The story of Snap

by Dragoon099

Rating: teen
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Length: 606

Hi guys this is my first time writing a FimFic so yeah enjoy p.s.ThePicHasNothingToDoWithTheStory

This story will be the story of a human (yes another one of those) taken to equestria but with no recollection of his past (yup that cliche too) and his struggle to adapt to this new world and as i said before this is my first fic so any CONSTRUCTIVE criticism will be greatly appreciated and also leave in the comments anything you would like to see to out protagonis p.s. I start off in zecoras pov sort of. :/ p.s.s. This has a teen rating as I may include some more mature themes later in the story. p.s.s.s. I didn't list zecora in the char listing as she dosen't have a terribly major role.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2012-05-01 20:37:05 UTC

Chapter 1

(Sorry still trying to figure out the underlines and the italicas and all that any help would be apreciated I must seem like such a noob :( well I am :P so thi first chapter is just to see what you guys think of my work so yeah hope you enjoy the intro :D)

Chapter 1

Zecora was just trotting through the Everfree Forest looking for some more for a new potion she was making up and she had to say it had been a good day she had collected all manner of fresh ingredients for her new recipe. She was careful to go around the poison joke as she remembered those ponies, who had charged right through them and chuckled to herself as she remembered their ailments, Twilight with here floppy horn, Pinkie who had her tongue swollen to such a size that she couldn’t even speak! Rarity whose usually well kept and perfect mane was turned into a unkempt mess! Zecora smiled as she approached the entrance to her home when she noticed the door was open! Panicked she sprinted inside with a yell warning the intruder of the many things that would happen if he or she touched one of her potions.

Meanwhile

It had take to calling itself snap as that was the only sound it could hear after falling from the tree it had woken in. After two hours or so of nursing its arm to a time when the pain was at least bearable Snap picked a direction and started walking. Snap stumbled along a hut, “In the middle of a forest?” Snap thought to itself and then concluded that it probably wouldn’t have been the strangest thing that happened recently. Snap decided to search the house, he (Snap had seen a book or two and had a quick read and decided to refer to himself as a male.) had been looking for around about an hour not daring to touch the mysterious liquids around him Snap didn’t intend to stay long but he never was good with time, but he did have some of the fastest reactions you’ll ever see so as soon as he heard a word from the owner of this place he was sprinting towards a window to what he thought was the back garden so he took a leap of faith and landed on the ground. Snap looked back and without looking where he was going started running…

Three days later

Word was travelling fast around Ponyville of the mysterious intruder into Zecoras’ house and everypony had finally started calming down and everypony thought they’d forget about the whole occurrence but of course none of them seemed to notice the shy mare that had been missing for the past two days…

Two days earlier

Snap had been resting in a bed of blue flowers that had seemed quite comfortable when he decided to find a nice place to faint. When Snap woke up he yawned but there was some thing strange about this yawn and he knew it he thought for a bit and started to hum a bit of a tune when he realised what it was, he couldn’t make a noise of any description! At first Snap found this quite cool but that changed when he tried to get up and put so much pressure on his broken right arm that he nearly fainted there and then but he didn’t so he screamed for help and… nothing there was complete and utter silence he yelled again and remembered he couldn’t make a single sound, Snap then proceeded to collapse again.