rainbow had a holding competition can I have advice?" Asked AppleJack. "Sure!" Said Twilight. "Okay so first hold like your doing now, then shove your legs together and try to sit down more." Said Twilight Sparkle. "Okay." Said AppleJack.