To become a monster

by Spider

Rating: teen
Tags: My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Alternate Universe, Human, Main 6, Comedy, Adventure
Length: 7081

Jake and his friends are sent to equestria but not the normal one. No, this one has been corrupted.

Jake and his friends are sent to equestria but not the normal one. No, this one has been corrupted. Jake is taken as a blood slave only for all his friends to change for the worse. not a clopfic just sexual refrences

Published 2015-01-16 14:20:02 UTC
Last updated 2015-01-17 11:11:19 UTC

Chapter 0- Prologue

Chapter 0- Prologue
I don’t know were to start. It was crazy. I just wish I could go back home. At the least, be human again. But I guess that ain’t happening. Lets see where it all started.

“Hi mom!” I said to my awesome mother.

“Hi son.” She says making fun of the way I sound because I’m sixteen and she’s always like, ”Oh your voice is getting deeper. Isn’t that exiting?,” In that weird motherly way.

“At least it’s Friday so I can hang back and play video games with my friends.” I gladly say. #TGIF. Anyway, like I was saying. That is until my brother, Benjamin, walked in.

“Huh, what friends?” He annoyingly said so I did the only logical thing. I slapped him and he acted like a little b**ch. That didn’t happen no matter how much I wish it could. I walked past him and went into my room to play some Naruto. Greatest fighting game since Mortal Kombat.

But (There is always a but) when I got inside the room my friend Dominick started calling.

“Hey what’s up my main friend?” I joke only to earn a chuckle. That was comedy gold, scratch that, bronze and all I got was a chuckle!?

“Jake, since I know you love vampires I found an awesome movie. Its called twilight!” He said then laughed over the phone because he knew I liked some of the twilight movies even though he said they were terrible.

“Ha, ha, ha.” I Fake laugh dryly, “Do you want to hang out this weekend. I heard it was going to be a full moon and a meteor shower. I could bring my girlfriend?”

“What Girlfriend?” he laughs again. God what is with their jokes being more crit-crtizising-critisizical- you know what. Whatever. “Alright man, just remember to bring the babe so mine won’t feel lonely being the only girl in the group.” He says before hanging up.

“Mom, I’m going over to Dominick’s house! BYE!” I yell across the house but when I turn around she’s standing at my doorway looking at me in annoyance.

“I was walking to my room, you didn’t have to yell at me. Oh and bye have a good time on your double date.” My mom says right before my day to walk right up to her and kiss her.

“Goodbye son and way to go. Make sure to not be a virgin when you come back okay?” My dad says (not knowing if he was joking) then my mom slaps his stomach lightly.

“Just have a good time.” She smiles (Oh No), “And remember to use a condom.” She laughs as they walk back into there room together.

My brother just walks past my door just to throw me a pack. ”You better use it so you don’t have to have kids.” He then walks down the hall to stop at mom’s room. I look out to see what he’s doing so I walk up to him and he puts a finger over his mouth to silently quiet any future comments from me. I walk and put my ear to the door to hear the unspeakable. Thump, thump, thump

We all know what that means. Benjamin and me smile and hold up 3 of his fingers and 2 black bandanas. 3, 2, 1, GO

We put on the bandanas over are eyes and charge into the room blindly yelling just to get a surprise yell back.
5 seconds after attack
We put down are bandanas and look. A surprised dad and mom are glaring at Benjamin and me so we just laughed and turn around and ran. We ran all the way to Benjamin’s room and shut it. I took out my iPhone 6(I love apple and don’t care what you say) and posted on Facebook.

Lol just caught my mom and dad having sex. So Benjamin and me pranked them.

All is fun in love and war.

Benji and me laughed so hard it started to hurt. “Alright benji let’s go say …… we put it on Facebook!!”(No sorry here).

“I just remembered that I should call Alisa.” And with that I was as gone like the wind. I ran to my room then opened my contacts so fast I could challenge the roadrunner.

Ring ring, ring, ring, and stuff

“Hello sweety. How are you doing today?” Alisa asks in her sweet voice.

“I’m fine and I wanted to know if you would like to go on a double date with my friend and his girl to see the meteor shower tonight?” I ask as smooth as I can.

