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Hail to the Queen

by Snowfeather
That day…everything changed. Princess Twilight Sparkle became our Queen. I’ve heard rumors she’s been having trouble holding onto power. But it’s not from a resistance or an outside threat. It's from her friends.

That day…everything changed. Princess Twilight Sparkle became our Queen. I’ve heard rumors she’s been having trouble holding onto power. But it’s not from a resistance or an outside threat.
It's from her friends.

Rarity looked down at the logs on her desk. Sure enough, everypony had taken care of their pets, exercised, and gone to sleep at the right time. But she knew some of them were lying. At first, Twilight's idea of monitoring everypony's lives seemed like a good one. Now, Rarity wasn't so sure.
Twilight was still hurting. She wasn't seeing clearly what she was doing to Equestria.

Inspired by the song 'Hail to the Queen' by navybrony.


Author's Note:
Please keep in mind that I was in the seventh grade when I wrote this.
Edited by: Tamil Tiger, Alai20
New chapters will be posted every Sunday.
Please, please, please post any grammatical errors and punctuation errors I made. That helps a lot!

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My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
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16800 words: Estimated about 1 hour to read

7 Chapters:

  1. Chapter 1-Status Quo 2015-01-12 00:47:51 UTC
    5024
  2. Chapter 2-The Cruelest Monster 2015-01-18 19:01:56 UTC
  3. Chapter 3-Dining with the Queen 2015-01-26 01:39:10 UTC
    2540
  4. Chapter 4-Intended or Accident 2015-02-02 01:01:52 UTC
    2294
  5. Chapter 5-From Death to Life 2015-02-09 02:10:08 UTC
    2934
  6. Chapter 6-The Reply to the Plea 2015-02-15 20:28:15 UTC
    2346
  7. Chapter 7-Aftermath 2015-02-23 03:03:27 UTC
    1662