EX-ATLAS in Equestria

by ReapersinMLP

Rewriting First chapter.

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Hi my name is John! My last name isn't important and I want to cut to the chase. I use to be in "ATLAS" use to be one of the largest PMC fighting force on earth, well not anymore since the entire world went against us. Ever since I heard about the thousands of deaths the Americans had, by the biochemical attack, I left ATLAS with my Armor along with several different stuff, such as, my EM1, Smart Grenades, secondary grenades, and a MORS Railgun for long distance shots.

My Story begins when I got teleported to Equestria, in the middle of the forest.

Ugh, my head. What happened? I thought as I looked around. I continued when I checked my gear. I got everything I need. EM1 full battery... Wait a minute that sign... doesn't show power.. It looks like its infinite power. Well that's good luck for me, Alright lets see here.

I checked I had all clips and grenades from my desertion, I shot off a few bullets and my "HUD" checked that it did not change a single bit. I chuckled at the thought of infinite ammo. I was thankful everything came out okay other than being knocked out.

*SNAP*

I snapped up my EM1 looking through my holographic sights completely looking in a circle checking for any thermal signatures. I was spinning slowly in circles until I got to a spot where six thermal signatures appeared. I now know I'm being watched by something, I pretended to ignore that they are there, letting them think I didn't see them.

----{Twilight's POV}----

"That thing almost saw us, but luckily it didn't." I said watching it walk towards the bush row to our right. I continued talking with my friends. "We need to report to Celestia that there is an Unknown creature walking around in the everfree."

"I think we can take it on!" Rainbow Dash said.

"Ah' think we must not do that Rainbow Dash, We don know what it does exactly." AppleJack said

"She's right, Rainbow. I mean look at that thing. What ever it is needs a new look." Rarity said.

"Come on Girls lets get back to my Castle." Twilight Said. Turning around,

Me and the girls started for the edge of the everfree, Fluttershy started telling us that she's been getting a feeling that somepony is watching them, strange because I feel it too.

----{John's POV}----

Thank god I gotten this cloak! I knew it would come in handy. I thought, following the creatures.

It didn't take long for the trip to the edge of this forest ended, I still followed them, Following them into this strange town they had.

{Couple minutes Later}

Ponies.... Everywhere, This must be the round up area. For Fuck sakes where is this plac--- okay never mind now I know what we are heading towards. I thought as I and the ponies walked to the doors.

"This is getting weird, I keep having this feeling like something or somepony is watching us." The Purple one said

"Yea, what's going on?" cyan one with Rainbow hair said.

"You think it might be the creature?" The Marshmellow One said.

"No, we left it at the Everfree. Remember?" Purple one said again

"Oh yea, now I remember." The White pony said

We entered the castle and the Purple one yelled out " SPIIIIIKE!!!!" the Purple one said

"Yes Twilight?" a voice said, I looked down to see a Purple lizard standing in front of twilight, Now that I know her name.

"Take a Letter to Princess Celestia." Twilight said, I watched-Uhhh Spike saluted and pull out a quill and a piece of paper.

Twilight said her letter verbally so that Spike could right it down, couple seconds later spike blew flames at the paper which engulfed it entirely

"What a waste of paper." I said, then I noticed I said it out loud.

---{Twilight's POV}------

"What a waste of paper." a voice sounded, I froze at my spot along with my friends, I decided to turn around so I whipped around only to see nothing.

"Girls? Did any of you say something?" I said. My friends oh shook their heads in disagreement, "I don't like this one bit." I said, a frown forming on my face.

" Me neither!" Rainbow Dash said

A flash of light showed and appeared Celestia, Luna, and 12 Royal Guards. "Twilight, I received your letter on some unknown creature. Can you please describe it?" Celestia said.

"The Creature is Bipedal, and is completely made out of metal, along with carrying some sort of metal clubs." I explained.

"Diamond Dogs?" Luna said.

"No, this creature has no claws, no fur, no muzzle." I said

*GLASS BREAKS*

The Guards stood attention with their spears drowned to ready stance. "Show your self!" Celestia said.

There was a long silence after Celestia said something, I started to get nervous a bit. Nothing happened for a few minutes then Celestia finally broke silence. "I'm leaving this guards here with you Twilight, What ever it was got scared and is most likely hiding in your castle

John's POV

Shit, I need to be careful. Breaking glass won't help.

I saw two set, opening it I see these ponies and two taller ponies. "I'm leaving the guards here with you Twilight, What ever it was it got scared and is most likely hiding in your castle." The tall white pony said.

Damn! now I have to deal with soldiers. Maybe I should show my self, I don't want to cause any more trouble as it is.

I stepped towards the ponies, my boot on the other hand had to be a bitch sometimes. The ponies shot their heads up, even the two tall ponies and the guards.

Fucking boots! Note to self.. Metal boots and crystal do not match.

"What was that?" the cyan pony said

"Please tell your guards to lower the weapons." I said to them "I need help finding where I am."

"Show your self and we will tell you." the tall pony said.

I turned off my cloak, only to be encircled by guards.

"I thought I said to have your guards stand down." I said

"We don't know if your dangerous or not, there is no way you're going to be this close to the princesses!" a certain guard in purple armor yelled.

"Only to my enemies, I am dangerous and right now your trying to make this "creature" and enemy to your nation! That you have never dealt with me before!" I yelled back

"Shining armor. Stand down I want to have a friendly talk with.. I'm sorry but your name?" the tall pony said

"I'm not telling you my actual name, so I'm going to go by Viper, from what my squad and other soldiers alike called me." I said

"I'm Princess Celestia co-ruler of Equestria, along with my sister is Princess Luna." Celestia said.

"I'm Princess Twilight Sparkle, and these five are my friends." Twilight said pointing at the others. "Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie, Rainbow Dash, AppleJack, and Rarity."

"Um, sorry if this question may seem rude to you but are those metal bars part of your body?" Fluttershy asked.

"No. Our Exos are not apart of our body." I said. "Its human technology for soldiers."

That's when I noticed everyone getting really quiet. I'm not liking this one bit.


Author's Note

I'm sorry if it might seem rushed, I had very little time though, SORRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I hope you like, and if you dislike please leave a comment, and if there any Misspells I will Fix! or any other grammar Fails (Which I'm guessing there are a lot for being rushed)

I hope you like it, and have fun!