Redeyes Eclipse

by Redeyes-Eclipse

Rating: teen
Tags: Dark, Other, Nightmare Moon, Romance, Original Character, Tragedy, Adventure, Princess Celestia, Gore, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Length: 1799

Redeyes is a colt who is learning magic from Star Swirl the Bearded 1000 years ago. There seem to be trouble in Equestria so Redeyes and Star Swirl the Bearded go out to solve the problems.

Because of Nightmare Moon eclipsing Princess Celestia's sun.

The pure negative alicorn magic was released into the world of Equestria and gathered into one spot from which Eclipse was born.

His birth was purely spontaneous and as such was unexpected for the travelling Star Swirl the Bearded who found the abandoned colt.

"What an odd colt. Those are some large red eyes you have there. You shall be known hence forth as Redeyes Eclipse," thought Star Swirl.

The confused and bewildered Star Swirl the Bearded decided it was his responsibility to find the lost colt's parents.

Published 2015-01-06 19:00:03 UTC
Last updated 2015-01-06 19:00:03 UTC

Chapter 1

"Concentrate and relax your mind. Listen to the nature and the air. Take a deep breath slowly and exhale. Use your third eye to see me." Star Swirl the Bearded said.

Redeyes Eclipse was still a colt and had thoughts of fun and games. It was impossible for him to concentrate due to constant thoughts of pranks he could pull on dear old Star Swirl the Bearded flooding his mind.

"Help me, somepony!" whispered a voice.

Redeyes thought it was his imagination wandering off again, so he ignored the voice in his head.

"There seems to be a problem, somepony is calling out for help. Sadly this magic of telepathy is Alicorn and cannot be answered by me. Redeyes, it is up to you to answer." said Star Swirl the Bearded.

"I can't concentrate while communicating. Does this mean the training is over?" Redeyes Eclipse asked.

"It can't be helped. We will resume after we found the source of the problem and solve it." said Star Swirl the Bearded.

Redeyes copied the telepathy magic, which was an easy task to do because of Star Swirl's intense training. "Where are you and what is the cause that bothers you so?" Redeyes said in his thoughts.

"Great Celestia! Somepony heard me. I am trapped and there are raging creatures looking for me. I am scared! Please help me!"

"Where are you trapped? Give me a description of the area you are in." Redeyes said in his thoughts.

"I am hiding inside of a tree trunk by the Creepy Pasta forest. I am going to run for it once I get enough courage. Please find me before they catch me!"

"Hm I think I know of this tree she talking about. I was quite the adventurer too, when I was younger. I have a very fond memory of that tree as I used it as a safe haven when it started to rain." said Star Swirl the Bearded.

Redeyes Eclipse started to run in the direction that Star Swirl the Bearded mentioned. As he arrived to the location, Star Swirl the Bearded was already there fighting a pack of timberwolves.

Out of pure rage, Redeyes Eclipse cast a secret spell he learned from the moon. All the timberwolves merged together. A powerful blast blew poor old Star Swirl the Bearded back. The blast imploded, glowing blue. As the brightness of the blast faded, there laid a blue pegasus colt on the ground.

"Such forbidden magic. And this colt, where did he come from? This smells of Nightmare Moon, or was it Sombra? Redeyes was this really from you?" Star Swirl the Bearded asked.

"Thank you so much! You saved me!"

As she came out the tree trunk Star Swirl the Bearded stiffened up.

"Galaxy Spiral, is that you? You look just like your mother. What are you doing here? Pray tell, dearest niece of mine." Said Star Swirl the Bearded."

The Blue Pegasus colt got up and looked around lost.

"Oh My Celestia! Is that you, great uncle Star Swirl? I came in search of you! By my mother's calculations, she estimated that you would be found around here. I was a fool doubting her wisdom." said Galaxy Spiral.

The bushes started to move. Which frightened Galaxy, who dashed toward Star Swirl the Bearded. Redeyes Eclipse had a spell ready for whatever was about to pop out. A Green Unicorn came out. The unknown blue pegasus colt dashed toward him. Which made Star Swirl the Bearded yell "Enough!"

"Stop! He's just my boyfriend. We are traveling together. My name is Lavender Tune, his name is Stripes LightningBlitz." said Lavender Tune as she came charging out the bushes.

Stripes LightningBlitz started to shake, his mane and his hide turning red and black. Lavender Tune rushed over to him and hugged him.

"When ever he in trouble his personality starts to change, Embargo is his second personality's name. Whenever that happens, he can be very dangerous. To calm him down I must play soothing music on my acoustic guitar." Lavender Tune explained while hugging Embargo.

"BOOM!" something flew by Redeyes and crashed into a tree. The being looked like a skinny tall monster in a black suit with tentacle-like arms. A white mare came charging toward it. She looked like a ghoul mare with broken horn and skeltal wings with no feathers.

she yelled "Back away thou fellow ponies. This creature has kidnapped my little sister. He will pay for his misdeeds, I vow on my mother."

