Coco's Torn String of Fate

by Kaijeno

Rating: teen
Tags: Slice of Life, Romance, Coco Pommel, Original Character, Suri Polomare, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Comedy
Length: 1947

Your typical love story. Stallion meets Mare,Mare meets Stallion with a twist

Coco Pomell who now works in one of Rarity's worldwide fashion designer buildings in Manehatten.(that's a period instead of a comma now) New Horse, is losing her edge because she thinks she is not good enough to be a designer like her boss. She decides to make one last dress before she quits the fashion industry for good. On the East side of Manehatten lives a young stallion who is thinking of moving up from his poor life from gangs and stealing to finishing college and doing something with his life.
How will these two ponies changes their lives for the better.

Published 2014-12-23 03:20:15 UTC
Last updated 2015-01-05 03:11:33 UTC

It now begins

Author's Note

Authors note: Hello every pony. This is my first MLP fan fic. So please Go easy on me.
This is your typical love story . Enjoy.

It now begins

Manehatten, the place to be something. From selling food, to the plays in theaters but now it is know for fashion. Rarity ,now know as the goddess of Style has made it to the big leagues. She owns at least three buildings around the world and of course one would be in Ponyville so she can be close to her friends. But, this story is not about her . Nope, this story is about a young Earth Pony in Manehatten who works at the first ever Fashion Building of her brand which Rairty calls, “Le Hooves and Mane.” This pony is named Coco Pomell.

It was an early morning for our young earth pony. Coco was staggering to the kitchen for breakfast . She had her usual meal: One bowl of wheat cereal and a Sunflower Sandwich. This was practically normal for her everyday life and it was kinda tiring for her to keep going through all this.

“ Well time for another great day.” So she said as her recent smiled changed to a frown. Its been almost 3 years since Rairty made her the Co-Owner of the whole business. She should feel happy that she gets this privilege right? She’s not really, Coco feels as if she isn't as good as Rarity.

As she walked to the building, she was greeted by her new unicorn assistant named Ruby String. Her fur was all red with her wonderful ruby eyes. Its like she could be a crystal Pony.

“ Good Morning boss.” Ruby said with smiled has she handed Coco a latte with her magic. Coco was still deep in thought about her life. She wonders what else she can do besides design. As they reach to her office which was neatly made . The Fabrics were organized and her blueprints were neatly stacked. Ruby had her own desk which she sat next to coco and begun there work.

"Now Ruby,there is going to be a special thread coming to this building. Rairty herself made this with her boyfriend so it is extremely valuable okay." Coco said dully as she sighed

Ruby nodded at her statement, however she was a bit worried about her boss, “I really hope she’s okay.
‘ She thought to herself.

The young pony looked out the window and stared out into the distance wondering what else is there for her.

Meanwhile on the East side.

“STOP YOU THIEF!!!”

A young Stallion unicorn was being chased by the cops. This pony stole some rare merchandise. He was hooded up so all they saw while running was a brown horn and golden eyes .

They have been chasing him for almost 20 whole minuets. The hooded pony kept running and running until suddenly. He finally got stuck in a dead end.

"We have you now. Surrender now and we may give ya break." The Earth Officer pony said.

“You little think you can catch me ? Guess again .” The Mysterious pony use its magic horn and turned it to a sword and made a rift to escape leaving the officers speechless.

“T-that was amazing.” The Officer Earth Pony Said,

“That was a high level teleportation spell. Only a few including princess twilight can use this . This pony an’t no joke.” The officer unicorn said they fall back to the station.

Farther away from them, the hooded pony came out of the rift who was then greeted by other ponies . Most of theses looks like they belong in a gang. Which they actually are. Though this pony isn't really in the gang itself. He just works for them.

“There he is the man of the hour. Did you get the goods?” The raggadity looking earth pony said.

“The Mysterious pony took off his hoodie. Now fully seeing his appearance, his fur was a darkish Brown color with his dirty blonde mane and tail .

“You damn straight I got the goods.” He pulled out of the bag a large chocolate diamond. Which made every pony basks In it glory.

Oh yeah the boss will love this,”Said the earth pony that took it and walked to the large abandoned building ,”Oh yeah. You pony’s better scram. Remember the heat is still on ..um…um.” The earth pony started rubbing his head for his name.”Err what was your name again Pony?”

One face hoof to the face the unicorn did as he walked away, “ Its Aura,Arua Gemstone.

As they all left,Arua went back to his home where he was greeted by his older brother,"Arua you made it back huh?" Arua's brother was named Stervi who almost looked exactly like his younger brother expect his Mane is more messy and his eyes are a light red.

"Yeah I made it out. I thought you said the Cops wouldn't know about the operation. I got heat all over my ass now. Thank god I was covered up or its jail-time for your little brother. " He said laughing while his brother laughed as well." Still big bro you promised right? The last job we are gonna do is our last right? After this we'll move out of the projects and move on to big things right?

