A New Town for 2 New Poines

by Mariofire1

Rating: everyone
Tags: Random, Alternate Universe, Romance
Length: 1125

hey this is my first story so dont exept anything good from me

hey guys and gals I made this story in my head a bunch of times and one was better than the other also im not doing the full thing because that will take forever so. this about two my oc's blaze and avery try to find a fit in a new town so I hope you like it.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2015-03-29 18:05:42 UTC

The Robot Eye ( A little back story)

But where are yawl parents at. well its a long story. tell, tell, tell. ok but first. *puts hoof on eye than pulls*.  is that a. yep a robot eye. that so cool how did you get it. well... it was a good day out side the bird were chirping and the bees were buzzing when I had looked outside I was the age of 9 and it was my b day. I didn't want to ruin this one. well I should start going down stairs moms probs making pancakes for me sis and dad.*looks back outside* every thing going to be just fine. Riiiiiiiippppppp.  *screams*. what in pray tell is going on oh its just you Blaze. moommm. Yes. I think I need go to hospital.  why? * turns around*. take your hoof off your eye. NO! why? just take it off and we can get this settled ok. ok *starts crying* *takes hoof off eye* how did this h...happen. ?. we need you In a hospital and fast. ok . *go's to hospital* 10 hours later. where's mom and blaze. ?. *door open*

what happened *pulls out eye* *mouth drops**Avery cry's and go's upstairs*. Avery what's wrong. I I I. yah. im sorry. for what . *points at eye*. oh...* hugs Avery* its okay ill be fine. you sure. yah. and about our parents the two were very sick with a desiese mom use to work at a catering company and dad was a miner what's funny is that dad was a unicorn. no offence sweetiebelle. anyway that's both story's. wow now I feel sad for you. that s ok oh yeah my robot eye know the future, past, and present and it now's people's information. really. yeah. oh wait you might like to see our sister's the two fillies asked. I will like to. scootaloo said nothing.  don't you have a sister scootaloo. No. well rainbow dash is kind of of a sister to her. hey . *all laugh*.

Prologue

A New Town for 2 New Ponies

Prologue

It was an a good and fine day in Manehattan when two ponies reached a train station to go to ponyville the two where age 11 and the other 10.

Blaze: hey could we get two train tickets to ponyville.

Ticket guy: okay that will be about 20 bits.

Blaze: sigh... all right here.

Ticket guy: you train will come in right about ... now

The train pulled up by the station.

Conductor: all aboard the train to ponyville.

The two galloped to the train and left.

Blaze: I’m going to miss are old home.

Avery: why would you miss that peace of junk?

Blaze: well we have been there for so long.

Avery: oh ... well we probably make some new friends in ponyville and besides Manehattan has so much drama.

Blaze: humph... you’re right on that one sis.

Conductor: everypony off for we are here at ponyville.

Blaze: well were off. He and his sister got off the train saw all the ponies there.

Avery: Wow. That is alot of ponies.

Blaze: you got that right.

The two ponies trotted and looked around.

Freinding Three Fillies

So they looked around that sight were amazing to Avery but blaze told Avery that it was fine if she liked it.  but one sight got them confused a little tree house.

Avery: what is that is that a tree house why would somepony need one.

Blaze: I don't know.

Blaze well lets spilt up you go on your own I have somewhere too okay.

Avery: okay. she said with a smile on her face.

Avery:  I am going to check what that tree house is okay

Blaze: okay. she trotted off. Blaze: wait. Avery: what is it. Blaze: take this. Avery: its a dog caller .ohhhh. Blaze: we will meet back here okay. Avery: okay. she said trotting off she stopped when she saw a fire and was confused Avery: why would a pony set a fire.

she trotted to a bush and hid she poked her head out and saw three fillies before her she hid back and looked. okay girls we are not fire ponies. yeah you almost burnt up my wing applebloom.  well that's not my fault you got in the way over the fire. yeah but you bumped into me. girls stop fighting that's not getting use now where. sweetie's right this is getting us now where. just than Avery snicked. did you here that. yeah it sounded like it came form somepony. Avery tried to lay low but she was found. Please don't hurt me. where you sent here by Diamond Tiara. Who's Diamond Tiara and What are you doing with that fire. we were trying to get our cutie marks. she blushed know that she didn't have her cutie mark. but why would you want your cutie marks. well everypony at our school makes fun of us ... wait do you have your cutie mark. blushing said no. well you join the cmc. and what does that stand for and who made it. Us and its the cutie mark crusaders. okay. what's your name. My name is Avery sister of Blaze. wait you have a brother. yeah he is very nice. he's a stallion right. nope he's a 1 year ahead of me. so what age are you. 10. well did you get to see the town. yeah but I didn't know what the places were. Avery said a little saddened . well where glad to show you around. that would be great. Okay where ya bother. well we slip up so I don't really know where he is and I did get to say this what are your names. oh yeah I will start im sweetiebelle sister to rarity. im applebloom sister to applejack and big Macintosh. im scootaloo. okay I will try to find my bother and I will be back okay. okay we'll be at the tree house and you bring him okay. okay. and Avery galloped to get blaze. 2 hours later. there you are. oh hey Avery you found out about that tree house. oh what was there. I will show you come on lets go. she heald his hoof and galloped off to the tree house.um... Avery who are they. oh. this is applebloom, sweetiebelle, and scottaloo. you can called them my new friends there going to show us what everything in ponyville right girls. right. also can I join there club. what club. oh well they want to get  their cutie marks. and what is the club name and who made it. them and its the cmc's or the curie mark crusader's. yeah im okay with that. thanks bro.