“Sure I’d love to.” She says seductively.

“I’ll be there” I said it with a bit less smoothness. I wish I had my brother’s confidence. I hang up and grab my keys (16 is driving age in S.C.) and head out.

5 minutes later
“Hey you ready?” I yell out of the car to her.

“Yeah hold on a minute,” she yells out the open door. She then walks out with a picnic basket and blanket. I never have been on a picnic.

8 minutes later
We arrive at the meeting spot. They’re already on top of the hill. I check my phone to see that time it is and the time predicting when the meteor shower will happen.

Current Time: 5:30
Meteor Time: 7:00 PM

“At least we get to hang out first.” I sigh but knowing we have some time Alisa got out of the car and walked up to Dominick.

“Hey Dom. Hey Lady.” Alisa said with a grin because we know that “Lady” was what Dom’s girl cosplayed as last year for the Devil may cry series.

“I told you to stop calling me that. I said it was a one-time thing ok. Just call me… Vixy. “Vixy said because her real name was waaaayyyyyyyy too long to say or pronounce.

“Alright lets get this picnic started” I yelled getting out of the car and started walking up toward the hill they were on. If you have seen a painting with a hill, a sunset, and a picnic type thing. That’s what it looked like.

As we ate, sang or singed, and kissed it was time for the meteor shower. Like it said on my phone, it was time.

“Alright, make a wish but don’t say it out loud.” Dominick said with sincerity.

Wishes
Vixy- For the world to change for the better
Dominick- To be happy forever.
Jake- For this time to never end.
Alisa- To always be together.

1 of the meteor exploded into a starry bliss, as it was gone. Probably another meteor hit it. The meteors than all began exploding.

“What just happened?” Alisa worriedly asked.

“I’m sure it’s just some missile test against incoming meteors that could damage something importa- ” Vixy said but then my phone started ringing.

Apple support
Answer-Hang Up

I answered the phone but what was about to be said was unexpected.

“Hello. All phones will be out E.T.A: 30 seconds so don’t worry when it happens.” The apple tech support guy said before hanging up. I looked up and seen that all my friends phone, even Dom’s android, said the same thing.

“This is some twilight zone shit!” Dom said while he looked at us with the “The world is going to end” look. We all turned to him and replied with a “Shut the fuck up” look.

“Alright then lets at least talk about are wishes since the meteors were a dud anyway.” Alisa said annoyed. Right when my mouth opened to say my wish, their was a large explosion far off in the distance but it was still heard like it was right beside us.

“Holy freak lets leave.” I was the first to get up and the others followed. I got to the car and sitting on the car was the one person I never thought of seeing. I mean I was never a MLP fan but my girlfriend loved to watch it do just cringed upon seeing him.

“Well well. It looks like you might be in trouble in 2 minutes. That was a nuke and if you want to survive, hold up your hand.” We thought he was crazy but did it any way. But right when we lifted them balloons and confetti popped out from nowhere above are heads.

“What the hell kind of trick is this? And why is Discord here?” I asked angrily.

“I’m here to save you now just hold on.” He said with a grin.

“Hold on to what?” Vixy said with annoyance and sadness. After she said that discord snapped his fingers and rope appeared out of thin air. We grabbed the rope and held on to it for our lives. If you think about it I guess it was.

“3, 2, 1, Have a wonderful time in equ-” With that we were gone and everything changed. We were still holding on but everything around us changed. It looks like were high (but I never been high so how would I know.). Imagine a hippy rainbow colored shirt but as a giant bright tunnel. Colors were moving and it feels like my eyes were spassiming. I wanted to throw up but couldn’t. And everything stopped. It stopped with such harshness that everybody fell down.

We got up and looked around to see a box. A police box to be precise. On the door had a sign.

This is a temporary present. Use this to get to my world.
Sincerely, Doctor Whooves

“Alright, that is considerably weird. Come on guys.” I said but when I turned around Vixy and Alisa were crying.

“Mom and dad are gone!” Alisa said through teary eyes.

“Don’t worry. They are probably in a better place right now.” Dominick reassuringly said

“I can’t believe this is really happening.” I said while hugging Alisa like it’s the last one we will ever have.

