The Strike of a Blade

by Pkrockinomega

Rating: everyone
Tags: Romance, Adventure
Length: 575

Neonite, a loyal guard of Ponyville and Cloudsdale, has a crush on another pegasus that lives in Ponyville. Everyday he tries to tell her his feelings for her, but whenever he does, he just hesitates and avoids her, making him angry at himself. One day, a horde of monsters attack Ponyville and Cloudsdale, and takes the pegasus far away, very deep into the Everfree Forest. He's given an order from his master to drive back the monsters that invaded Ponyville and Cloudsdale, and to go retrieve the kidnapped girl pegasus. Neonite sees this as his chance to finally confess his love for her.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2011-07-16 22:06:49 UTC

Chapter 1

"Ugh, what time is it?", Neonite mumbles as he wakes up. Neonite looks out his window and sees a full moon in a star-covered sky. "Oh no, I'm late!", thinks Neonite as he quickly gets up from his desk and gets his trusty sword, the Lunar Punishment. The Lunar Punishment is a big two hoofed sword with a purple blade. Supposedly, the sword's blade was crafted out of a special mineral only found on the moon. With the Lunar Punishment strapped on Neonite's back in a big metal holster. Without hesitation, he flies to the outskirts of Ponyville, where a big green pegasus with brown hair and blazing red eyes waited. Neonite said in a frantic voice "I-I'm sorry, sir, I was just--", "No time! Look!", interrupted the other pegasus as he pointed toward a horde of monsters rushing from the front of the Everfree Forest into Ponyville. "You're slacking off allowed those fiends to escape the Everfree Forest! If it were up to me, I'd throw you in a dungeon, but the princess gave you orders to drive back those monsters!", yelled the big pegasus. Just then, two beat up looking Earth Ponies rushed from the village and collasped in front of Neonite and his master. "The Hydra, it got a pegasus!", answered one of the exhausted ponies. "Who? What's the pegasus' name?", begged Neonite's master. "I'm not sure, but her coat is pale yellow and her hair is pink.", said the earth pony. "She really loves animals, woodland ones especially.", added the other earth pony. "Flu...Flutter...", Neonite mumbled. "What the hay are you babbling about?!", demanded Neonite's master. "N-nothing...", answered Neonite. "I want you to get in there and kill as many as those monsters as you can! That's an order!", yelled Neonite's master. "Y-yes, sir!", responded Neonite. And just like that, Neonite dashed into Ponyville, thinking "...I hope she's okay...".

Intro

It was a beautiful morning in Cloudsdale. The sky was clear, and the sun shined it's beauty

all across Equestria. A pegasus with a dark blue coat and a black mane exits his house with

a bag on his back. A brown pegasus stops him. "'Ey, where ya going, Neo?", said the brown

pegasus. "Ponyville. Why?", responded Neonite. The brown pegasus became suspicious of what

Neonite had. "What's in 'dat bag?", asked the brown pegasus. "Oh, n-nothing. Look at the time!

Gotta be off! Bye!", and Neonite flew off. "That guy is so weird...", the brown pegasus

mumbled to himself. Neonite landed in Ponyville, with the mysterious contents of his bag

intact. "Oh Celestia, if Samuel knew what I had in here, I'd never hear the end of it from

that guy...", Neonite thought. Neonite casually walked toward a house with many plants and

animals infront. So much, infact, that it almost looked like a barn. It even had a chicken

coop in front. Whoever owned this house must have really loved animals. Neonite walked up to

the door of this house, and raised his left hoof to knock. Just then, Neonite pulled his hoof

away and thought "No...not today.", and flew back up to Cloudsdale. Back in Cloudsdale,

Neonite entered his house, threw his bag onto his bed in anger of himself went to his desk.

He slammed his head on his desk and yelled, "Damn it! Why am I so hesitant?! Why can't I just

tell her?! WHY?!?!", and he fell asleep on his desk.