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A Deeper Change

by TheKissoftheVoid
Twilight awakens to find herself in the clutches of Queen Chrysalis, who plans to use the alicorn to further her own ends. Her method of turning Twilight, however, is one that nopony could have expected.

Over five years have past since Queen Chrysalis and her changelings attempted to conquer Canterlot. Since then, nothing but rumors and the odd drone have ever been found, and between the Crystal Empire, the return of Tirek, and the crowning of Equestria's newest princess, the changeling threat has been largely forgotten.
The changelings, however, have not forgotten, and after half a decade of watching from the shadows, Chrysalis is finally ready to strike once again. However, she won't make the mistake of invading openly, as she has in the past. Years of observation have shown her the key, and with that in mind she sets her cross-hairs on the one pony she hadn't accounted for in her first attack: Princess Twilight Sparkle.
What her plans are for the young alicorn, however, are something that nopony could have forseen.

*EDIT* Featured? Featured? GAH! Thank you so much to all of you who've read and liked this!

The first chapter of this will not contain any sexually explicit material. Some heavy kissing, maybe, but nothing more. The second chapter will be purely cloptional and is not necessary to understand the story.
Speaking of clop, this is my first time ever writing it, so any tips or constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated.

Editing by Setokaiva

Warning: Contains some mind control, forced emotional manipulation, and a fairly twisted kind of romance. If that disturb ye, go n'further!

Incomplete
Dark
Alternate Universe
Drama
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Romance
Sex
 
QT

22721 words: Estimated about 2 hours to read

2 Chapters:

  1. Struggling in the Queen's Clutches 2015-01-28 11:15:32 UTC
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  2. Squirming in the Queen's Embrace (cloptional) 2015-03-07 01:04:13 UTC
    7162