“Lets go” Alisa said as she stopped crying. The tardis was exactly like the one from doctor who. Good thing I watched enough of the show to figure out how to work the damn thing.

After a couple of switches here, pulls here, and hits there, we were off. It felt like being in an elevator till finally it stopped. We stepped out but everything around us was trees and plants.

“The everfree” Alisa says with amazement. She just walked off so we just decided to follow her through the woodland area.

Ducks, turns, and hits in the face by branches, later.

We made it to a small hut. Must be Zecora’s from what I hear in the show. We knocked on it to get an answer but it was timid-ish like “if she had to she would kill you but didn’t want to” type timid.

“Who goes there, this poison is enough to kill a bear.” She says still a bit timid.

Not wanting to die Dominick talks first. “Hello miss. Would you be as so kind to tell us were civilization is?”

“You will find, what you are looking for on that sign.” She opens the door slightly to put her whit and black hoof out to point at the sign beside her house. My hand hit my forehead so fast I think I could have a concussion.

“Ponyville ½ mile ←”. Vixy reads aloud.

“Lets get moving then” I say cheerfully because in a bad time all we need is happiness or so I thought as my girlfriend had me locked into a room several hours looking at season one of MLP.

11 minutes later

“Oh my god. I thought it was half a mile. What the fuck! It feels like 20.” Dominick whines.

“Shut and keep moving” Vixy says before we come across a clearing but we see smoke coming from overhead.

“Dude a fire! Someone could be hurt!” Alisa exclaims.

“Yeah, lets go put it out.” I say all majestic like and stuff. We then follow the smoke to see a village. It looks all wrong and everything is broken and messed up. Buildings were on fire and some were burnt to the ground. The worst part was the blood. It looked like a massacre. Blood and body’s of dead ponies was everywhere and it looked like Alisa was going to throw up.

“Oh god. What could have done this?” Vixy says before having to put her hand over her mouth to keep from throwing up.

“US!” We turn around to find the mane 6 but they were way different. They had fangs with blood dripping from them and they had leathery like bat wings. The unicorns were practically Bat alicorns now.

“RUN!” I scream as I get them moving. We were running as fast as we can but they were catching up to us. It’s not fair they had wings and 4 legs.

“I’ll handle them. Keep going.” I say but before Alisa could protest, Dominick was carrying her. (He has learned a lot from the movies I make him watch.)

“Bring it on!” I yell at the 6 evil beings from hell. I grab a piece of the broken house. It was a broken 2x4. I swing it down at the yellow one but a purple aroua envelops my weapon.

Crap. I was then hit in the side of my right leg with my response being my fall. As I’m on one knee the blue one smiles.

“Fuck!” My last words were said as 3 bites were taken on my neck. Pain coursed through my body to only be replaced by numbness. As my face hits the dirt my vision goes black.

One question remains……….Is this the end?

Becoming a vampire and a hot meeting

Chapter 1- Becoming a vampire and a hot meeting.

“Ughhhh. Am I still alive?” I said while waking up. Was it a dream or reality that happened? My vision is blurry as I began to wake from my slumber but something was wrong, as my eyes began to adjust to the darkness.

“Was that really just a dream?” I ask myself. I looked to the side so I could slide off the bed but it felt larger and took more time to get off of. I then walked to what look like a light switch in the dark and flipped it.

“Crap that wasn’t a dream. Then were am I?” I ask myself. When I turned around, there was a fancy king sized bed that looked like it would belong in a mansion or a large house. There were 2 dressers with a piece of paper on top of one. I walked over and read what it said.

We have found out that you are worth to keep alive so we did. Use these clothes we made and get ready to come to breakfast.

“Well at least they made me clothes,” I said before my face turned to a scowl, “These cloths are horrible.” After that temper tantrum I decided it’s better than wearing those dirty clothes, so I changed.

After changing, it was time for breakfast so I opened the door and left. What I didn’t know is where to go. To my left was a long corridor of rooms. Right is a hallway so I decided it’s best to go right. After a lot of flips, turns, and who knows what, I see a big door that looks to be made of metal.

