Applebloom's Mentor

by floppy

Rating: teen
Tags: My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Other, Silver Spoon, Comedy, Cutie Mark Crusaders, Adventure, Diamond Tiara, Crossover, Human
Length: 1159

a normal day in ponyville where applebloom gets bullied by diamond tiara

Applebloom goes to school and it is the same day every day when diamond tiara bullies her. But one day a certain stallion from another planet comes and decides to become her mentor.will his advice help her? Read and find out. And no my OC is not in this. Cover photo made by me.

Published 2012-05-05 08:24:01 UTC
Last updated 2012-05-05 08:24:01 UTC

another school day

Another day in Ponyville after Celestia raises the sun. You know what else happens on this day? Today is the first day of the week where young colts and fillies have to go to school. Everyone was happy except for a yellow country filly with a red mane. She was always afraid of being bullied for having a blank flank by a certain rich and snobbish pony who always bragged about how rich her daddy was and how she gets whatever she wants. Applebloom could not stand her one single bit. So she asked her older sister

Applejack can I skip school today?

"Why Applebloom ya do know that goin to school will give ya a good education and a dandy future." Said Applejack. "Now why would ya skip a dandy opportunity like that? Im sure their ain't somethin wrong with yall in school is there?"

"No sis." Replied Applebloom.

"Besides, I"m sure your Cutie Mark Crusader friends will have tons of plans today and might actually earn yourselves yall's cutie mark."

Applebloom's expression changed from a glum looking one to an overly excited one after hearing her sister's comment about her and what her friends are doing today.

As Applebloom walked with her friends Scootaloo, and Sweetie Bell. They all talked about what they were going to do today after school when a familiar pinkish filly with a grey,purple, and white striped mane came up to them and spoke with a very snobbish voice.

"Well well well if it isn"t miss low class farmgirl, miss chicken, and miss annoying little sister. Are you two discussing your most embarrassing plans to get your cutie marks blank flanks?" Said the filly.

She was the daughter of one of the most richest ponies in all of Equestria known as Filthy Rich. Her name as you know it was Diamond Tiara and had a crown as a cutie mark.

Scootaloo was about to snap when Applebloom said "Let it go Scootaloo its just Diamond Tiara bein herself." With that said the three walked into Ms. Cherilee"s classroom.

For a full seven hours the whole class was taught about magic, pony history, math, and surprisingly the Quadratic formula. None of the foals knew what the hay the quadratic formula was even used for.

After school the CMC all met outside and Scootaloo suggested to go to the tree house. Of course the rich and bratty Diamond Tiara came and Started taunting them over how much money she has and how they did not get their cutie marks.

"WELL WELL WELL LOOK WHAT WE HAVE HERE SILVERSPOON. THOSE THREE LOSERS ARE STILL LOOKING FOR THEIR CUTIE MARKS." taunted Diamond Tiara.

"UHH I KNOW RIGHT THAT WAS SO THREE MONTHS AGO." replied Silver Spoon.

The CMC decided to stand there quietly and follow what everybody usually says, "ignoring them". Applebloom tried her best to try to bare with the insults that the two High class fillies were giving them.

Meanwhile a young stallion was sitting under a tree writing a poem with a microscope and a noose around his neck. He was a large Earth Stallion with a White Coat, Blonde mane, blue eyes, and a cutie mark with a backwards "E" along with a microphone in front of it. He quickly looked up and saw Diamond Tiara and SilverSpoon picking on them.

"Damn I need to teach those girls how to defend themselves. Also this scene could go with the lyrics of the new song I'm writing. I hope my daughter Halie back home will like this song when it has been recorded and aired on the radio. Say I should go and talk to them when those two bitches are done." said the stallion.

Once he said that he closed his notebook and decided to stand up, carried his book in his mouth and walked to the motel he was staying in with the usual angry expression that he usually puts.

20 minutes later*

"That is why you three do not have a special talent, because one, you don't have enough money and two you're talentless."

With that the two bullies walked straight to their chariots where their fathers were waiting for them. The CMC all had sad looks on their faces when Scootaloo broke the silence and said

"We will find our cutie marks no matter what Diamond Tiara says, she is nothing but a bully to likes to keep people's dreams down."

"Yeah but what are we gonna do?" asked Sweetie Bell. "Hmmmm" The CMC started thinking. Then all of a sudden Applebloom interrupted and said

"Aw shoot I almost forgot I have to come home early today. I am free tomorrow we can go crusading then."

"Ouch sorry Applebloom but yeah tomorrow sounds good. Seeya."

"Allright you too both of yall. I will see yall tomorrow." Applebloom walked home slowly with her head down all the way to her barn where she saw Applejack bucking apples. Applejack came up to her and asked "Well howdy Applebloom how was school?" Applebloom replied, giving her a bad poker face without Applejack even realizing it "It went fine." "All righty then go have have something to eat sugarcube there is plenty of fresh apple pie in the oven cooked ready inside the barn."

Applebloom started walking towards the barn with her head down when she managed to hit something rock solid. She looked up and it was a stallion. Applebloom said "Whoops sorry mister." "No no its ok I wanted to talk to you about something." replied the stallion. It was the same stallion with the blonde mane, blue eyes, white coat, and backwards E with a microphone for a cutie mark. It seems he was asking the whole town where a yellow filly with a red mane is.

"Ok mister but I don't know you so what is there to talk about?" asked Applebloom. "I saw you, you were being bullied by some girl at school today." replied the stallion. "Well long story short she thought we will never find our special talent." sighed Applebloom. "So what you're just going to let a spoiled bitch and her kiss-ups ruin what you want to do? Naw man that ain't right you gotta learn how to stand up for yourself." replied the stallion. "I'll tell you what you go to the motel in Ponyville called the "Brony INN Motel" and find room 313 tomorrow or day after and I will teach you some of the best comebacks. Remember if you have enemies and you insult them, good it means you're finally standing up to something. Also once you find your talent, keep on using your talent cause remember that you only get one shot or one opportunity to seize everything you ever wanted. Don't let it slip." the stallion briefly said. "Ok thanks mister. What's your name?" asked Applebloom. Calmly he replied "The name is Marshall, Marshall Bruce Mathers III."