Rainbow Dash, the Spartan

by Lord Mackeroth

First published

This story is based off the "classic" My Little Dashie story. This is for the More Most Dangerous Game competition, where authors were asked to revamp one of the "classic" fan fictions. I chose to move the setting to Ancient Greece and have none other than King Leonidas be the one to raise Rainbow. The idea initially sounded ridiculous to me too, but it made more sense to me the more I wrote the story. The story moves from Heroic Verse (the same type of over-grand verse featuring an abundance of epithets and too many variations of the word "mighty" used in The Iliad and The Odyssey) to regular prose, depending on the needs of the story- mainly how the characters are "viewing" the events taking place in their minds. Also, a lot of the weird (obviously not the plainly wrong- of which I hope there is none) sentence structure and peculiar phrasing in the Heroic Verse is intentional, as it is an attempt to emulate the style.