“Must be the exit. I have escaped, you stupid vampire things.” I said before he felt a chill go up my spine. I turned to find one of them staring at me directly in the eyes. I couldn’t look away. The monster’s eyes began to glow red and smiled with a wicked fanged grin.

“Come eat breakfast.” Apparently a she, says softly to me. I couldn’t resist and followed her. I knew what happened to me, but the vamp’s spell stayed against me as I was forced to go. I followed the evil that commanded me to do so until we reached a room with a long table that could fit up to 20 people. A gold cloth was over the table followed by 20 cups and plates filling each seat. Every seat but 2 were fill with the monstrosities and they looked at me and smiled. An evil fanged grin.

“Take a seat right there Mr. Jake” the one that lead you here said. I was forced to take my seat and so I sat down. When I looked down at my food it was beautiful. It was a medium rare steak and a side of apple slices. My favorite type of steak.

“You may all eat and drink now, but not the human. Not yet.” That last remark is what snapped me out of this steak-induced hypnosis.

Not yet. What does she mean not yet... I’m fucked.

“Can I eat yet?” I ask politely. Still staring at the steak.

“Of course Mr. Jake. Wouldn’t want you hungry for what is to come.” She said still smiling. Oh my god how much do these people smile. Being stared down by smiling vampires is worse than being force to listen to the smile song for an hour.

I take a bite out of the meat. Oh so amazing and juicy. Pause. Wow that sounded bad. No-homo. Best steak ever but everyone just stared at me as I finished the rest of my food. It was really creepy.

“Come here Mr. Jake. Let’s go to the blood chamber. You know, we hadn’t caught a human before or ever seen one because it was just a myth.” The ‘Commander’ said as we walked the halls.

“Can you tell me your name, please?” I asked trying to figure out who has been leading me all through these halls.

“Lyra Heartstrings” She said as she earned a gasp. Was it really Lyra? Her coat used to be a light minty green. Now it looks like it was dulled 10 fold. Imagine paled toothpaste.

“Where is this place?” I asked.

“We are in princess twilight’s castle.” She responded happily.

“Where do all the people in the dining room live?” I just needed to know this stuff.

“They live in ponyville. You just arrived after we finished either turning or killing the rest of ponyville.” She responded slightly annoyed by my threatening.

We soon reached a room. It had an Iron door and it had many locks to make sure I didn’t escape. The inside was better than the outside. It was a normal room you would see in a front room but there was a Recliner. The seat looked at least comfortable but the straps on the chair didn’t.

“Oh, no. Please let me go. I need to find my friends.” I pleaded but only seen Lyra get a bigger grin.

“Your fine right here.” She said before I was shoved into the chair. She is way stronger then she looks. She grabbed the straps with her magic and tightened them around my wrist and ankles. (Crap, this isn’t good.) I struggled with all my might but they didn’t budge.

“Now just wait right here while I get the others” The vampony said with determination. She left and all was stuck with is silence. Something felt wrong though. Like something was on my skin crawling. It traveled all across my body, sending shivers through my spine. It was really cold. I wish they had a heater… Oh yeah, vampires.

“Here he is” I heard Lyra’s voice outside the door. The door opened and I saw 6 more vamponies. They were the same ones I tried to fight off back outside. They walked inside with smiles that would make Morgan Freeman scared.

“Hello there, Jake was it?” The paled Rarity with a purple curled mane asked.

“Yeah.” I replied obviously not too happy.

“We have fed you, so you will feed them.” Lyra said with a smile. I suddenly remembered something from my vampire movies.

“Are there any side effects from the bites?” I asked a bit worried that I might die of some vampiric disease.

“Yes, there is. It makes you weak and we inject are venom if we want to. Then more venom increases the speed but a vampire can only hold a small amount. Then you will become one of us.” One in the back I couldn’t see said.

“ ‘An yes. That is what were ‘doin to ‘ya.” Applejack said with a country accent. Once she said that my skin probably turned to the same color as Shamus’s from WWE.

“Will I ever get to see my friends again?” I asked pouting slightly about my girlfriend.

“Yes but only after you are turned and trained. It will take about 1 day to finish the process because you woke up around dinner which is right before sunrise.” A purple vampony, with a star mark on her butt, pushed through the crowd.
“What are those ass tattoos anyway?” I asked staring at Twilight’s.

