lyra goes to the mall

a/n I'd really like it if youd read and review plaese! i'm a new writer so don't be too hard on me okay? i don't knew how much works i am new on the site!!!!

lyra was super excited cause she was going to th e mall today to meet her frind carrot top. they wer gonna pick out new clothes and everythin! if lyra got to mae her first pikc she'd get some coool black swweater and cool black shoes, which would be funny for her to where shince she's a pony and doesn't have any feert!! but she was most ecited because she was havign a slumber party afterwords and was super exceited for that too!!! "i'm gonna go to the mall now" Lyra cried out.

she wudl have dorve ponys don't have cars so she couldn'yt drive, silly!!!

so she galloped as fsast as she casue she was late! she was suppoesd to be there at 12 m, but she got lost cause her got lost in trhe busy is strets! but eventuLly lyra got to the mall safe and sound as was super happy becuase caerrot top was there alreasy! they were gonas pick out new shoes which is funny cause they have hooves nowt feett!!11!

but then som ething happended! nightmare moon popped in ewith a laoud POP SOUND.

HAHAHA she laughed like a crazy pony. "i want the shoeds for myslef and you cns't stoip me!!

oh yeah? said lyra and she punched midnightr mon in the face, which is funny cause she doesn't have any hands!!!

oew nightmare mmonn sayed, im gonna get yew fere that. she kicked lyra in thed cface, or she woudl've but carrot top totally jumped in the way and blocked it!!!1 she's so awesmE! like rainbowd dahs, but i didn'it want to include her in theis sotry.

carrot top nooooooooooo!!!! lyra was sad because carrot top gave up her life for her! this ws most horrible!

ima gonne getch you nightmare moon if its the last thing i do! cried lyra! but she couldn't cry! she had to be strong foer carort top!

just try and catch me! nightmare mon laugherd manicacly! and he flew away with all teh sheos! that was even wordse cuase she disdn't have feret so she couldn'yt do anything wit them!

i've gotta save those shoes for the hope of euqestria! vcries lyra!

she had tot go on an epicc quest. first she went to the diamond dogs to grt back the elemsents of harmony they stole!

thten she went to pny ville whrre she lived. sjhe didn't get olst this time.

twilght!! she shouted. i neded your help

what is it? twiligth asked. "is it nightmare mon?"

yes. said lyra

gueess we better stop her. twilight said. it's gonabe along day said lyra. butit wasn't a long day it was a long  night  cause nightmanre maon stolde all da sjhoes and made it nihgt time! all the time! :(

they firt had to croos a rickety old bridge and tiwlight sadi no worries! ill teleport us acroos! and she did.

thenm they came to a hugemonguous river. and teilight said no worries! ill teleport us across! and she idd.

then they enc oujntered a huge scary monuster! and twilight said now worrie! ill telepotr us acroosss! And she did. twilight is super smart!

finally they wre at

duh duh duh!

nightmare moons cstle! is ws big and black and had towers that were supe long! its so scary i can hardly ttytpe it!

then something awful happened! nightmare moon flew out and she stoeld twiglight!!!

noooooooooooooo!!!@1! twilight shouted! it was awful! how was lyrea goning to teleport now?!!??

luckliy lyra super secret is that shes an alicorn, and she grew wings and honr right on the spot!

then she teleported into the castle. first she had to beat up a giant mutanyt bear that was made of astars!!! (this bear isd completly original and i difd not compy it from the show at all so shut up !) lyras used her magic to blast the besrt in the fface. but lyra is the nicest pony in the wrold so she spologixzed to the bear for what shed done.

im sory for blasting you in the face. shdee said.

its okay said thre bear. i totally hasd it coming . andf they were super best friends from that day onwards! the bar let lyra riedon her back and thy broke into nightmare rooms throne rorom byu kicking doewn her door. it hurt cause the didn't h ave any shoes to where sinec midnight mon hadstolen them all.

ouch lyra sadid. the bear said ouch too

beary!!!! midnight mon scemed. why are you helpoing this stopid pony?

beary? lyra laughed. beary is sunch a silly name!

dont laugh said beary. that is mean.

im sorry sadi lyra. and she really meant it! they had a hug to show they were sotrry.

thats stupid midnight mon said. you ar both stupid! i dont need amy friensd, i just need shoes1

this is funy cause ponies dont actually wear shoes! silly moon!

have you ever had a  riend? asked lyra. she ws a mazed cause everyone hasd freinds!

id ont need firedns! i neverhad one! nightmare mon creid.

what if i was your firend? said lyra?

would you rely be my friednd? nightmare nmon cried.

yes saisd lyra.

hoortay! cheered nioghtmare mon.

but then in a canterloot celsetia was all pouty. nonone is goin to have any fireds but me!! she wined. (ireally really hate celstia, so she s going ot be the eivl person in my astorty)

ehat's goint to happen? is celestia gonna send lyra to the moon? is she goona send nightmare mon to the mon? or even worse is SHEGONA STEAL ALL FO DA SHES FER HERSELF?!!!!!!??? (its funy cause pony s don't wrhe shoes, and the princess doesnt need to steel dem shre can just buy them!!!

but celstia is all like grrrr.

also carrot top survidved cause i really like carrot top and idf she died id be al OH NOES CARROT TO PWHY DID I KEEL YOU?!

anyway THE END

... OR IS IT DUN DUN DUN?

(no it isn't im gonna right another chapter maybe)

a/n thnks fer reading! i know this is short but i'll right more in the nesxt chapter!