Rainbow Factory Condemned: The ending.

by TheBlazingPony
After the fillie gets captured in the Rainbow Factory, some strange, hooded figure comes to save him.

After reading Rainbow Factory Condemned, by LordCarn, I felt that the ending wasn't sufficient enough, so here is my extra bit that I felt was needed to do the ending some justice.

This is ultimately my own creation, although it picks of where RFC left off and is a much happier ending than the original. I do not intend to carry this on in second person as it would ruin the whole perspective of the story.

So I give to you, the people of FIMFiction, my ending to Rainbow Factory Condemned by LordCarn.

Teen
Incomplete
Adventure
Human
Gore
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Dark
Alternate Universe
Romance
Tragedy
 
DDROO

1166 words: Estimated 6 minutes to read

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