“A cutie mark. It’s meant to tell what someone is meant to be special at in his or her life. ” Lyra said attentively.

“Alright enough questioning. Get this over with.” I said already wanting this to all be a bad dream. It’s just not. The 6 walked up to me but Lyra just stayed her distance, just watching… Or studying me. I closed my eyes to just wait to what has to come.

Suddenly there was a small pain coming from my neck on my jugular vain that was replaced with numbness after my blood was slowly draining from my body. But something different happened. The tides changed and something was flowing into the two holes in my throat. It burned and it was the only thing my body could feel. This happened 6 more times. I soon passed out from loss of blood.

I awoke to the light of the moon coming through a window and a metal against metal ringing sound. I soon found out that I could turn off the alarm but the sound was still in my head. To my left was a clock and a note.

Dear Jake,

It is time for Breakfast. For you it would normally be lunch. You must be hungry from regaining your strength after the blood loss.
Sincerely,
Lyra Heartstrings

I looked up to find everything in the room was the same way I left it. The castle room that is. I looked down to find that my skin was a slightly darker color. My vision has also improved greatly. Must be the vampirism venom. I got up from the giant bed and walked out of the room. I smelled something delicious coming from these corridors. When I tried to lick my lips my tongue poked something sharp. So I did what any reasonable human would do.

Ouch. I was still slightly bleeding from my finger.

Body check:

Fangs: check
Skin color change: slight check
Taste for blood: check

I always wanted to be a vampire. It would be awesome but now I regret saying that.

“Hello? Can anyone help me?” I yelled out to anyone that could here me.

“Sure!” A pink, happy, and jumping pink vampony said to me ”What do you need help with?”

“Where do we eat? I don’t remember the way.” I said to still bouncing mare.

“Here follow me!” She yelled before grabbing my hand with hooves, somehow defying logic for pony’s, and running so fast everything was a blur then we suddenly ended up there but inertia didn’t help when I went flying through the air and over the vamponies to only land in the middle of the table with my back and sides hurting.

“Oops sorry.” She said nicely. After that something in my sides twitched as my shirt ripped open and two giant black wings (Like maximum ride sized wings) came out if my back as more cups and plates were pushed off the table but none busted.

The silence was practically killing me, other then the pain, as I sat up. Everyone still had smiles on there face. That is, except one. She had that glare in her eyes like she was about to become the hulk and beat me into a pulp. Instead, everybody erupted into a loud pit of cheering and laughter. The purple creep and me were just as surprised as each other.

“Alright enough!” She yelled loudly as her voice boomed across the large room, “Take your seats now! Jake and Pinkie.”

“Alright, but tell me who shoved a stick up your ass.” I sly said but only received a cough and a fumed twilight sparkle. She got up on the table and slowly walked/trotted/whatever toward me as I quickly was trying to crawl backwards to be stopped by the end of the table and a pink mare.

“Do your worse!” I said as toughly as I could while painfully tried to stand up.

“Wouldn’t have it any other way.” She said with a creepy smile across her face. She even broke into a sprint as flames encompassed her body. I thought vampires burned from fire. Apparently not this one. She tackled me off the table in a ball of flames. As we slid across the floor I was set aflame as her white fur touched me. It burned oh so bad. The feeling was like taking a batch with no cold water to balance out the temperature.

Suddenly a timid looking Fluttershy threw a bucket of water on us.

“Sorry.” She muttered, softly but still heard, as she carried the pale back to where she found it. I looked down to find I had scorch marks and burned skin all over me with steam coming of me and no shirt as the untouched mare got off of me.

“Now that that is over. Lets continue are breakfast.” Twilight said happily, now that she had her revenge. I brushed off the ashes of my shirt and walked to my plate and found that the meat was raw. Just raw.

“Why is my steak raw exactly?” I asked as politely as I could and slightly wincing from the burns on my chest.

