An Unexpected Change in Course

by Ganein
The cybernectic leader of an advanced, miltaristic and nomadic group of outcasts that wander the stars meets an unpredictable outcome that lands him on the surface of Equestria. What will happen to him when he encounters beings he could never imagine

Michael Naral, a name that would've caused whispers to circulate around bars through out most space faring civilizations as the infamous leader of the Black Hearts mercenary guild. A guild known for its ruthlessness and brutality when they were hired, but when results were all that mattered, they would usually be the first to be hired for the job. Though despite their effectiveness when they were hired, no civilized, inter-planetary nation would let them establish an outpost on their soil or even in orbit above. What will happen to such a group if they were forced to land on an unknown planet?

This is my first ever fan-fic, so constructive criticism is very welcomed. Also I will try my best to play all of the characters as accurately as possible.
*Update: I could really use some help with this story. Please read the Author's note at the end of the unfinished chapter.

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Science Fiction
Adventure
Human
Anthro
Gore
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
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8064 words: Estimated 40 minutes to read

4 Chapters:

  1. 1. The Beginning of Change 2014-12-24 18:13:20 UTC
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  2. 2. The survivors meet the natives (Part One) 2014-12-25 22:00:37 UTC
    2589
  3. 3. The survivors meet the natives (Part two) 2014-12-28 19:08:31 UTC
    1673
  4. 4. Trouble with communications 2014-12-31 17:49:59 UTC
    2107