My little racer friendship is carbon

(As the bmw raced down the canyon of ponyville cris sayed)Cris:I can't belive I'm coming back to the place where the race started.(flash back)Fluttershy:ok star the car up.Alex:here Cris don't disapponit.(as Cris took the Toyota that Alex let him borrowed,3 crew cars have been lined up(the first crew was cutie mark crusaders controlled by sweetie bell,the second crew was dj racers controlled vinyl ,and the last crew was the chill racers controlled by Octavia,as the cars took off vinyl had first place,but as they raced down town the Toyota had the lead all the 3 crew cars where behind him then they suddenly the cars stop,as the Toyota stopped it turn around and saw the police Cris was surprised,he saw the police take all of crews but when about to get him Cris told Fluttershy to get in but they got before she got in then car she threw the money in the car but as Cris checked the bag it only had papers)Alex:hey man between the heat and the crews you need to walk away go get out of hear.(present day ponyville canyon,as the bmw raced to throw town Cris said just a little more and I get to twilights house but then a car rammed the bmw)Cris:AHHH!,who just did that(Cris looks behind him)no it can't be!Cross:hey guess who's back.(as the cars raced to town the corvett Rams the bmw again so Cris takes a sharp right and see's up ahead construction side)Cris:I got no other choice but to go throw it.(as both cars went to the  construction side the bmw was the one that was taking all the damage but cross took less,as Cris raced throw construction he went right to throw a gate then he brakes his car cause he was about to run over a stallion then he accelerates to Lose cross,but then cross stops in front he rapidly gets out the car and goes to yours)Cross:sit Down!,how yea been its time settle a little score from ponyrock don't you think?(as soon as cross was about to arrest Cris,3 car approaches him the guy gets out of the car it was Alex)Alex:I don't remember asking for your help crock what makes you think you bounty  equestrian with out my approval.Cross:it's cross and this guy,is from out of town!Alex:been a long time,what's his bounty.Cross:150k.Alex:David take care of this guy,so that's what you been up to?(suddenly 5 more cars approache it was the girl's applejack,rainbow dash,pinkie pie,rarity,and twilight,twilight gets rapidly out,she runs up to Cris)Twilight:how dare you show your face here again.(Alex grabs her)Alex:hey,hey controll your self.(suddenly cross gets back in his car and leaves)Applejack:you have a lot guts of coming back here kid.(suddenly another car approaches it was Fluttershy,she comes out of car and goes up to him and slaps him in the face)Cris:what was that fore!Fluttershy:for betraying me.Alex:now kid lets get back to business you got a bounty and you need my money to get it of me,your going to have to prove that to me if you won't the bounty of yourself.(all the ponies get in there cars,twilight stops)Twilight:look who's back the betrayer.(then twilight leaves)?