“It’s because we can’t get sick from virus’s like food poisoning. You also need blood to heal and live.” Sparkle butt said with a matter of fact tone. With that, I cut and put the steak to my mouth and I could already smell the beautiful scent of blood in it. It was only slightly warm as the taste overcame the senses in my mouth. It was a party in my mouth. I destroyed it in a matter of seconds. After I was done, the stares was piercing me got annoying so I did what any 14 year old kid would do.

“Can you all stop fucking staring at me?!” I said with my eyeholes to only get stared back by the only one that could. Fluttershy’s gaze was digging into my soul. I couldn’t move even though I wanted to. I tried to look away ore even blink but that was impossible. All I could do was breath and stare.

“Ooh, ooh, staring contest. I bet Fluttershy wins.” Pinkie yelled out.

“Stop breathing.” Fluttershy commanded with a slow light voice. After she said this I couldn’t breathe. I tried my best but my lungs wouldn’t suck in air. My vision was blurry as I just stared into those scary eyes.

“Alright there Fluttershy. Just let him go.” Applejack said while touching Fluttershy’s shoulder, “Seriously shy. Stop this.” Fluttershy’s iris’s turned red. I don’t think she was going to stop. My vision was fading black as I sat there.

“You will do whatever I say whenever I say.” The demon Fluttershy said.All I said was can you all stop fucking staring at me was the last thing I thought before I blacked out and face planted the table from the loss of air.

Chapter 2- Escape and Meet-up

Chapter 2- Escape and a meet-up

“Ughhhh. What happened?” I said as I enjoyed the air I received.

“Funny you should ask.” A soft voice came from the dark. “Just please forgive me.” The light suddenly cut on as Fluttershy was watching me from a chair but she was chained to it. This realization got me instantly out of the bed I was laying in as I quickly shut my eyes in fear of getting stared at again.

“Don’t worry. I’m not going to hurt you.” She said as I felt all fear of her rise from my body. “Just take of the chains… Yes that’s right.” Her voice was soft and cute just like in the show and the chains weren’t too hard to get off. The door suddenly opens as twilight and rainbow dash step through the door.

“Alright Fluttershy. We- What in the name of Celestia did you do!?” Twilight said in full panic. I was just standing there with the chains in my hands and a confused look.

“Dude, she was chained down because she needs your blood but it only makes her goes crazy.” Rainbow Dash said with her, as usual, cocky tone. After she said this I was tackled into the ground by a yellow and pink blur. Her moves were quick and she looked me in the eyes with an expression that said, “Sorry but it had to be done” look. I will never get used to the feeling of fangs in my neck. Something in my head felt off when this was happening. Have you ever got out of a chair quickly but instead of dizziness it was like a small shock to your brain? That was it.

“Well, you’re screwed. Have fun being Fluttershy’s slave.” Rainbow dash laughed before walking away with Twilight, as they already know how it’s going to turn out.

What was that about? I thought. My blood was draining slowly like she was prolonging the pleasure. My side of the bite wasn’t as good. It was like a constant pinch but I was bleeding as well. She then pulled out but something felt off.

“I’m sorry Jake. I wish I could control myself but my other side just won’t give up unless I get it is I’m looking for. You do know what I’ve been doing to you, right?” She cried. I just responded with a shake of my left and right.

“I planted a seed into your mind and I made you pass out so it could grow without you knowing. This seed is like a mental chain. You are connected to me now, so that means I am your new master. You can’t refuse but I liked you too much from the start to let you go. So welcome to life as my new vampire slave. Also call me Mistress from now on.” She stopped crying as her look changed from sadness to a sly smile. After the long speech I just sat there. Staring off into empty space as I thought about what just happened. How I ended up in this situation.

“Ummm, let me think about it… No. Fuck You Flutt- Mistress.” I said but I couldn’t say the word Fluttershy. She must be right about the chain thing. Now what Rainbow said makes since. Again… I’m fucked. I just stood up and walked out of the room but Fluttershy didn’t try to stop me so I kept going. Randomly walking around these corridors never was a good idea but I did it anyway… Not a very good idea.

“Pinky! I need help!” I scream at the top of my lungs.

“Yes?” She responds a second later right behind me.

“How do I get out of this hell hole of a building?” I ask angrily as I was becoming very annoyed at being lost.