Stervi walked up to him and gave him a pat on the head.,"I never go back down on my word."

He was so excited to finally leave this dump he called home. He was't all like this though. Arua was top grade student in the Canterlot Academy for gifted unicorns which was now under Princess twilight control. He was doing so well but he left the academy before he can even finish his final exam. Twilight told him that he can always come back to finish but promised her not to get in trouble and boy did he break that. Still his life is about to change. One more job,just more and they can finally move up in society and stop there bad ways.

Seperations

Author's Note

If you see any errors.Please let me know.

Seperations

After a long day of work ,Coco was heading home but was returning back for the night shift. She wanted to head back to see Rarity's new thread. She said that with her boyfriend, he chewed up some rare rubies and she had to tell him to spit it out. As he spit out the gems,it was grinded to the point that it was almost powder which gave her the idea to used the powered rubies into freshly made silk to make a new thread called "The Love Fire Thread". That was named by the boyfriend which Rarity,sorta didn't like but went along with it.

She went to her home to grab a bite to eat and took a long bath . Coco soaked in there for a very long time. As she thought about rarity having someone to love.

"A boyfriend.Will I ever find a stallion that likes me?" She thought. Coco then pictured,a male Earth Stallion. She wanted someone who was kind and can protect her from bad ponies. Coco started to fantasize about her so called prince charming and the stuff they can do. Stuff like, him taking her out to dinner, having fun and other things but she lost track of time seeing she spent a whole forty-five minutes in the tub. She rushed out and dried herself off and headed for the building.

Thankfully she wasn't TOO late. The Postmare was still waiting for her. " I see you finally arrived. You know I have other stuff to do right?" the PostMare said. Coco apologized by paying her more and bowing. "I'm sorry.please forgive me.Look, I will pay you some extra bits for your troubles." Coco then paid her an extra 40 bits. The postmare sighed at her as she took the bits.,Thank you. Just make sure to be here earlier when you have a package."

The Mare then took out a large parcel and made her sign a few things. After that,they went their separate ways. Coco was alone and her assistant had left to head home. Besides the janitor and a few guards,she was the only pony working on a design. As Coco open the parcel,she found the spool of thread,two to be more exact. "Two?She gave me two? I wonder why?" She thought. As she looked through the Box,there was a note. It said:

Dear Coco

I hope you like the thread I gave you.This should help you in your latest design. Your last dress was outstanding. I love each and every detail of it. Spiky Wikey here hopes you enjoy it as much as he did making it. Good luck

Sincerely Rarity

Coco was so happy that she still cared for her. This gave a Smile on her face.Coco had put the letter in a box where she keeps all rarity's letters and started to get to work. She already had her blueprints out so all she needed was to place the new thread into the sewing machine to get started

Meanwhile on top of the Building Arua and his brother Stervi were about to break in. Both brothers were in some black attire to blend in with the darkness surrounding them. "Arua,do your thing." Arua started using his magic,making them both transparent,making them able to float and phase through the building. "Okay bro we have three mins before this Spell wears off.Lets go now.The Spool of thread should be in the Bosses office." they both kept phasing through the walls until they found it with only sixty seconds to spare.'

Stervi grabbed the thread but then took a look at the Mare just a few inches away.'Wow she's a hottie aint she little bro? " As Arua took a look,he couldn't believe it.She was beautiful unlike anymare he had seen. She was working really hard on a dress and she looked really tired. "So Tired." Coco said as she was falling asleep." Sadly because of them looking at Her,there sixty seconds was up as the both fell hard to the floor."Dammit brother!"

Coco was so tired,that the thud they made her jolt up and turned around to see two stallions in her office. There was only one thing she can do,Scream. The young mare was frightened and the two Stallions were now blown and its only a matter of time before security arrives.
"Crap,we're blown. Arua run and its every pony for himself.." Those four words Stervi said,Every pony for himself was a rule they both agreed on. When they do this,they have leave the other pony behind.Even if that pony is related.

They both ran off with the one thread in hoove. As they ran within the building, they were now being chased by three guards. Stervi tripped on a loose piece of rug making him drop the thread,but he got right up without the thread. Arua on the other had used his magic to grab the string. Unfortunately the thread got him all tangled up making him literally tied up. Arua dropped to the floor but Stervi kept going."...Bro?!" Arua Shouted but he kept running. Arua Seriously thought he was joking about that rule.Like a rule to keep him on his toes but he seriously left him behind.Now he was trapped with the guards right behind him. The Guards had a scary look on there faces and all Arua could say was,

"Heh heh. Hey Guys, nice to drop in...Im screwed aren't I"

"Ya think?"