As she passed Redeyes Eclipse, Embargo broke free from Lavender Tune. The White mare was too busy running to notice Embargo coming from behind her. Redeyes Eclipse teleported in front of her and as he did, the monster in the suit ran off. Embargo jumped, pull off her wing bone and slit her throat with it. Redeyes followed the monster in the suit into a cave. It was a dark cave, ground full of bones and creatures. Redeyes Eclipse smelled a filly scent nearby and ran towards it. As he arrived, the monster in the suit was cornering the filly, trapping her by the wall. Redeyes channeled all his magic in a super attack that hit the monster in the suit from behind. The monster vanished in black smoke.

"Thank you so much! I ran away from this evil ghoul mare who kidnapped me in my sleep! My name is Moon Wolf, I am a princess of Luna Republic. May I ask the name of my savior?" Princess Moon Wolf asked.

As Redeyes Eclipse came back with Princess Moon Wolf, Star Swirl the bearded was talking to a orange colt in armor with the banner of Luna Republic. Lavender Tune was playing her acoustic guitar calming Embargo slowly back into Stripes LightningBlitz. Galaxy Spiral was studying the beheaded Ghoul mare corpse. The blue pegasus colt was sitting watching the scene with a blank expression.

"Carrot Leaf what are you doing here? Did father Red Dust send you to find me? If so you have successfully found me my wonderful Royal Guard!" Moon Wolf said cheerfully as she dashed towards him.

While Moon Wolf talked to Carrot Leaf, The blue pegasus colt sneaked behind Moon Wolf and bit her on her flank. "Ouch!" she yelled. "Why did you bite me for?" Moon Wolf asked while rubbing her flank. The blue pegasus colt stepped back and howled. Princess Moon Wolf started to shack. Carrot Leaf tried to keep her steady but she pushed him back hard enough for him to fall to the ground. Her mane and hide spiked up. Her ears got pointy and she grew fangs. Star Swirl the Bearded was baffled to this as he have never seen such a transformation in his long life. Redeyes Eclipse, Galaxy Spiral, Lavender Tune, and Stripes LightningBlitz just stood watching as she transformed into one of the very first werepony.

Redeyes rushed over to her and kissed Princess Moon Wolf on the lips. She stop snarling and slowly started to morph back into a filly. Moon Wolf's beautiful brunette mane had grown longer and her beautiful emerald eyes grow larger as she realized she was kissing Redeyes. Princess Moon Wolf was blushing and took a step back. Gasping while looking around to see everypony staring at her. Princess Moon Wolf looked Redeyes Eclipse in the eyes and said "Thou kiss turned me back normal. I, Moon Wolf here by ask thine out to be my boyfriend. Will you accept my offer?"

"I wouldn't had kissed you if I didn't liked you, Princess Moon Wolf. Plus that was my first kiss." Redeyes Eclipse said while blushing.

"Roar!" A green dragon came down from the sky and landed next to the blue pegasus colt. The green dragon lift his claw up and swung it down with much power and fierceness toward the blue pegasus colt. But before he landed his hit, Star Swirl the Bearded teleported and saved the blue pegasus colt before he got crushed. Redeyes Eclipse used his secret spell again on the dragon while he was trying to hit Star Swirl the Bearded. Galaxy Spiral, Princess Moon Wolf, Carrot leaf, Lavender Tune and Stripe LightningBlits decided that it was best for them to run to safety. The blast hit the raging dragon which made it disappear in Green smoke. Star Swirl the Bearded gasped at Redeyes for a moment before putting the blue pegasus colt down. As the green smokescreen faded there laid a green pegasus colt.

Redeyes Eclipse felt odd as if there was a strong bond binding him to the green pegasus colt. Not only him but he felt the same connection from the blue pegasus colt. "Give them a name and they shall serve you loyally as your personal guards" said the moon. As Redeyes Eclipse walk over to the green pegasus colt a name popped in his mind "Call me Dragon Light." The blue Pegasus walked over to them and as he did Redeyes Eclipse heard a whisper saying "Call me Blue Varg."

Galaxy Spiral, Carrot leaf, and Princess Moon Wolf came waltzing back as if nothing happened. Stripes LightningBlitz had changed back into Embargo and was eating the dead ghoul mare corpse. Redeyes Eclipse knew that the pain of loosing his love Lavender Tune, Brought froth Embargo.

"Dear Celestia I knew I felt pure dark rage. My son, Carrot Leaf what has thou been up to with this forsaken creature? His soul have been divided into two entities. I shall fix that which is wrong in nature or I am not the great Alicorn of Luna Republic, Remnant Memories." Remnant Memories said while casting a spell on Embargo.

Embargo was to busy eating the Ghoul mare corpse to notice a spell being casted on him. As the spell landed on Embargo, it slowly merging his souls together. When he got back up he persona changed. "Where am I? Who am I?" "All I remember was that my name is Embargo LightningBliz."

There was a large splash sound coming from inside Creepy Pasta forest. Embargo LightningBliz stopped talking and everypony turn in the direction of the sound. There came walking a purplish green unicorn. Her mane and hide was wet as if she just bathe. Pieces of seaweed was fashioned in her mane and she wore a crown showing that she was queen. Star Swirl Gasped and bowed his head. Star Swirl then rise again to say

"Thou honor us with your presence Queen Misty Blue. I almost didn't recognized you in your Unicorn form. Has thine come to investigate the latent commotion. The ruckus we cause have been solved and handled my liege, so there is no need for you to stay out water much longer then you already have."[size]