“Take a left, another left, go straight, downstairs, and out the big doors. Also what is hell?” Pinky says confidently.

“Hell is my version of Tartarus but you could only go there spiritually but now I can’t go to heaven and now I’m screwed if I die.” I explain sadly that I probably don’t have a soul anymore.

“Wow cool.” The pink mare, for some reason still jumping, said with a bright smile. I question still remained before I left.

“Why do you all spend your time here?” With that she froze mid-air and fell as her mane and tail deflated.

“I stay here because Sugar Cube Corner was burned down. Fluttershy stays here because she killed all her animals in a blood frenzy. Rainbow Dash doesn’t stay here but comes to hang out because she thinks the wonderbolts won’t ever want to see her again. Rarity doesn’t stay here either but she makes some nice cloaks. And this is Twilight’s castle so, yeah.” She chuckled at the end. I felt bad for making her sad and truthfully, with her hair deflated reminds me of Cupcakes but meeting her like this is scary.

“There is one thing you forgot to do though, pinky.” I said with a smile on my face.

“What? What? Tell me.” She said as her mane and tail re-inflated.

“To make a welcome party for me.” I said but as those words left my lips she leapt in the air and gasped, as all that was left in her spot was dust in the shape of a pony until it disappeared.

Again doing what any human would do. I walked out the door and nobody, or nopony, stopped me. The castle on the outside was way different. It was a tree. It was not too different then the show, but it had, what were windows, now covered. The colors also looked slightly paled but everything was normal-ish. I just walked away but I stayed on the road.

Ponyville was strange the way it looked now. A few buildings missing but everything was normal. Except, everyone was now technically weak alicorns. I was just walking but soon heard a cry for help. Only if this was a comic book.

“Help. Someone please help. I lost my friends and everything went wrong.” A wail could be heard. I just might know who it is but also maybe not. Only my friends and me say everyone. I broke into a sprint towards the voice’s location. What I found I would never thought I could. It was a mare but she was floating and doesn’t have wings. She is also is partially see through and is covered with a glowy white fog.

“H-Hello?” I ask while ready to fight for flight.

“Huh, wait. It’s you. Hey Jake I need some help dude but I can’t get back into my human form and for some reason a mare instead of a stallion. Really weird on my part.” The ghastly figure said to me. Thinking for a minute, I found out who it was.

“Dom! Dude, what happened to you?” I asked slightly confused.

“Running, trap, cultist, voodoo stuff, poof, now a ghost mare.” He said quickly but I thought it was a good idea to pester him later about it.

“You dink. Where are the others?” I asked worriedly as I thought of my girl being taken.

“I told them to go on without me. Nobody can touch me and this is the last place I seen you so I went here. Stupid female hormones make me cry about the littlest things.” He said but started to tear up but they turned to water vapor as they fell.

“That’s sexist and we have to find the others dude.” I say with the most serious face I’ve ever used in my life. “Dude, my girl and yours are on the line.”

“OK. They went this way.” Dom said as he pointed down a dark and scary path to what looked like the everfree.

“Yeah, there screwed. ‘SIGH’ Lets go.” I said with a lazy tone but the only thing that fueled me was love. Good thing I haven’t seen a changeling or a display of Murphy’s Law.

“Do you know what it is to be a ghost? You do nothing but float and I can’t even enjoy the taste of food.” Dom whines as we walk through the scary woods. The trees even look like there even out to get us.

“What happened to you why I was gone?” Dom asks because we both know we both hate silence. It’s just really creepy.

“I was taken, fed from, had delicious steak, turned, more steak, enraged fire twilight, creepy demonic Fluttershy, and became Mistress Fluttershy’s new bitch.” I summarized what I had done like he did. I just like being a smart-ass.

“Have you done it with Fluttershy or what? And why did you call her mistress.” He/She asks while all up in my face.

“No. She just used ‘The Stare’ to get me to do what she says forever and combined with her vampiric powers, can make it permanent. I now have to do whatever she says, when she says. One of them was to call her mistress.” I said with a matter-of-factly tone but then realized.

“That bitch!” I said loudly. She did that to me without my consent. That’s just wrong. She could just ask me to do a couple of things. How does cussing even make her act like that? In my rage, we found an old, broken castle-like thing.

“To are twelve you will see the castle of the two pony sister’s.” Dom said while imitating a tourist. I of course broke out into laughter because I hadn’t heard a joke that good in some time… Like 2 days ago.

“Shut up. Somebody could hear you.” I hear a small whisper fight begin to break out. I turned my head and smiled at the ghost mare and she smiled back. I held up three fingers and counted down.
3
2
1
…
Go
Dom flew through the wall while I bashed open the door.
The scream was deafening.
“We could here you.” I joked. They soon stopped screaming but something was wrong.

There was only one human and one mare. The human looked like she tried to cosplay for Chrysalis. She had dark sea blue hair with hoes in the end. She also had sea blue make-up on her eyes with black eyeliner with a crooked horn atop her head. A green ribbon was lightly wrapped around her neck with another around her waist and fit perfectly with the black gown she was wearing but it had holes in the bottom when it reached the floor. Her wings also had holes. The only thing she missed was Chrysalis’s crown.

Then there was the small mare. Looking closer she wasn’t that normal either. She had wings and a horn. Cool now one of are girls is an alicorns filly.

“So who is who?” Was the first question I asked. Duh.

“I’m Alisa.” Said the Chrysalis imposter. “This is Vixy and is now a vixen.” She points at the filly.

“Wow, does no one care that I’m now a ghost mare or something. I had my gender and body reformed!” He fumed as the filly walked up to him.

“Don’t worry honey. It’s going to be alright.” She says but fails at trying to hug him. I walked up to my girl as she smiled, which showed me some fangs overlapping her teeth.

“Thanks for feeding me guys” Alisa said with a smile as she hugged me. I hugged her so hard; she had to tap my back 3 times to make me let go.

“Got to love my changeling queen.” I joked with a smile. That changed real quickly when something clicked inside my brain. Oh god, someone is near us.

“HOW DARE YOU JAKE!!!” an enraged Fluttershy said as she charged out from the bushes. She just ran like a bullet and then time slowed as I remember that time when I watched the amazing world of gumball. Gumball’s mom shot forward and missed as she ran into a brick wall. I wish that happened. I was charged through a brick wall. It hurt way too much. I even coughed up blood. It was lucky I was still breathing as I lay on the rubble of the broken brick.

“What da fuq just happened?” asked my ghost bud.

“YOU!” Fluttershy yelled at Alisa.” Why does he love you and not me? I had to force him. I had to cancel out my nice side from taking over. And my name is Flutterbat. ”

“Ha, ha, ha little ducky’s” I mumble at my spinning hallucination.

“Magic, No fare.” Flutterbat says with evil intent. Everything got quiet. I finally sit up to see the situation. Oh crap. Not good.

Flutterbat was staring at Vixy the filly while she was in the alicorn’s magic. Everyone else just watched and looked at Flutterbat’s huge eyes. Still doing what any- you know what, not any person would do this to poor Flutter-whatever. I charged and tackled her and held her down while looking away.

“Thanks Jake.” Vixy thanked me happily. I regretted opening my eyes and found a very cute and pouty Fluttershy face. Her iris’ wasn’t red so that was a good sign.

“Only I can control you. Not Flutterbat. Come here I need to feed.” Fluttershy commanded. I did as mistress wanted and she drank happily. “That should keep me from turning deadly again.”

I sighed and rubbed my hand across my frazzled hair that I haven’t combed.

“I wish this was easy. Lets see an easy reference to put this. Tobi from Naruto?” I said to the group.

“No” All, but Fluttershy, said.

“Boo.” With that random word from a bush, Fluttershy jumped. Whatever was inside the bush and came out. It just so happened to be another filly.

“What the?” I mumbled.

“What is this? Aren’t you supposed to get back to the hive so you can heal?” Alisa said forcefully.

“Yes my queen, but we were invaded by a rival hive. Her name is Chrysalis.” He said in anger.

“Let’s go.” After Alisa said this, they all ran off while I just waited beside Fluttershy.

“What would you like to do mistress?” I ask because I couldn’t do much without her allowing me to do it.

“Let’s go and help fight. We could train while were at it.”